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Post by Avé 3/16/2010, 10:00 pm

In this little town
One I've always known
Lived here all my life
It's all ours in our own

Say something worth sharing
Within hours of time
The news will travel quickly
Your phone, her phone, mine

In this little town,
A murder once took place
Excitement filled the people
Fear rests on every face

Innocent as she was
Expected nothing from that drive
Someone must not have liked her
She didn't make it home alive

And soon, everyone knew
Gossip made it's way around
Around the frightened friends,
Around this little town

But I was not excited
No, I couldn't be
See, there was a problem
That girl - that girl was me
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Post by rattyjol 3/16/2010, 10:05 pm

Ooh... creepy. o.0 I'm really hoping that's not a true story, Ave. xD
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Post by Avé 3/16/2010, 10:21 pm

Don't worry, I'm not a ghost. xD

And thanks!
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Post by rattyjol 3/16/2010, 10:30 pm

Good. xD
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Post by Cyn431 3/16/2010, 11:28 pm

Ooh, I like this poem, Ave. Very Happy Particularly the second stanza.
I also like how in the last one, you say, "see, there was a problem" like you were in trouble or something, and it was a lot more than anyone expected. In some way I find that quite awesome. nod Then again, all your poetry is awesome!
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Post by Puckspaw 3/17/2010, 1:46 am

Awesome job. Nice twist at the end, and I love how it was from the victim's perspective. nod
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Post by Hahaha818 3/17/2010, 2:02 pm

Awesome poem, Ave!!! You did great job writing it from the victim's view of things.
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/17/2010, 4:35 pm

Haha, that end was so shocking. xD Epicness!
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Post by Avé 3/17/2010, 4:41 pm

Gracias! =D
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/18/2010, 2:35 pm

Oh. My. Gosh. AMAZING! I love what you've done!

But seriously. If you really were a ghost, I'd freak. nod
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Post by Avé 3/18/2010, 3:32 pm

What if I am? 0__o

Just kidding. Smile Thanks!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/18/2010, 3:40 pm

You're welcome!

[[I'd still freak out. XD]]
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Post by Avé 3/18/2010, 3:46 pm

According to Mafia, I'm a ghost now.

^-^
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/18/2010, 3:50 pm

Oh yeha.. true.. xD
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/19/2010, 3:58 pm

I do not know how I missed this one. scratch Anyways, I love the poem, Avvles! Very Happy It almost made me turn around and go look out the window at the end. o..O
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Post by Cyn431 3/19/2010, 4:00 pm

Mia be a ghostie too. smug
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Post by Music Luva 4/3/2010, 6:54 pm

OMG! That is freaky! xD I hope it is fiction. xD
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Post by Avé 4/5/2010, 12:32 pm

Trust me, it is, Maiisy. xD
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Post by rattyjol 4/5/2010, 2:18 pm

That's what I said. xD
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Post by Novastare 4/14/2010, 11:17 pm

EIPCNESS!!!!! I wov every bit of it, awesome!!
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Post by SkyLight 4/22/2010, 11:17 pm

I see why this poem was featured, because its awesome!
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Post by SaddleClub 4/23/2010, 12:58 am

Oooh, cool poem!! Slightly creepy in a cool, mysterious way. Good job Smile
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Post by Yoshi'sLove 4/24/2010, 5:12 pm

I can see why it's featured! I love it!

Creepy is right down my alley. X]
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