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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/18/2009, 7:49 pm

Maturity: High-detail kissing (Hehe) and maybe some violence.
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It was December 18th as I walked into the Cullen house.
"Hello? Alice? Jasper?" Jasper appeared at the foot of the stairs. "Amanda." His voice was saturated with love. "Hi." I whispered. "Come with me."
Gently wrapping his arm around my shoulders, he took me outside. The wind blew my hair back, away from my face, and he laughed. "You can't be in the house just yet, little human." He teased. "We're decorating." I sighed. "Fine. But where do you want me to go? It's winter break." He thoguht for a second, then smiled. "I have to ask Carlisle, but I think I know the perfect place."
Ten minutes later, we were in the car. "Leaving Alice to decorate?" I asked accusingly. "She wanted to. Besides, you're going to love this." He pulled over on the side of the road. "Where are we?" I asked. "Amanda." He almost choked on my name. "Run."
I wasn't going to leave him, not when he was like this. I bolted to the other side, lying my hand on one side of his neck. "Jasper. Calm down. Whatever it is, it's nothing. Calm." He turned around to glare at me, and he wasn't the lovable, sweet Jasper I was used to. His eyes were blood red, and his face was the image of hatred.
I backed off immediatly, still staring at his face. "J-J-Jasper?" I asked uncertainly. He snarled. "Human. Easy." And he jumped.
I dodged easily, knowing his moves, but I couldn't evade him for long. "Amanda." His voice cut through my skin like fire, burning as he snarled my name. His lips were at my neck, and I felt the silk-smooth, venom-filled teeth sink into my neck.
I screamed. I couldn't help it; Jasper was drinking my blood, the one thing he had sworn never to do. And here he was, lips at my neck, as I died painfully. At least I knew I would go to a better place. "Jesus." I whispered my Savior's name. "Jesus, I'm coming to you."
But I didn't seem to be. Things were coming into focus, and someone was shaking me violently. "Amanda! Amanda! What have I done?" Jasper's voice rang through my mind.
Jasper.
My eyes blinked open, and I saw his face. "Amanda!" His strong hands gripped me tightly, pulling me into the hug with unseen enthusiasm. "Did I hurt you?" He asked, brushing my neck. I winced at his touch. "Oh, no..." He whispered, seeing the scar. "Amanda, oh, Amanda. Sweetheart, come here." He took me in his arms unexpectedly, hugging me with a passion I had never seen. "You're alive. I love you." He whispered.
"Look at me." He demanded, and I looked straight into his golden eyes. He leaned closer to my neck, and I figeted uncomfortably. "I'm not going to hurt you." He whispered. "I need to see this." Two long fingers lied on the scar, and I tried not to grimace in pain. "Does it hurt?" He asked. "Yes." I managed to get out. "Oh, sweetie, I'm sorry!" He cried out, wrapping me in his arms again. "I didn't mean to, I promise! It's a long story, but I'll tell you! Please! I didn't mean to." He whispered the last sentence. "Jasper. I'm fine. It's just a scar. Bella got one when she was human. I'm fine." I stroked his cheek. "That's not just a scar Amanda. It's worse, and I don't know what it does to a human." He kissed it gently, and I winced. "Let's go, alright? I hate it when you get all guilty like this." I kissed his lips once, quickly and passionatly, and we got back in the car.
"Here we are, Amanda." He rubbed my shoulders as we got out. We were in a grove of beautiful evergreens. He took me through them all, smiling. I sneezed occasionally.
"Sweetie, are you okay?" He asked, his arm around me. "Yeah. Just allergies." I sniffled. "And here's ours." Above me rose a beautiful tree, full and green. Perfect.
He chopped it down immediatly, and smiled. "Amanda, I'l be right back. This won't fit in the car; I'll be back in a minute." And he kept his word.
"Come on, sweetheart." He lifted me into his arms, clearly not wanting to waste any time, and we were at the car instantly. "Get in." I climbed in awkwardly and we drove back home.
"You're still not allowed in. It's Christmas Eve." I looked at him, a confused look on my face. "You were unconcious for a while, sweetie." He reminded me. "Oh."
"Hello Amanda." Carlisle walked out and onto the patio. "Jasper, she needs to get dressed. The Christmas Eve Church Service is soon." He smiled and walked back in. A few minutes later, Alice covered my face with a blindfold and took me inside. "To the one room that's not decorated... Bella's closet. It's where we store all the stuff." She laughed, and deblindfolded me.
Alice pulled a red dress form the hanger. "Here." She smiled, and I pulled it on.
It was a long dress, falling smoothly to my ankles. It didn't cut to low, and the sleeves were perfect. Alice covered my eyes again and walked outside.
"You look amazing." Jasper whispered. "I could say the same." He was in a classic tux, complete with tie and the works. "Come along now." He took my hand gently and we drove silently to the church.
"The manger scene." I whispered as we reached it. "The true meaning of Christmas." He whispered back, wrapping my hand in his. "Come on, sweetie. You don't want to miss the sermon."
"Amen." The pastor lifted his head slowly. "Remember to keep CHRIST in Christmas!" And we were dismissed.
Jasper drove slowly back home as my head drifted to his shoulder. "Jasper... we're leaving out cookies, right?" He nodded. "Of course, Amanda. Why wouldn't we?" He pulled into the garage and covered my eyes. "This again?" I asked, but laughed. Suddenly, we were in my room. "Keep your eyes closed." He demanded. "Alice!" Different hands covered me eyes. "Jasper, leave." Alice giggled and pushed pajamas into my hands. "Get dressed."
After I was dressed, Jasper came back in, chuckling. "Alice... thank you. She looks wonderful." He kissed my forehead. "You look beautiful, Amanda." He opened my eyes, and I saw the room. It looked normal. "We'll decorate it while you're asleep." Alice explained. I rolled my eyes. "Fine, fine. What's the big surprise?" Jasper laughed. "Come on, Amanda. It takes vmapires a while to decorate too. We need you asleep." He kissed my forehead once again, and I drifted to sleep in his arms.

