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Post by Pollytoad 11/25/2009, 9:11 pm

Maturity: none
Fantasy: none



A shadow falls
A chill is in the air
Thunder rumbles in the distant
Large raindrops begin to fall
here and there
The wind blows
The trees sway
A flash of lightning
Illuminates the sky
As a storm blows by
I close my eyes
And let the cold air fill my hair
The rain comes down in heavy sheets
Still I stay
In a Storm

<3

It's Funny. I thought of this poem while reading my science book. =3



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Post by shadowsowner888 11/25/2009, 10:36 pm

Awww. It makes it seem like it's about some girl who just got dumped . . . :3 Haha, this is the second poem tonight I've read that reminds me of my current spot in Shadow Souls. xD I love it!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/26/2009, 1:35 am

Oooh, that's awesome! In a Storm Icon_smile
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Post by rattyjol 11/26/2009, 5:01 am

OMG, weird... I read the title just as the line "With you I'd dance in a storm" came up in the song Fearless. o.0

Anyway, awesome! Very Happy
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Post by LuckyPenny666 11/26/2009, 1:30 pm

Great poem! Smile
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Post by Pollytoad 11/26/2009, 7:32 pm

Thank you, everyone!! In a Storm 176497
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/27/2009, 11:02 am

Swelcome! Very Happy
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