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Post by shadowsowner888 6/13/2010, 6:51 pm

Why thanks, Newmsie! applause I'm glad you like Lyssa!

:3 I'm glad to hear it, Ratty!

I'll try and post more today, but I just got camping and things here are a little crazy for me, so I'm not sure if I'll have the chance. XD I will if I have enough time, though!
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Post by rattyjol 6/13/2010, 8:10 pm

Yay! applause
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/14/2010, 5:36 pm

All right, I've finally got my work from the past few months up front now! XD I made a lot of little changes to the prologue, and added some description about being a wolf, so I'd kinda recommend you guys reread that part . . .

But if you'd rather just continue, copy the bolded part below, go to the first page, press control-F (or command-F if you're on a Mac), and paste the thing you copied. nod It'll take you to where the story left off from.
pull me with it
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Post by The Newms 6/14/2010, 10:16 pm

lawlz David's so innocent x3 "Don't call people names. I have to study. Oh, we shouldn't drink..." But I love 'im, hee hee. Anyhoozle, I do enjoy your story. So, uh, add more when you can!
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/16/2010, 3:54 pm

David's so innocent
Really now? xD I find that an intriguing observation, because I hadn't even really thought about that myself.

I'm glad you're enjoying it, though! applause Haha, I was hoping to have more written by now, but oh well. :PP I'll try and have more by the end of the week, at least. nod
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Post by The Newms 6/16/2010, 4:08 pm

Sometimes you never notice things about yourself (your characters are thought up by you, so they count) until somone else points' em out. xP

Take your time, take your time....(Ooh, speaking of updating, I oughta add more to my own story as well...)
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/16/2010, 5:52 pm

This is true. XD Especially when it comes to my characters.

You should! xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/23/2010, 4:12 pm

I put more up! I have two questions for those of you who read it.

1. Should I continue adding it up to the first post, or would you prefer that I just post the new bits in their own posts?
2. Do you think the bit about the schoolbusses behind the school is realistic at all? Like, would that be where the schoolbusses would be parked? Or would they be in a separate part of the normal parkinglot?
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Post by The Newms 6/24/2010, 8:36 pm

.....Maybe a potato.
Um, well, that about sums it up. I'm not sure any additional comment is needed.....xD



1. Keep it on the front page, I don't like having to look for stuff. I'm lazy xD

2. Um...I don't go to a normal school, so you're on your own there, kid!

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Post by shadowsowner888 6/25/2010, 5:44 pm

I'm glad you think so. XD

1. Okai. nod Thanks for the input!

2. D::: WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
Just kidding. Razz I apologize for that outburst, but my blood sugar is low, and until these glucose tablets take effect my mind won't be working properly.
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Post by conich 7/8/2010, 11:59 pm

love it shadow! cant wait to read more Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 7/10/2010, 9:14 am

Thanks! ^^
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