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Post by Mordor 4/10/2010, 10:57 pm

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Starry starry nights
I dream of them always
I watch them light up the world
With the natural beauty of light

Shining forever in the black abyss
Lighting our path
Our way
Our road
The Light

Stars streaking down the sky
Awing me
Constellations
Awing me
Brilliant flares
Awing me
Gorgeous reflections
Awing me

Hundreds
Thousands
Millions
Billions
The clouds are not alone

Perfect in my image
Living diamonds
Sparking flames
Silver wonders

Starry starry nights
I dream of stars always
I watch them light up the world
With the natural beauty of light




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Post by Avé 4/10/2010, 11:01 pm

Stars are so beautiful. <3

So is this poem - I love it.
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Post by Mordor 4/10/2010, 11:07 pm

You deserve a hug - thanks! ^^
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Post by Selene Hime 4/10/2010, 11:50 pm

Wow ... That poem is just amazing. It's extremely beautiful, Mordor. ^_^
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Post by Mordor 4/11/2010, 12:11 am

Thanks Selene! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/11/2010, 9:02 am

You're a really good poet, Kat, you know that? ^^ Yet another wonderful poem - I think this one is my favorite by you so far. :3
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Post by Mordor 4/15/2010, 8:45 pm

I do now Shadz Very Happy Thanks.
I agree. This one and Our Time were the best out of my five poems.
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