The Devil's Won
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The Devil's Won
Hey!
Maturity - Just fighting
Fantasy - None.
I'm not really sure why/when I wrote this. I knew it was last summer when I was having a pretty rough time... I'm mostly definitely sure that it was written to my friends who died or, maybe, to Monique. Honestly, I don't remember. And on that note, I'm glad, because I'm sure it would bring back a lot of bad memories... xD
I promised not to
And held your trust
Kept your secret
As if I must
But I broke away
And told a friend
Spoiled your secret
Before the end
Another person put down
One more life to screw around
Another trust that I've miss set
And you're not the last one, I bet
I made you mad
With dirty lies
But that's too bad
'Cause I won't rise
I didn't realize
What I'd done
Until the last
String was strung
I know I've made a huge mistake
I lost the trust I had to make
My dirty deed's already done
It's too late now, the devil's won
Maturity - Just fighting
Fantasy - None.
I'm not really sure why/when I wrote this. I knew it was last summer when I was having a pretty rough time... I'm mostly definitely sure that it was written to my friends who died or, maybe, to Monique. Honestly, I don't remember. And on that note, I'm glad, because I'm sure it would bring back a lot of bad memories... xD
I promised not to
And held your trust
Kept your secret
As if I must
But I broke away
And told a friend
Spoiled your secret
Before the end
Another person put down
One more life to screw around
Another trust that I've miss set
And you're not the last one, I bet
I made you mad
With dirty lies
But that's too bad
'Cause I won't rise
I didn't realize
What I'd done
Until the last
String was strung
I know I've made a huge mistake
I lost the trust I had to make
My dirty deed's already done
It's too late now, the devil's won
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Re: The Devil's Won
:O That reminds me of so many mean ex-friends! Including Alley cat. :/
Anyhowm, it was a very very nice poem. xD
Anyhowm, it was a very very nice poem. xD
leah_hope92- Best-Selling Author
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Re: The Devil's Won
Nicely done Emawemalie! That reminds me of my dad . . .
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Re: The Devil's Won
Em, this poem is wonderful.
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Re: The Devil's Won
Really, really good ^^ excellent rhyming!
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Re: The Devil's Won
This is brilliant: sad, but brilliant.
As Twi said, your rhyming && rhythm were really great! :3
Lovely job!
As Twi said, your rhyming && rhythm were really great! :3
Lovely job!
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Re: The Devil's Won
Thanks guys!
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