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Post by rattyjol 5/29/2010, 12:11 am

Maturity: I don't really know yet... There shouldn't be too much, right, Shad? Except for killing (mostly by heart attacks), of course...
Fantasy: Well, Death Notes... Shinigami... etcetera. nod

So, as you can see, Shadow and I decided to collaborate on a Death Note fanficcy... POVs will change throughout the story, but it'll stay in third person. It's a completely alternate universe, as you'll find out in the prologue. So, yeah. Very Happy Enjoy.


Prologue [by Ratty]
Light Yagami rested his cheek in his palm, gazing absently out the window of his senior year English classroom at the lawn that separated his school from some office buildings across the way. His gaze swept across the deserted courtyard that in only - he glanced at the clock above the classroom door - eleven minutes would be flooded with ninth, tenth, and eleventh graders happy to be done with school for the day, and seniors preparing for an afternoon of studying for their college entrance exams before an evening spent at Gamou Prep Academy.
As Light watched, a small notebook began to fall from the sky. But that couldn't be, could it? It had to have been dropped from an upper story window. Light had almost convinced himself of that when he realized that it was way out in the middle of the courtyard, too far to have been thrown. He frowned slightly.
A notebook appearing from nowhere and falling out of the sky? I’ll go look at it after class.

The last minutes of school seemed to tick by even more slowly than the minutes before, if that were possible. But finally the shrill sound of the end-of-school bell echoed through the narrow hallways and the scrape of chairs being pushed back as students rushed to pack their bags and get out was all around. Light stood as well, ready to follow, but his teacher called him back.
“Yagami-san, I’d like to speak to you.”
Light turned and walked up to the front of the room, silently hoping that no one else had seen the notebook fall. “Yes?”
“You’re still the top of the class, but you won’t be if you stop paying attention,” she told him sternly. “I’ll be watching you tomorrow.”
“O - okay,” he responded, slightly startled. He’d never been told off at school before.
She dismissed him with a wave of her hand and he left, hurrying down to the courtyard and making his way through the crowds of students to the place where the notebook had landed.
There was nothing there. He looked around; maybe he’d been mistaken about where it had fallen?
But no, that girl there. She had a notebook under her arm, slim and black, like the one he’d seen fall. He started after her, then paused and thought it over before turning away and starting the long walk home.
It didn’t matter.

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Table of contents:
Prologue [by Ratty] - Page 1, post 1
Chapter 1 [by Shadow] - Page 2, post 1
Chapter 2 [by Ratty] - Page 2, post 5
Chapter 3 [by Shadow] - Page 3, post 3
Chapter 4 [by Ratty] - Page 3, post 7


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Post by shadowsowner888 5/29/2010, 11:54 am

Wow, Ratty, this is such a genius story that I've totally never seen or heard of before I really love it won't you write more? Very Happy

Just kidding. applause

I WILL WRITE THE NEXT BITTY . . . sooooooon. nod
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Post by rattyjol 5/29/2010, 2:54 pm

Haha. xD Okie dokies, I shall be waiting. nod
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 5/31/2010, 5:14 pm

Duuuuudes. This is AWESOME.

Is this what would happen if Light didn't find the notebook?
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Post by rattyjol 5/31/2010, 5:17 pm

Thanks, Amanda. Very Happy

Um... partly. nod I think for now, at least, though, we're just using it as an excuse to not have certain characters die... Right, Shadow?
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 5/31/2010, 6:51 pm

Your welcome.

xD, nice. Well, anyway, I like it.
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/31/2010, 7:20 pm

Yep, that's right. ^^ Since the focus of the story isn't going to be on Light, really, this is just an excuse. Or it may be about him at some point, but we're not really sure about the details yet. xD
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Post by rattyjol 5/31/2010, 7:27 pm

Exactly. nod So, Shadow. -ahem- When's that next chapter coming? xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/31/2010, 7:27 pm

I'll work on it right now. ^^ I'll send it to you for review tomorrow!
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Post by rattyjol 5/31/2010, 7:28 pm

Yayyy. Very Happy I shall be waiting. nod
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/1/2010, 12:35 am

Chapter 1 [by The Muffin Man - just kidding, by Shadow]
“Mello?”

“I’m thinking.”

Halle opened her lips slightly, an anxious look lighting on her face, but then she decided against speaking. Instead she let out a quiet sigh, her heart squeezing as she examined the tightness of the fingers clasped before Mello’s mouth. He hadn’t been himself for several days now . . . altogether too quiet, so unlike the Mello she knew. He wasn’t even grumbling about Near like he used to . . . he just sat around, like this, the determined, lost-in-thought look never leaving his eyes.

Several minutes slid by, the ticking of a clock in the room matching her heartbeat: faster than it should have been, and heavily foreboding. Halle never took her eyes off Mello’s face, and he in turn never left the world that was his mind. Halle did her best to pick up something from his expression, anything at all, but the only things she could sense were his shallow breathing and a faint smell of chocolate . . . soft and fresh and foreboding, everything that Mello’s mood was not.

