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Life [Used to be Live Life] *Finished*

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Post by merry312 8/5/2009, 12:37 pm

Maturity: G
Fantasy: None at all. Smile It is very realistic.

OK, I just thought of this poem because I was bored and was looking at all the poems on here and I was like "I can't afford to be bored" and then I was like "Hey! That rhymes!" xD I might be kinda bad because I don't usually write a lot of poems except for school.

Live Life

No one can afford to be bored,
life only comes around once,
You need to live it to the fullest,
Even if you do some stupid stunts.

You need to follow your heart,
and let go of the past,
chase your dreams,
because days disappear fast.

Be yourself,
and you will find,
that someone will like you,
even if it is only in their mind.

No one can afford to be bored,
because life is too valuable for that,
You need to live it to the fullest,
And smile often so people have something to smile back at.


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Post by merry312 8/6/2009, 12:50 pm

Anyone like it? Smile
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Post by Arianna 8/6/2009, 1:20 pm

I really like it Merry. It's awesome!
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Post by merry312 8/6/2009, 1:24 pm

Thanks! Smile
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Post by Arianna 8/6/2009, 1:25 pm

Welcome Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/6/2009, 4:52 pm

Nice job! Very Happy I like how it rhymes and stuff, and I totally agree with it.
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Post by merry312 8/6/2009, 4:54 pm

Thanks shadow! Smile
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Post by PugsRock 8/9/2009, 12:31 pm

This is great! Smile I love this line:

And smile often so people have something to smile back at.
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Post by Komoda 8/9/2009, 1:20 pm

Oooh, I like it! I'm totally guilty of not doing any of those things, though. XP
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Post by merry312 8/13/2009, 6:34 pm

Thanks everyone! Smile
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