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Love In The Ice.

Post by almightykey on 7/22/2010, 6:30 pm

Love In The Ice


prologue

"life. Something we cherish. But what is life? An empty meaning? An unfinished book as some would say. But there is no use if what you leave behind is meaningless. It brings pain and disgrace, yet we continue to live while we are alive but we know it will come to a close. So tell me, please, why do we fight so hard for it to be erased in the end?"

Chapter one will be up soon i promise i just need to write it first lol!!!!



chapter one:

I ran my fingers through the white blanket of snow. Each flake melted as it hit my flesh. The small ales noise seemed to be calming. Every direction sat food stands each decorated in bright colors. One in particular had many various fish and meat hanging from a small bar of the canopy top. In front stood a man his fingers curled around the girls next to him. He marveled at her expression as she pointed in curiosity and the foods. A boy ran in front of me waking my from my slow motion moment. I watched as he ran to the front steps of an apartment complixe. On the stairs sat a worried looking women how embraced the smell boy as if he had been missing for a long time. She looked up into the sky, which at that moment reminded me that it was poring rain. I continued walking none the less. It didn't mater if my clothes were ruined I had no one to impress. As i reached the steps of my apartment i noticed a letter. On the front in sliver letters wrote my name.
" That's strange no one ever sends me any thing." I thought to my self as I opened the back. Inside was a necklace one my mother use to wear. It was rapped around a small piece of paper. My mind went blank as I unrolled the scripted to find my mothers hand writing.

"To you my daughter. How is life? I'm sorry I wasn't around long enough for you to remember me. But your father and i love you very much. Take care of yourself.
love,
Mom"


I almost dropped the letter. That couldn't be my moms it was to freshly written she has been gone to many years for this to be hers. I stumbled into the living room unable to breath.
" But who would play such a demented joke?" I asked myself aloud.
" It's not a joke. It really is from your mom." Someone answered. It wasn't till then that i noticed the people siting around me.

end chapter....



next chapter will be more exciting!!!


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Post by Novastare on 7/22/2010, 6:59 pm

Cool, I really am excited to know the plot and things! It sounds great, write more please!! XD
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Post by almightykey on 7/22/2010, 7:01 pm

im working on it hahahah
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Post by Novastare on 7/22/2010, 7:08 pm

Good! Smile
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Post by Mandy-Love on 7/22/2010, 7:20 pm

(Cool.)
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Post by Mandy-Love on 7/22/2010, 7:21 pm

(I really like it...)
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Post by almightykey on 7/22/2010, 7:51 pm

thanks!!! i should have the first chapter up in a little bit!!!
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Post by Novastare on 7/24/2010, 12:47 pm

Awww, the first chapter was awesome! Just a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but you can go back and do those any time I suppose. Really great, can't wait for more!
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Post by almightykey on 7/25/2010, 11:30 pm

i know my grammar is offal................
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Post by Novastare on 7/26/2010, 10:42 pm

Add more!!! XD I added more to mine, I can't wait to see what happens in yours.
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