Trials of a Villain
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Malicious Nightmares
Hyro201
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Trials of a Villain
Born from hate and despair
No one seems to care
Mother dies leaves you alone
Passed around for all to own
rise up against them all
Take pleasure in their gory fall
It was on this day
that you discovered the evil way
Many want to end your life
but they can get past your knife
you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams
you want the masses to die
hoping to see innocents cry
you gathered so much fame
that even Death fears your name
in the way of war you've become skilled
forgetting how many you killed
striving to block out light
creating an everlasting night
hero's wills bend
no longer able to defend
beat the knave
take him as your slave
you have an unholy desire
to set the world a fire
letting darkness take its toll
on your broken soul
Your words of malice
build your cursed palace
Might as well take a bow
because the world is yours now.
ok you might recognize this format from Trials of a Hero.
https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/poems-f7/trials-of-a-hero-t6271.htm
No one seems to care
Mother dies leaves you alone
Passed around for all to own
rise up against them all
Take pleasure in their gory fall
It was on this day
that you discovered the evil way
Many want to end your life
but they can get past your knife
you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams
you want the masses to die
hoping to see innocents cry
you gathered so much fame
that even Death fears your name
in the way of war you've become skilled
forgetting how many you killed
striving to block out light
creating an everlasting night
hero's wills bend
no longer able to defend
beat the knave
take him as your slave
you have an unholy desire
to set the world a fire
letting darkness take its toll
on your broken soul
Your words of malice
build your cursed palace
Might as well take a bow
because the world is yours now.
ok you might recognize this format from Trials of a Hero.
https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/poems-f7/trials-of-a-hero-t6271.htm
Last edited by Hyro201 on 7/12/2010, 6:11 pm; edited 1 time in total
Hyro201- Novelette Scribe
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Re: Trials of a Villain
As said on Twig, this is well worth a million Mia smileys. (:
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Re: Trials of a Villain
Thank you mia.
Hyro201- Novelette Scribe
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*-* Oh my gosh, this is absolutely stunning. I loved it all, but this line is especially pure genius:
"you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams"
Brilliant work, Hyro.
"you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams"
Brilliant work, Hyro.
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Woah. *-*
This is seriously amazing, Hyro. Absolutely stunning, brilliant job.
This is seriously amazing, Hyro. Absolutely stunning, brilliant job.
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Re: Trials of a Villain
Thank you both. *sighs sadly* I just wish i had posted this on a better day.
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Re: Trials of a Villain
very good i love this! its epical!
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Hyro201 wrote:Thank you both. *sighs sadly* I just wish i had posted this on a better day.
You know, I hate to say this but..
I may need you to help me improve my own poetry. O,---,o
[Now, let's make that smiley's eye fall off. XD]
O,---,
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Marvelous! ^3^
Re: Trials of a Villain
Mia I doubt there is much I could help you with. You already know how to be a great poem writer.
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i wouldn't be much help since my style of writing poems is just sit down and wait for somethign to pop into my head. I usually don't really try. I just get an urge to write something down and expand on it.
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Well, I guess i could help alittle.
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