♥Monster♥
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♥Monster♥
Monster
A Monster inside a girl,
13 years old with eyes as blue as the sea
yet she was the dullest pearl.
monster, growing
the girl, slipping
pain inside
the monster, gripping.
The darkness building a shadowy wall,
the girl sees,
and time tells all.
a friendship lost,
a broken heart,
because of her lies
they were torn apart.
her skin turned to ice
as she gazed into the mirror
reflecting something odd
that drew her in nearer
under her smiling facade
lays a girl crushed with sorrow
and though she says:
I can't wait 'til tomorrow"
inside her head she's bound to refrain
because the day of tomorrow
just brngs another day of pain
the reflection showed a monster, a beast full of lies
the reflection showed a monster, a beast full of lies
-Meg
A Monster inside a girl,
13 years old with eyes as blue as the sea
yet she was the dullest pearl.
monster, growing
the girl, slipping
pain inside
the monster, gripping.
The darkness building a shadowy wall,
the girl sees,
and time tells all.
a friendship lost,
a broken heart,
because of her lies
they were torn apart.
her skin turned to ice
as she gazed into the mirror
reflecting something odd
that drew her in nearer
under her smiling facade
lays a girl crushed with sorrow
and though she says:
I can't wait 'til tomorrow"
inside her head she's bound to refrain
because the day of tomorrow
just brngs another day of pain
the reflection showed a monster, a beast full of lies
the reflection showed a monster, a beast full of lies
-Meg
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Re: ♥Monster♥
Aw. Nice poem. Good rhyming.
(You need the maturity and fantasy at the top of the poem)
(You need the maturity and fantasy at the top of the poem)
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Re: ♥Monster♥
? what do you mean?
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Re: ♥Monster♥
You've gotta put something like:
Maturity: People being overtaken by monsters
Fantasy: Monsters
It's a great poem, by the way!
Maturity: People being overtaken by monsters
Fantasy: Monsters
It's a great poem, by the way!
Re: ♥Monster♥
shadowsowner888 wrote:Yeah, what Ari said.
Awesome job, anyway!! xD This so matches my novel.
you can totally use it like in a chapter or something....you have my permission Shadow X3
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Cool, thanks! ^^ Idk if I ever actually will, since I don't have quotes at the beginning or anything . . . maybe Kayla can read some poetry online, though, and stumble upon my site, and find your poem . . . hmm, yes, maybe!
Re: ♥Monster♥
That's awesome.
Haha, Shadz, that would be funny. Good advertising, too, when it gets published.
Haha, Shadz, that would be funny. Good advertising, too, when it gets published.
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