Amy in Blunderland

Chapter 1
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I cant take it off.The blindfold I mean.Daddy says I can't lest I burn my eyes.He says im a very preety girl and that im very fortunate because I always have the most beautiful hats.I dont feel very fortunate.When I try to take it off.The blindfold I mean.I will go blind.But it wont be much of a difference.I either see black,or black.Mother says that she wants me to be able to take it off.The blindfold she means.But it hurts when I try.I always feel like im sleeping because its so dark.Because of blindfold i mean.But daddy says I musn't go to sleep lest suffer the most terribble of nightmares.So I stay awake in the dark.Because of the blindfold over my eyes I mean.Until I finnaly have the courage to take it off.Or If daddy finnaly lets me.
I cant explain myself
I am afraid sir because im
Not myself you see

i saw your thread in the advertising section for this, and imo it sounds way to close to the real alice in wonderland. with the jabberwocky and everthing. but i think if you made it the total opposite it would be okay.

The jabberwockys dead and I wanted her to be Alices daughetr so there would have to be some similarities for that to work

Oh sorry I totally forgot we were allowed to do fanfics here x3 I totally blanked for like a day. Apologies ^.^

LOL Its fine