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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 12:06 pm

Maturity: Little fighting/romance, if any.
Fantasy: A magical power.


ThE PiggY ThReE


Everything you’ve been told is a lie.

The three little pigs - yes, them. There’s many versions of their tale, but only one is true. And THIS is it.

* * *


Chapter 1
Nicky


I didn’t really understand why Mo, Luscious and I had to leave home. Mom gave us some rot about the economy, and not being able to support us, but I don’t really think that’s true - I mean, our family’s rich!

But, when Mom gives an order, you follow it. So Mo, Luscious, and I packed our belongings in about five suitcases each, called for a limo, and left.

Our first mission was to build some houses - I mean, we could always just buy a penthouse, but what fun would that be?

We had the driver take us out to the country, where there would be plenty of space for building houses. I left the group at the first nice spot I saw, and started planning out in my head how my beautiful house would look.

Chapter 2
Mo


Haha, Mom was so cracked! She honestly thought we would die out here on our own - that’s the whole reason she sent us off. Well, I would show her!

Shortly after Nicky left Luscious and I, I found a spot to build a house, too. It was a fantastic spot! All beautiful, surrounded by trees, and there was even a nice little pond in the back! This would be the greatest house in the world!

I felt a twinge of sadness, though, as I watched Luscious drive off alone. I hoped he wouldn’t do as badly as Nicky would!


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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 2:44 pm

Haha, this sounds like it's gonna get interesting
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 2:48 pm

That's so delightful to hear! XD I'm glad you've realized that, Saddle!
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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 2:54 pm

It sounds better than the version of the three little pigs my friend and I had to write for language arts. They ended up shooting each other with watermelon seeds. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 3:02 pm

lol! Wow.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 3:08 pm

That part wasn't my idea, it was my friend's. XD I wrote half the story and then he took it and finished it. At least I got him to make it watermelon seeds instead of bombs. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 3:10 pm

XD I see, lol! Lol, yeah, the seeds are definitely better.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 3:14 pm

We made it 3 chickens vs. 3 ducks and he wanted the chickens to plant bombs in the ducks' house and the ducks to go to the chickens' house with some type of gun....I told him that wasn't kid friendly. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 3:16 pm

lol! It'd be funny, though!
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Post by SaddleClub 6/8/2009, 3:20 pm

Yeah, that's what he told me. XD
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 4:27 pm

Write more ASAP please!
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Post by PugsRock 6/8/2009, 9:06 pm

Good job, as usual. Smile Write more soon!
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 9:16 pm

Thanks! Smile I'll write more as soon as I have a chance.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 9:17 pm

Yay! (Shadow, I'm almost caught up to you in posts.)
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Post by Nightowl 6/8/2009, 9:22 pm

This sounds very fun Shadow. Can't wait for more. xD
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Post by iGrievous 6/8/2009, 9:27 pm

neither can I!
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 9:56 pm

Augh! XD

Thanks everyone. Smile
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Post by iGrievous 6/8/2009, 10:07 pm

You are truly, positively, most certainly welcome.
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Post by Jesus4Eternity 6/9/2009, 4:20 pm

Write more?
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Post by iGrievous 6/10/2009, 7:58 am

She will
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/10/2009, 8:32 am

Yeah, I will, but I have this weird mentality. XD It's called, "I don't wanna write! I wanna post!" I have a few more stories I wanna get up, but then I'll start writing again. XD
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Post by SaddleClub 6/13/2009, 11:54 pm

Did you write any more, Shadow?
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Post by iGrievous 6/14/2009, 7:05 am

Well, clearly, it's inevitable. Or is it?
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/14/2009, 8:13 am

XD Bleah, not yet. Gri keeps making me write Hero and Pootnic with him, so besides a couple songs, I haven't had time for anything else.
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Post by iGrievous 6/14/2009, 9:51 am

Yes, she's right.
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