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Trials of a Villain

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Post by Hyro201 7/12/2010, 1:52 pm

Born from hate and despair
No one seems to care
Mother dies leaves you alone
Passed around for all to own
rise up against them all
Take pleasure in their gory fall
It was on this day
that you discovered the evil way

Many want to end your life
but they can get past your knife
you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams
you want the masses to die
hoping to see innocents cry
you gathered so much fame
that even Death fears your name

in the way of war you've become skilled
forgetting how many you killed
striving to block out light
creating an everlasting night
hero's wills bend
no longer able to defend
beat the knave
take him as your slave

you have an unholy desire
to set the world a fire
letting darkness take its toll
on your broken soul
Your words of malice
build your cursed palace
Might as well take a bow
because the world is yours now.

ok you might recognize this format from Trials of a Hero.

https://shadowsowner888.forumotion.net/poems-f7/trials-of-a-hero-t6271.htm


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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/12/2010, 1:53 pm

As said on Twig, this is well worth a million Mia smileys. (:
-off to add this poem to nominations-
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Post by Hyro201 7/12/2010, 1:59 pm

Thank you mia.
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Post by Komoda 7/12/2010, 2:47 pm

*-* Oh my gosh, this is absolutely stunning. I loved it all, but this line is especially pure genius:

"you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams"

Brilliant work, Hyro.
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Post by Rai 7/12/2010, 2:48 pm

Woah. *-*
This is seriously amazing, Hyro. Absolutely stunning, brilliant job.
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Post by Hyro201 7/12/2010, 3:56 pm

Thank you both. *sighs sadly* I just wish i had posted this on a better day.
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Post by Novastare 7/12/2010, 6:11 pm

Brilliant Hyro!
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/12/2010, 10:45 pm

very good i love this! its epical!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/13/2010, 9:19 am

Hyro201 wrote:Thank you both. *sighs sadly* I just wish i had posted this on a better day.

You know, I hate to say this but..
I may need you to help me improve my own poetry. O,---,o
[Now, let's make that smiley's eye fall off. XD]

O,---,
............................................o

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Marvelous! ^3^
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Post by Hyro201 7/13/2010, 3:11 pm

Mia I doubt there is much I could help you with. You already know how to be a great poem writer.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/13/2010, 3:12 pm

Nah-uh! DD:
I need your help. ):
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Post by Hyro201 7/13/2010, 5:30 pm

i wouldn't be much help since my style of writing poems is just sit down and wait for somethign to pop into my head. I usually don't really try. I just get an urge to write something down and expand on it.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/13/2010, 6:05 pm

Just help me. -_-
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Post by Hyro201 7/14/2010, 4:24 pm

Well, I guess i could help alittle.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/14/2010, 4:26 pm

Yay! applause
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