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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by shadowsowner888 on 6/30/2010, 11:34 pm

Alex only paid attention to the murderer's name. "Hee hee, he's asian!" she giggled.

That would so be me. XD Except, idk why exactly Alex is reacting that way . . . I'd be doing that just because I think Asians are that awesome, though, and things I find epic always make me laugh.

Anywho. Great chapter! :3 I love the bit about the bus and the dragons and stuff and how the bus was 'anticlimactic.' xD

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Post by The Newms on 6/30/2010, 11:44 pm

Because she's aimmature xD She thought they'd be fighting dragons, for God's sake. This chapter just kind of revealed Alex's inner child...
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by Puckspaw on 7/1/2010, 2:22 am

Wow, great job! I was just gonna read the first chapter tonight, but then I couldn't stop and I read it all. And then I searched the comments just to make sure I hadn't missed anything =D. I feel lame.

Anyway, awesome story! Can't wait to read more! cheesy
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Post by The Newms on 7/1/2010, 4:24 pm

Puck, you are not lame! xD Thanks for reading, I really apprecitae it.
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by Hahaha818 on 7/1/2010, 4:59 pm

This is such an awesome story! I can't wait to read more!
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/1/2010, 5:05 pm

WOW! I loveee this story!
Very Happy

I thought I would check it out since you have been reading my story and I was pleasantly surprised! applause I can't wait to know what happens next! Smile
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/1/2010, 5:21 pm

Thanks so much Haha and Grace! = D
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Post by Puckspaw on 7/2/2010, 7:10 pm

The Newms wrote:Puck, you are not lame! xD Thanks for reading, I really apprecitae it.

Lol you're welcome(:
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/3/2010, 11:49 pm

Bumbadabadabadabadabada (<----- Thats a drumroll)
Chapter Six! Booyah.


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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by shadowsowner888 on 7/4/2010, 8:53 am

Oh my gosh. XD I love the bit in the middle when she sees the car coming, and suddenly she's in the hospital. The transitioning was, like, perfect.

And the part about her humerus was humorous. smug Just because of the word humerus. xD And then, who couldn't help but love the part about Cup o Joe? :3

But my favorite part was the very last sentence. 8D Poor, poor Alex.

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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by Arianna on 7/4/2010, 10:47 am

I love this.

You must write more. nod :3

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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/4/2010, 7:08 pm

Interesting twist... the murderer hit her with his car. no
And now he is going to have her in his car! O.o
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/4/2010, 11:48 pm

Thanks so much, guys! = D

I'm starting to like this story a lot more now (partially since I came up with a new solution to the murder...xP) so expect a new chapter soon!

And glad you like the name, Shadow, I was going to name the coffee shop after the name of some cafe my friend took me to, but I couldn't remember the name for the life of me so I just made one up xD
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by conich on 7/7/2010, 12:01 am

vonderful, very vunderful! cant vait to vead more!!! (i dont really know what up with that weird accent...) Very Happy
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Post by The Newms on 7/7/2010, 11:52 am

HAHAHAHA xD I enjoyed the accent very much. Thanks, conich!
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/12/2010, 4:56 pm

Eet hath been updated.
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by shadowsowner888 on 7/13/2010, 11:18 am

*-* You edited the front eight times! How magical!

But, um, regardless. xDD That was a wonderful chapter! The details made it seem really real . . . like, geez, I wouldn't have thought to put in those gold letters or any sort of creative watch. Razz And I can't wait to find out what's happening with this Karl dude. Very Happy

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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/13/2010, 11:40 am

xD Thanks! ....I still don't know why I name him that....I think I just hit some random letters on my keyboard and though 'Hey, that looks like a name.'
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by GraceMarie8 on 7/13/2010, 11:51 am

This is such a goot story! Gosh I love this!
The details were so fantastic, it seemed almost real.

Wonderful chapter, can't wait to read more! Very Happy
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Post by The Newms on 7/13/2010, 11:53 am

Ahhh, thank you Grace! ^.^
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by Arianna on 7/13/2010, 2:21 pm

Whoa, that chapter was freaky. 0.o

Good job, again. :3

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Post by Hahaha818 on 7/13/2010, 5:21 pm

Chapter seven was awesome! I can't wait to read more!
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/13/2010, 7:05 pm

Thanks so much guys! = D I really appreciate everyone reading my story!
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by conich on 7/16/2010, 4:21 pm

Awesome Newms! I love the new chapter!
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Re: Veritas (NEW: Chapter Eight)

Post by The Newms on 7/19/2010, 10:23 pm

Yayyy, thank you conich! (And sorry for my late reply Dx)
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