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Post by FOREIGN?! 5/21/2010, 8:21 am

So, this poem sort of doesn't make any sense at all. But I really like it for some reason. Because I think I managed to squeeze every single one of my favorite words in there. O.o

    I'll write your name in the sand
    and the waves will wash it away
    and I'll write it over again
    re-writing day after day

    I'll tie the stars together
    into a wondrous constellation
    because the magic in my veins
    fills me up with fascination

    I'll set the town on fire
    just to watch it glow
    you could sit right here with me
    and watch the midnight show

    I'll live in a supernova
    or maybe a kaleidoscope
    somewhere with an illusional view
    I'll find my home someday, I hope

    I'll find another dimension
    one that's nothing like our own
    I'll rule over all the creatures there
    on a technicolour throne

    I'll keep this in my heart
    maybe in my locket too
    I'll run to this and that
    when I cannot run to you. ▲
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Post by LuckyPenny666 5/21/2010, 8:50 am

Great job! I love it. Smile
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Post by FOREIGN?! 5/21/2010, 8:56 am

Thank you! smiley
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Post by Nightowl 5/21/2010, 1:30 pm

Love it! Beautiful job. (:
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Post by Puckspaw 5/21/2010, 3:02 pm

Awesome job, Forry =D I love it
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Post by Avé 5/21/2010, 3:37 pm

Long list of favorite words, eh? Razz

Anyway, I love this so much, Forrey. Very Happy
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Post by FOREIGN?! 5/21/2010, 6:54 pm

Thanks, everyone! Very Happy

@Ave: Eh, that was about half. xD
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Post by shadowsowner888 5/21/2010, 11:06 pm

Oh my gosh, Forry, that's epic! I'm appalled, though. >.> Why don't you have words like snog in there, huh?!

But, regardless, yes. That was epic. :O I looooove it.
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Post by SkyLight 6/2/2010, 1:27 pm

I like it!! Smile
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Post by FOREIGN?! 6/2/2010, 2:17 pm

@Shadow: How about I put snog in my next poem for you? xD Thanks!

@Sky: Thank you too! (:
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Post by Hyro201 6/2/2010, 2:29 pm

wonderful poem
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Post by Orodruin 6/2/2010, 2:56 pm

Excellent riming nomnomnom

~Twilit
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 6/2/2010, 9:49 pm

Constellation and fascination? You're better than Dr.Suess o_o
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/2/2010, 10:30 pm

Oooh yay! applause I would love that, Forry!

AND DUUUUDE I missed you! ^^
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Post by FOREIGN?! 6/2/2010, 10:35 pm

Wow, thanks everyone!

@Emily: Psh, not by a long shot; he's a genius. nod

@Shadow: I will work on that as soon as I can. xD You missed me? Awww! I'm all happy now. applause
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Post by <3--[Emily]--<< 6/4/2010, 8:25 am

Awww love the last few lines (:
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Post by Komoda 6/4/2010, 11:42 pm

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Just... Whoa. Simply stunning, Forry. O_o The incredible images you illustrate with your words and comparisons are really awesome... And I mean like, awesome in a literal sense. This poem left me in awe, honestly.
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Post by FOREIGN?! 6/5/2010, 6:06 pm

Wow, thanks, Mo. That really made my day. Smile
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Post by Rai 6/22/2010, 10:10 am

Wow! *-*
That's really, really amazing! I love how you're words seem to paint so many vivid pictures in my mind. I also love the vocabulary && words used! Smile Spectacular job, Foreign! Very Happy
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Post by truckthewolf 6/23/2010, 6:58 pm

I love this Forrey c: It's really mesmerizing.
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Post by Cyn431 6/25/2010, 5:34 pm

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That's beautiful poetry, Forrey, right there. *points at main post*
Nothing more to say, as I'm not worthy of complimenting it with my puny little words. xD
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