But then Mello finally cut through the silence. Not a part of him moved but his lips as he spoke. “What’s even the point?” Heavy disgust dominated his tone, and Halle was helpless to her curiosity.

“What do you mean?” Her eyes, so capable of being hard and emotionless, now filled with an uncharacteristic level of concern. Mello was the only one on earth who ever experienced Halle when she was at her softest.

“Roger trains Near and myself and all the others. But why? What purpose do we serve? Even if we are meant to succeed L, how are we going to make any sort of difference in the world?” Mello exhaled heavily. “No matter what, people won’t change. We’re never going to make the world a better place, so why even bother?”

Halle looked down, blinking a few times and hoping Mello wouldn’t notice her sudden sorrow. Why indeed? “Maybe it’s just better than joining all those criminals,” she whispered, a tremble hidden in the words.

Mello only snorted, and that just made Halle feel uneasier, like a small spark igniting in her bloodstream.

“Mello . . . just forget about it,” she advised quietly, slowly reaching out a hand and resting it on his well-toned shoulder. He at last turned to look at her, eyes wide as if almost appalled she would suggest such a thing. It made Halle worry even more . . . had she said the wrong thing? But then the relief came as Mello’s expression relaxed.

Her anxiety had faded too soon, however. “Halle, I . . . can’t.” Her heart convulsed at the suddenly anguished look he wore. “But I’ve already made up my mind.”

“Oh?” she replied, struggling to keep her tone light.

“I’m leaving. To look.”

“For what?”

Mello hesitated, as if even he weren’t certain. “My purpose.”
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Post by •○•[Lemon-Licious]•○• 6/3/2010, 3:39 pm

Very good! Write more!
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/3/2010, 5:00 pm

I'm glad you like it so far! applause There should be a new part soon. Ratty's written, but I haven't reviewed it yet, so as soon as that gets taken care of she can put it up. :3
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Post by rattyjol 6/3/2010, 8:28 pm

I'm glad too! Very Happy And yep, I have it, but I don't have time to post it till later. Razz
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Post by rattyjol 6/5/2010, 5:10 am

Gyahh. Sorry, forgot. Razz

Chapter 2 [by Ratty]
The rec room had been specially stocked for each of the three top Wammy boys: toys for Near, chocolate for Mello, and, of course, video games for Matt. There were other rec rooms, in a different part of the building, but this one was specific to the three of them, because they were the three most likely to succeed L. Robert’s idea was that having a room with each of their favorite things would simulate their synapses and improve brain functions. Or something like that. Matt wasn’t so sure, but he had his Xbox, so he wasn’t complaining. The only regret he had was that he wasn’t allowed to smoke - he’d tried it once, and loved it, but Robert wouldn’t let him. Not that that stopped him; he just stepped out for a puff or two whenever he felt like it.
He glanced over at Near, who was busy systematically putting together a 1000-piece puzzle. “No,” the younger boy said, without even looking up. “Go find Mello if you want to play Call of Duty.”
Matt set down his wireless controller, getting to his feet and leaving the rec room. He walked down the hall, towards the room he and Mello had used to share until a few years before, when A and B, having snapped under the pressure of living up to L, had committed suicide and run off to become a serial killer in Los Angeles, respectively.
Just as he rounded the corner, the door swung open, and Mello stepped out, a bulging backpack slung over his shoulder, looking around furtively as if he didn’t want to be seen. Matt quickly ducked back behind the corner, hoping Mello hadn’t noticed him. A moment later, the tall, pale boy walked past, down the hall, his eyes fixed straight ahead.
Where is he going? Matt wondered. He weighed the pros and cons of following: If Mello noticed, it would not be a pretty thing (Matt could just picture Mello tearing him limb from limb with one hand while unwrapping a chocolate bar with the other), but on the other hand, he really wanted to know what he was up to...
It’ll be just like Spy vs. Spy, Matt decided, smiling at the thought of one of his favorite games. He slipped his signature orange goggles down over his eyes and crept down the hall after his friend.
Mello maneuvered silently through the halls, somehow managing to avoid meeting anybody on the way. Matt followed, equally quietly. His suspicions that Mello was up to something only grew stronger as they drew closer to the rear of the large building. Sure enough, when he got there, Mello ran his hands over the wall and found the cracks in the paneling that, if you applied pressure in a certain place, made an entire two-by-three piece section of the gray-painted wall pop out, revealing a small crawlspace that led out of the building in a secret escape route. Watari had shown it to them when they were younger, under L’s instructions, in case they ever had to escape. Of course, they had been a lot smaller then.
Mello leaned the detached portion against the wall and pulled himself up into the crawlspace, rapidly disappearing into the darkness of the narrow metal shaft. Matt counted off two minutes and then followed. Matt being less slim than Mello, it was a bit squished, but he was determined to follow and find out what his friend was up to.
When he emerged on the other side of the wall several minutes later, blinking in the bright sunlight despite his tinted goggles, Mello was waiting for him, his bag by his feet, slender arms crossed over an equally slim chest. “Matt,” he said curtly.
Matt smiled sheepishly. “Er... Hi.”
“You want to come with me.” It wasn’t a question.
“Yes,” Matt replied, even though he had no idea where Mello was going. He climbed out of the shaft and straightened up, almost as tall as Mello.
“Did you eavesdrop on us?” Mello was starting to get angry now; Matt could see it.
Us? Matt wondered. “No,” he replied quickly.
“Yes you did,” Mello snapped. “You think this is just like one of your video games, don’t you?”
“Um...”
Mello turned away. “Fine, then. Come with me. Both of us know L is going to choose Near to succeed him anyway.” He picked up his bag, slung it over his shoulder, and strode away, towards the road. Matt didn’t even hesitate. He hurried after his friend, his only regret that he hadn’t thought to bring his Nintendo DS along.
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 6/5/2010, 12:39 pm

