Inadequate

Maturity: I don’t think there’s anything questionable, but a five year old probably wouldn’t get it.
Fantasy: None

This is another one of those songs I wrote about Jamie; in particular, it’s the latest and probably last song I’ll ever write about him. This was begun after I ended my crush on him, and I’ve been working on it for a while since then, but finished it a few weeks ago.

If anyone's interested, here's the link to hear me playing it. ^^
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inadequate

Verse One
I tried . . .
To make us something more.
I swore . . .
I would open up the door.

Now I see . . .
That these things can not be forced.
And I’m left . . .
With a shard of broken hope.

Verse Two
Memories . . .
Worth nothing anymore.
Nothing but . . .
My curdling recollections.

They’re all . . .
The stuff I can think of.
When all I want . . .
Is to not care anymore.

Prechorus
What am I supposed to do?
Now my life is falling through.
I don’t have anything left to live for.

I wasted time
Chasing after you.
What for? I should’ve known.

Chorus
I lost you, and I’m
Sorry.
And now I just want
To go back to before.

Can it happen? Please just
Say yes.
Cus I know now that we’ll be
Nothing more than friends.

Nothing more than friends.

Verse Three
You and me . . .
It sounded so appealing.
That was all . . .
I ever dreamed about.

But we . . .
Were not meant for reality.
I found rejection . . .
And my dreaming went away.

Prechorus
What am I supposed to do?
Now my life is falling through.
I don’t have anything left to live for.

I wasted time
Chasing after you.
What for? I should’ve known.

Chorus
I lost you, and I’m
Sorry.
And now I just want
To go back to before.

Can it happen? Please just
Say yes.
Cus I know now that we’ll be
Nothing more than friends.

Nothing more than friends.

Bridge
Why? . . .
Do I always try, but always fall?
It doesn’t seem fair at
All.

I . . .
Though maybe, for once, I could get lucky.
But life just doesn’t work that way
For me.

Doesn’t work that way for me . . .

Chorus
I lost you, and I’m
Sorry.
And now I just want
To go back to before.

Can it happen? Please just
Say yes.
Cus I know now that we’ll be
Nothing more than friends.

Nothing more than friends.

Oh, nothing more.

Aww...
I'd love to hear you singing it, though.

Yay! xD I'll try and get it up soon, but maybe not for a few days.

I'm sorry, Shadow! :-( It's a great song, though.
it would be AWESOME if you sung it! I can't wait to hear it!

I really love this! I like the way you formatted it, you know, with the shorter sentences trailing off? It reminds me of... Nick Lachey's song, What's Left of Me! Because that song has these pauses between the sentences that sound really nice.

I like the adjectives you used as well. And well, the whole song in general. XP

Good Job! I kept on singing it aloud.

That's okay, Lucky! I'm over it. And thanks!

Thanks, Mo. :3 OMG, I love that face. xD

Thanks, Soph. And sweet!! xD I wonder if you got it anything like it really sounds?

Oh... that's so sad:( But it's beautiful. Really lovely

That's awesome! *waits impatiently to hear it*

Thank you, Harmony! And thanks, Ratty!

Updated with a link of me playing this. :3

OMG!!!! YAY! *Squeals and races back to the link.*

It's sad but...FANTASTIC! I truly enoyed it. Loved the video

Thank you! ^^ I'm glad you liked it!