What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
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What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by Jesus4Eternity 11/20/2009, 11:16 pm
Maturity: Strong kissing and relationships, killing, blood...it's Twilighty, what do you expect?
Fantasy: Vampires, maybe werewolves. Again, twilight. xD
Carlisle staggered up the steps to his house. "Carlisle! Wait!" I called, chasing after him. He was so hurt, and I wanted to help. I walked into the open door and followed his limp figure upstairs, to the attic. No screams. No..anything. After half an hour, I left.
After what seemed like the end of the world, I emerged form my prison. I stood up, feeling new and better. I breathed in the dusty attic air, but it did no good to me, for some reason.
What had I become?
I walked downstairs, overjoyed that my father was not here. I looked into a mirror. My blond hair looked shinier, less scruffy. My skin was pure white, and my features looked clearer. But that wasn't the big part. The big part was my eyes.
My eyes were a bright, startling red.
I gasped, but, again, the air did no good to me. I realized what I was. The same thing my father wanted to kill.
A vampire.
I had to find others of my kind, others to help me on my way. Before my dad came home, I was out of the house for good. I didn't know where to go. Where would the head vampires be? What place would be suited enough for vampires? Paris? London? Italy? I had a feeling it was Italy, and started walking towards an airport.
As I walked, I realized that I was walking way to fast for a human's pace; I was sprinting, and I wasn't tired at all. Hmm. Maybe I could just run to Italy.
Within the hour, I was there. But I had no idea what to do. Everyone was dresses in red, and I had another feeling that my red eyes stood out. I spotted another pale one, and walked over. This one had black eyes.
"What do you- oh, another." The vampire stepped back. "Who are you, newborn, and what do you want?" He asked. Even harsh, the voice was smooth and compelling, like honey or velvet. "I am Carlisle Cullen, and I am seeking advice for my newfound vampirehood." My voice was smooth as well, and compelling. "Very well. Follow me, Carlisle Cullen."
Fantasy: Vampires, maybe werewolves. Again, twilight. xD
Carlisle staggered up the steps to his house. "Carlisle! Wait!" I called, chasing after him. He was so hurt, and I wanted to help. I walked into the open door and followed his limp figure upstairs, to the attic. No screams. No..anything. After half an hour, I left.
After what seemed like the end of the world, I emerged form my prison. I stood up, feeling new and better. I breathed in the dusty attic air, but it did no good to me, for some reason.
What had I become?
I walked downstairs, overjoyed that my father was not here. I looked into a mirror. My blond hair looked shinier, less scruffy. My skin was pure white, and my features looked clearer. But that wasn't the big part. The big part was my eyes.
My eyes were a bright, startling red.
I gasped, but, again, the air did no good to me. I realized what I was. The same thing my father wanted to kill.
A vampire.
I had to find others of my kind, others to help me on my way. Before my dad came home, I was out of the house for good. I didn't know where to go. Where would the head vampires be? What place would be suited enough for vampires? Paris? London? Italy? I had a feeling it was Italy, and started walking towards an airport.
As I walked, I realized that I was walking way to fast for a human's pace; I was sprinting, and I wasn't tired at all. Hmm. Maybe I could just run to Italy.
Within the hour, I was there. But I had no idea what to do. Everyone was dresses in red, and I had another feeling that my red eyes stood out. I spotted another pale one, and walked over. This one had black eyes.
"What do you- oh, another." The vampire stepped back. "Who are you, newborn, and what do you want?" He asked. Even harsh, the voice was smooth and compelling, like honey or velvet. "I am Carlisle Cullen, and I am seeking advice for my newfound vampirehood." My voice was smooth as well, and compelling. "Very well. Follow me, Carlisle Cullen."
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Re: What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by shadowsowner888 11/21/2009, 8:42 am
What happened if what - OMG. xD I have a very bad feeling about this.
You must post more!!
You must post more!!
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Re: What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by Jesus4Eternity 11/21/2009, 8:53 am
This is gonna be a series. One on each twi-charrie, seeing what would happen if tey chose differently.
But, for the series, you peeps gotta remember that each book does NOT build on the others. For example, for Carlisle, if he chose to live with the Voultri, then I couldn't have the Cullens. So, if Book 2 was Edward, then I'd have to have Carlisle, so it doesn't build.
Does that make sense? xD
But, for the series, you peeps gotta remember that each book does NOT build on the others. For example, for Carlisle, if he chose to live with the Voultri, then I couldn't have the Cullens. So, if Book 2 was Edward, then I'd have to have Carlisle, so it doesn't build.
Does that make sense? xD
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Re: What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by shadowsowner888 11/21/2009, 9:16 am
Ohhh, okay. xD
OMG, I knew it!! xD I knew that was what was going to happen, the Cullen family was gonna fail!! Dang, it though. I really really dun like spoilers.
But yeah, that makes sense.
OMG, I knew it!! xD I knew that was what was going to happen, the Cullen family was gonna fail!! Dang, it though. I really really dun like spoilers.
But yeah, that makes sense.
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Re: What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by Jesus4Eternity 11/21/2009, 9:16 am
Just an example...maybe. xD
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Re: What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by shadowsowner888 11/21/2009, 9:23 am
Oh. xD Okay. Nevermind then!
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Re: What Would Have Happened If...Book 1: Carlisle
by Jesus4Eternity 11/21/2009, 9:28 am
Again, maybe. I think I'll write more of this....
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