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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 10/17/2009, 2:14 pm



Note: I have finished this poem Wink
Maturity: well, low level of maturity Smile needed. Its not violent or hard romance Wink
Fantasy: None, I guess

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Bright days
Sunny sky
Everyone is happy
But then a storm comes
Rolling in
The storm ruins everything
and everyone
The storm will always be there
In your mind
Even when it goes away
The storm can change moods
by going away and letting the sun come out
but it feels as though it never does
Storm, oh storm, please let the sun come out


I made this poem to mean different things, not only a storm, but what you think as a storm, such as school or parents Smile , so let your imagination run and think about what this poem means to you Very Happy


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Post by littletoes101 10/17/2009, 3:20 pm

Cool. i like it.
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 10/17/2009, 3:24 pm

Thank you Smile I'm glad you liked it Very Happy

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Post by shadowsowner888 10/18/2009, 10:37 am

For me, this means my stinking parents. >.>

Great job! xD
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 10/27/2009, 5:51 pm

Haha Smile

Thanks!

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Post by shadowsowner888 10/27/2009, 6:24 pm

Swelcome. Smile
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Post by LuckyPenny666 10/27/2009, 6:55 pm

You're poem is really good!
It's funny, because yesterday and today I wrote a poem that sounds kind of like it...XD
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/2/2009, 9:31 pm

Oh that's cool Smile

Thanks!!

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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/3/2009, 5:01 pm

Great job! I like how it's really open for interpretation. Very Happy
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Post by Mrs. Amazon E Cullen 11/4/2009, 10:02 pm

Thank you!!

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