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The Devil's Won

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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 6/14/2010, 1:17 am

Hey!

Maturity - Just fighting
Fantasy - None.


I'm not really sure why/when I wrote this. I knew it was last summer when I was having a pretty rough time... I'm mostly definitely sure that it was written to my friends who died or, maybe, to Monique. Honestly, I don't remember. And on that note, I'm glad, because I'm sure it would bring back a lot of bad memories... xD

I promised not to
And held your trust
Kept your secret
As if I must

But I broke away
And told a friend
Spoiled your secret
Before the end

Another person put down
One more life to screw around
Another trust that I've miss set
And you're not the last one, I bet

I made you mad
With dirty lies
But that's too bad
'Cause I won't rise

I didn't realize
What I'd done
Until the last
String was strung

I know I've made a huge mistake
I lost the trust I had to make
My dirty deed's already done
It's too late now, the devil's won

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Post by leah_hope92 6/14/2010, 1:37 am

:O That reminds me of so many mean ex-friends! Including Alley cat. :/

Anyhowm, it was a very very nice poem. xD applause
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Post by Mrs. Jessi O'Shea 6/14/2010, 1:49 am

Nicely done Emawemalie! That reminds me of my dad . . .
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Post by Avé 6/14/2010, 5:23 am

Em, this poem is wonderful. applause
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Post by Orodruin 6/14/2010, 3:16 pm

Really, really good ^^ excellent rhyming!

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Post by Rai 6/20/2010, 4:01 pm

This is brilliant: sad, but brilliant.
As Twi said, your rhyming && rhythm were really great! :3

applause Lovely job!
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 6/22/2010, 3:46 pm

Thanks guys!
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