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Post by Avé 10/6/2009, 12:20 am

I swear, I always seem to post these poems in pairs. Razz My first two poems that I posted on here, I posted one right after the other. Now look at this! Anyway, it's shortish, free verse, and... yeah. Enjoy.

Can you prove
that what doesn't
exist,
doesn't exist?
Can you prove
that was does
exist,
does exist?
In some cases
Yes
In other cases
No
But in all cases
there is doubt
and hope
and denial
and faith
In all cases
someone
is right
someone
is wrong
In my case
the case of me
the case of you
This is right
We are right
And right to be
together
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Post by rattyjol 10/6/2009, 12:40 am

That's awesome! Smile
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Post by Arianna 10/6/2009, 1:27 am

Yep, it is Smile
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/6/2009, 12:29 pm

Awesome!
I love how you switched tracks by starting with questions to make you think and then somehow you linked it to being with somebody. That's amazing. Good Job (:
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/6/2009, 5:12 pm

Awww! x3 That's really sweet! *wistful sigh*
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Post by Avé 10/7/2009, 7:04 pm

Awesome thanks guys. nod Anyone have ideas for a title?
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Post by rattyjol 10/7/2009, 7:10 pm

Cases? IDK.
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Post by xSophiexx16 10/8/2009, 9:12 am

Proven Feelings?

I don't know.
I'm not very creative with titles.
One of my poems is just called "The Place". XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 10/8/2009, 4:24 pm

What about Proven? Very Happy (I know that's kinda a rip-off of Soph's, but I did come up with it by myself for the record. xD)
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