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Forever Alone

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Post by Komoda 12/7/2009, 9:23 pm

She waits.
Diamond flooding the view of her horizon
Shadows closing in on her from all ends
The time pierces through her flesh

She worries.
The gap in her soul stretches
Nightmares clouding her senses
Her breath comes in short gasps

She withstands.
The pain searing through her fragile veins
Her aching heart takes over
Tormenting her until she's shattered

She wishes.
It will end
The pain will stop
Her bad thoughts will vanish

She only wishes.
But she'll always wait.
She'll always worry.
And she has no choice but to withstand.


.Forever Alone.
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Post by rattyjol 12/7/2009, 10:04 pm

Wow. Nice. Smile
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 12/7/2009, 10:12 pm

Oh, that made me cry Sad So beautiful! Forever Alone 899677
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/7/2009, 11:28 pm

Woah. Very Happy Mo, this is beautiful. So sad, and I love the formatting.
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Post by Komoda 12/8/2009, 11:44 pm

Aw, thank you guys. Smile
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Post by PugsRock 12/13/2009, 9:46 pm

Great job. Smile I love it.
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Post by Komoda 12/13/2009, 11:11 pm

Thank you! Very Happy
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Post by LuckyPenny666 12/14/2009, 7:49 pm

This is an amazing poem. Very Happy
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Post by Komoda 12/14/2009, 11:48 pm

Aw, thanks. :3
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