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*edited out* I don't want this here anymore.

It creeps me out too. 0.o
But good story - I really liked it.

Thanks. Took me about an hour [or a little less] to write. But it's creepy. XP

That's a creepie story!! x3 But I liiiike it. And I really like how you said "the sand keeps whispering down". It's a really great way of describing it.

Thanks Shadow.

I think I'm going to change that last paragraph and put it at the beginning instead cause now that I think about it, it fits way better there.

Oooh, it looks good there. Like an ominous prologue.

Haha, thanks. I like the sound of that. Ominous prologue... xD I think I may have an idea to turn this into a real story, longer story, but I have to think about it a little more.

That'd be cool. Like this could be the ending of it!

More has been added! Enjoy the creepiness of it all. xD

Awesome! You really need to explain more. XD *chants* Continue! Continue! Continue!

Hmmm, perhaps. But I'm not quite sure how that would be done. It was mostly a freewrite with no particular purpose.

Aww... WRITE MORE ANYWAY.

*ahem* My caps lock button got "stuck".

I guess I'll have to try in that case.

Ah, I see... xD

Yayness! Haha, I like how the dude's in love with her.

Thanks Shadow. XD, yeah, me too!

Swelcome. x3

I sort of wrote a poem based on this.

Oh, really? That's cool. May I see?

Woah, that was scary and sad but I liked it!

OMGOMG. I watched Night at the Museum II the other day, and they stuck a mini dude in an hourglass to die!!! I started thinking about your story right away, and I was all, "DANG that's awesome. :33"

Oh, right I remember that the cowboy! I saw it in IMAX :3

Sweet! ^^ *highfive* Jed rules.

*highfive back* yesh he is awesome! :3

OMG, that is so creepily awesome! You seriously need to write more