I blinked my eyes open, and gasped. "Merry Christmas Amanda." Jasper kissed my forehead. He was in a red shirt, the Christmas tree seeming to sparkle just like him, as the window was open. "Jasper!" I giggled and hopped out of bed. "Look around." It was amazing.
There were wreaths hanging in every possible place, tinsel spread around, garland on the edges... and this was just my room. Jasper chuckled and lifted me into his arms. The living room was even more amazing.
The tree was decorated with the prettiest ornaments, and the angel was atop it. Wreaths, holly, garland... and my favorite, a Jesus ornament on the tree. It was complete.
"Present time!" Emmett charged down the stairs, Rosalie at his heels. "Calm down, Emmett." But she laughed.
Jasper lifted me again, kissing my forehead. "Look up." He whispered, setting me on my feet as we reached his room. "Mistletoe. I knew you had something planned." I giggled. And he slowly inclined his head as his lips brushed mine.


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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 12/18/2009, 9:43 pm

Wow. Verrrry short.
But I like so far!
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/19/2009, 10:38 am

Nice job so far! :3
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 12/19/2009, 6:43 pm

Ooh, you added four more lines. O.o
LOL.
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Post by amrgirl 12/20/2009, 11:39 pm

Ooh, update more, please! Love it!
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/21/2009, 5:45 pm

Wrote more! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/21/2009, 5:50 pm

Woaaaaah. o.0 Jasper really let himself go.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/21/2009, 6:04 pm

You'll see why later. It wasn't his fault. A Cullen CHRISTmas 818473
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 12/21/2009, 11:07 pm

What happened, did a homicidal maniac come into range? xD
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/23/2009, 8:52 am

Wrore more! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/23/2009, 12:05 pm

Passionately?! Oooh, you sinned! smug Thou shalt not kiss passionately before marriage, Amanda!
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/23/2009, 4:06 pm

That's not one of the Commandments! It's Thou shalt not commit adultry.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/23/2009, 9:01 pm

Wrote more. Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/24/2009, 9:34 am

I know. xD But seriously, it kinda is a sin for some reason . . . like, when I went to confession and got this little paper to help with my examination of conscience, that was one of the questions under the adultery commandment. "Did I kiss passionately?"

It was actually pretty funny. rolleyes

Lol, I really like how you have all these Christian aspects in the story! ^^ Great job with the new bit.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/24/2009, 9:38 am

Well, what did you expect? xD


It may be different for Catholics and Protestants....
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/24/2009, 10:01 am

Lol, yeah, could be . . . xD It feels kinda universal to me, though, and I didn't even know it was supposed to be a sin until recently. Maybe you just haven't found out yet either? *shrugs*
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/24/2009, 10:09 am

Well, we don't do confession....this is so off-topic. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/24/2009, 10:21 am

Ohh, okay. xD I guess it's not universal after all then.

Errrm . . . yay for the Cullens! xD
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 12/24/2009, 10:22 am

xD, Cullens pwn. LOL
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Post by liz1289 12/30/2009, 5:11 pm

This really good!
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Post by Mrs. Twarry Matsuda 12/30/2009, 6:54 pm

Yesss. Isss really good.
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Post by wolflover96 12/30/2009, 8:53 pm

awesomeness! Wink
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 1/4/2010, 10:55 am

It's finally done! xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/5/2010, 11:01 pm

Awww! ^^ That's so cute!
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