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Post by shadowsowner888 7/12/2010, 3:54 pm

We'll see, we'll see. xD

Well, SL, these aren't exactly normal wolves. Wink The Wilds' strongest instinct is to take people out, basically. If they were normal, I'm sure that not-attacking-humans thing would apply to them, but these giant bloodthirsty monsters are far from normal. xD
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Post by Shadowlover2000 7/12/2010, 7:39 pm

Well hmph. XD
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Post by Shadowlover2000 7/12/2010, 7:49 pm

I read the first bit. I like the plotline and the names are cool. The characters are fun. Buutt.. (Yes, there's always a 'but' with me XD) the text! I'm just kindof a prone loathes-inporper-thingies person. And I can't be in love with a book unless I'm in love with the text. I mean the one line:

What you did was find a pack of Wild wolves, and then you basically track them until you find them,

YOU SAID FIND TWICE. See that stuff drives me up the wall XDDDD no offence though, I really like the plotline.
ALSO, IT SHOULD BE 'DO' NOT 'DID' Razz
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/13/2010, 11:14 am

Oh, thanks for pointing that out! smiley It really is about time I started editing this thing, so I'm glad for your input! That part definitely does sound a little awkward, now that I'm looking at it again. xD (I'd appreciate if you wouldn't use so many capitals, though. Wink)

That's okay if you're not 'in love' with this story or anything, then. :3 I just appreciate that you like even the plot, names, and characters.
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Post by Shadowlover2000 7/13/2010, 10:00 pm

Yeh. I'm guessing their names have something to do with theeiiirrr... it startes with an A.... it's not Animorph... XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/14/2010, 9:44 am

Yup! grin I'd look their Essence up in the dictionary to find its scientific name, then take some of the letters out of the beginning of one of the words in the name.
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Post by Shadowlover2000 7/14/2010, 2:49 pm

Yeah? Cool. I do that sometimes with french words lol. 'Furrea the Furret' XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/15/2010, 3:45 pm

Haha, awesome! :3 Really, I do think other languages can give you some of the best names for characters with . . . well, unusual names. Japanese is my own favorite for names! Like, Kumori means shadow, and Arashi (this wolf with a stormy personality) means storm, and tsubasa means wings . . . I just love the way the words look and sound and stuff, so yeah, Japanese is perfect for my names. <3
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Post by Shadowlover2000 7/15/2010, 4:39 pm

Flame (on my warrior cats) Had her puppies early ^.^ I named one Saboteur the third (After his father) And one Саботk. (Sib-eye-taush-nuik) Witch means 'Saboteur' in... ahh... Arabic? Something XD and the girl is Aterrador Zorra Ella Bestia Del Viento. Witch means Terrifying Fox She beast Of the wind in spanish. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/15/2010, 5:50 pm

Awesome! xD Haha, I love that there's two of them named Saboteur.
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Post by Shadowlover2000 7/15/2010, 9:18 pm

Yeah, You wannt give them a peice of prey? Here: Have a look at my pack: http://www.mywarriorcats.com/adoptables/profile.php?user=IRunWithFoxes
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/16/2010, 2:00 pm

Oh, sure! :3
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