Haha, I like that last line.

his only regret that he hadn’t thought to bring his Nintendo DS along.

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Post by shadowsowner888 6/5/2010, 1:22 pm

Wow, Ratty, what a delightful chapter! applause (Just pretend like I haven't seen it already. XD)

I liked that line too, Twarry. ^^
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Post by rattyjol 6/5/2010, 2:26 pm

Me too. Very Happy
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 6/5/2010, 11:45 pm

*sits and waits for more*
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Post by rattyjol 6/6/2010, 12:29 am

It's Shadow's turn to write. And I PMed her my ideas for the next chapter literally seconds after she logged off, so IDK when it's gonna be... -.-
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/6/2010, 1:02 pm

All right, well, as I told Ratty, the latest I'm able to get it up should be Tuesday . . . my schedule of free time is unpredictable sometimes, so I don't know anything for sure, but I'll do my best to at least have written it tonight. ^^
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 6/6/2010, 2:07 pm

Okay. ^^
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/7/2010, 10:01 pm

Chapter 3 [by Kumo the Sumo . . . okay, fine, Shadow]

L hesitated, his fingers hoving over the button . . . then he pressed it. “Watari . . . how are they doing at Wammy’s house?”

“Well, L, there’ve been some complications,” the old man began, not a trace of reluctance in his voice. That was the nice thing about Watari - you could always count on him to easily tell the truth, when it was needed. “It appears that Mello and Matt have disappeared.”

“I see. And Near? How is he doing?”

“Near is safe and sound in the orphanage like always.”

“Very well. Thank you, Watari.” L released the button and took a sip of coffee, loaded with sugar. So it appears that Near really is the only suitable candidate to succeed L. It’s unlikely that Mello and Matt simply ‘disappeared,’ after all, if Near is really as safe as Watari says . . . Almost without realizing it, L raised a thumb to his mouth while he thought. That proves that Mello and Matt have a very poor sense of responsibility, or at the least simply aren’t suited to this lifestyle . . . I suppose we can simply stop worrying about them.

Once again, though they reached out, L’s fingers simply didn’t want to press the button. He knew very well what this new information entailed. Near, Mello, and Matt were the three smartest children in Wammy’s House by far, even considering that all those living there were above the average. Taking Matt and Mello out of the picture left him with one simple choice - naming Near as the future successor of L.

But what if Near isn’t the right one, either . . . ? With this thought, L’s fingerips at last returned to the top of his knee. Wammy wouldn’t be hearing any decisions quite yet. After all, we haven’t had a chance to test his behavior thoroughly. Perhaps we should wait, see if he reacts negatively to Matt and Mello’s performance . . . ? L just couldn’t fight the nagging feeling that maybe Wammy’s House was a mistake after all. In the end, maybe he was just worrying that the right successor to L’s name wasn’t even going to come from Wammy’s House, that all they were doing by raising these children was wasting their time. The successor could come from anywhere . . . no need to jump into a decision like this.

But outside of Wammy’s house, there simply hasn’t been anyone that begins to come close . . . it’s because those at Wammy’s house were raised for ingenuity. It wasn’t automatic. It’s simply impossible.

Still, though, L wouldn’t press the button.

I suppose I’ll just decide later. He quietly sighed, then turned on his computer to access the files of the latest popular police cases. Though crime rates certainly weren’t decreasing, the cases all seemed to be getting more and more pointless. A woman in America whose money was stolen by a con artist . . . interesting, considering the fact that the scammer got the money by calling it cursed, claiming that they would ‘cleanse it of evil spirits.’ But it wasn’t a case worth helping with; the police would probably be able to find the culprit without any problems. None of the other cases were any more interesting; if anything, this one was more so than all the rest.

Sighing again, L closed the window and just sat there. Why is there never anything interesting to do . . . ? Suddenly he was almost wishing that he could run off like Mello and Matt; at least then he could have some excitement. But no . . . he had to stay here. He was L, after all; there was no way he could go off and abandon the world when they could need his assistance at any moment.

Well, at any rate, maybe I’ll go out for ice cream, L decided, slowly rising to his feet. Yes . . . mint chocolate chip sounds very good right about now.


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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 6/7/2010, 10:06 pm

The first part made me laugh-Kumo the Sumo. xDD

And then the chapter was awesome. :3
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Post by rattyjol 6/7/2010, 10:37 pm

applause Bravo, Shadow!

...Because I've never read it before. Yepyep. nod
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