MADMAN
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MADMAN
by Avé 3/10/2010, 8:54 am
The mouse was chasing the cat, you see
And the cat came racing after me
So they lied
- they both lied
And they lied when the madman screamed
He screamed about his life and death
About the moment he'd take his last breath
So he tried
- yes, he tried
He tried and cursed in love's distress
He called me names, he proved me wrong
I should have known this all along
So I'll hide,
- yes, I'll hide
But I'll hide and he'll chase me to where I belong
This door is locked, I can't get it open
I tried the gate, but the bars are broken
So I cried
- yes, I cried
When I cried the gaurd was finally woken
He did not have the key, I could not come inside
I was sent back to where this pain would divide
He denied,
- yes, denied
He denied that he ever had strength to decide
He wanted, he was, he never will be again
He trusted these hearts that he called his friends
So he sighed,
- Oh, he sighed
And he sighed; they never reached the end
The mouse has chased the cat, you see
And after she brought the skull to me
It had died
- they both died
And they died when the madman screamed
And the cat came racing after me
So they lied
- they both lied
And they lied when the madman screamed
He screamed about his life and death
About the moment he'd take his last breath
So he tried
- yes, he tried
He tried and cursed in love's distress
He called me names, he proved me wrong
I should have known this all along
So I'll hide,
- yes, I'll hide
But I'll hide and he'll chase me to where I belong
This door is locked, I can't get it open
I tried the gate, but the bars are broken
So I cried
- yes, I cried
When I cried the gaurd was finally woken
He did not have the key, I could not come inside
I was sent back to where this pain would divide
He denied,
- yes, denied
He denied that he ever had strength to decide
He wanted, he was, he never will be again
He trusted these hearts that he called his friends
So he sighed,
- Oh, he sighed
And he sighed; they never reached the end
The mouse has chased the cat, you see
And after she brought the skull to me
It had died
- they both died
And they died when the madman screamed
Last edited by Ave on 3/10/2010, 8:35 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Re: MADMAN
by shadowsowner888 3/10/2010, 5:42 pm
o.0 Dude, I'm thinking of Alice in Wonderland now! Is that supposed to happen? xDD (I'll be surprised if it is, because I barely remember the book. xD)
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Re: MADMAN
by Avé 3/10/2010, 8:38 pm
Finished. 
Shadow - I suppose you could say I was inspired by it.
Shadow - I suppose you could say I was inspired by it.
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Re: MADMAN
by FOREIGN?! 3/10/2010, 8:43 pm
Sweeet! 
I love it all, it sorta reminds me of that one mickey mouse episode where he has this potion and this cat is chasing a mouse then he gives the mouse the potion and it gets super strong and chases the cat away. O:
I love it all, it sorta reminds me of that one mickey mouse episode where he has this potion and this cat is chasing a mouse then he gives the mouse the potion and it gets super strong and chases the cat away. O:
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Re: MADMAN
by shadowsowner888 3/10/2010, 9:16 pm
That was cool. Little insane story poems ftw!
Oh, really?! xD Sweet, I didn't sound like a complete idiot, then!
Little insane story poems ftw!Oh, really?! xD Sweet, I didn't sound like a complete idiot, then!
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Re: MADMAN
by Novastare 3/10/2010, 9:21 pm
Wow! I thought of Alice in Wonderland too, haha. It's brilliant, I like the flow of it. Very nice! It tells an interesting story all the way to the end, I had to keep reading. Very good!
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Re: MADMAN
by Malicious Nightmares 3/19/2010, 9:15 am
Such an epic poem, Ave! I enjoyed it from the start, to the end!
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