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Post by FOREIGN?! 7/3/2010, 6:32 pm

    Give me some chinese food and instrumental indie music, and this is what you get. disappearing


He burned inside, numbing the pain
He tried to take his breath away
Though he wished and died inside
The thoughts he kept, they never lied

Praying for another light
Someone to keep him whole at night
He stared to the sky, screaming pleas
Though they all left him on his knees

A lonely drum, a silent beat
Kept tune with his heart's defeat
Dimmed street lights and planets aligned
Keeping the memory of lives entwined

A foolish grin, a hopeless case
That's all he wanted to erase
One night of joy, infinite pain
Took reality and drove it insane

Secrets told, and then undone
The only solution was to run
The end was quick, daunting fate
He finally took his breath away
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Post by Avé 7/4/2010, 10:45 am

Linkage, please? :3

Aw, this one is so amazing, Forrey. ♥
A lonely drum, a silent beat
Kept tune with his heart's defeat
I love it!
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Post by Puckspaw 7/4/2010, 4:26 pm

That's absolutely amazing, Forrey! I love this so much. nod
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Post by FOREIGN?! 7/5/2010, 6:30 pm

Aw, thanks, guys! Very Happy

~Ave: I forget which song it was, something about explosives, I think. ._.
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Post by Novastare 7/5/2010, 8:56 pm

I love this one so much Forry. It tells a haunting tale, and yet it's beautiful. The setting gives you a picture of sadness and release, love it!
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/6/2010, 7:58 am

One night of joy, infinite pain
Took reality and drove it insane

^ my favorite line! i love it so much!

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Post by FOREIGN?! 7/6/2010, 11:25 am

Thanks a lot! :3
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/6/2010, 12:09 pm

no prob! by the way i love your siggy's text.. its part of one of my fav songs!


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Post by FOREIGN?! 7/6/2010, 2:52 pm

Why thank you, Keith Urban FTW! Very Happy I love your siggy, it holds 12 of the most gorgeous faces I've ever seen. smitten
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/6/2010, 4:51 pm

XD gotta love Johnny!!!!
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