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Post by Komoda 11/8/2009, 12:31 pm

I have slight Nano block (nah, more like I'm procrastinating) so I'm going to ATTEMPT to write a song.

Maturity: Kiss, love, hugs, hand-holding Very Happy

Fantasy: Daydreamin'

Everyday, it's True

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Verse 1

The daylight slithers away
Through the clouds, it goes astray
And all I can do-o-o
Is lie in the dark, daydreaming of you

Gloomy eyes, head buried in your hands for a while
You look at me, lighting up with a smile
And I hold you close to me
Feeling you kiss me ever so gently

Through the abyss of my dreams
Reality is but a distant gleam

Chorus

It makes me wonder
Oh darling, do you daydream of me?
When you lie in your slumber
Is it my face that you want to see?

And do you ever ask yourself
If I daydream of you?
Well I can answer that myself
Yes. Every day, it's true

Verse 2

I close my eyes, ignoring the lecture
Resting my head on the hard texture
Your eyes meet mine with an impish smile
You have no idea how it drives me wild

Just one look makes me melt
You make me happier than I've ever felt
When you hold my hand delicately
It makes me wish I had narcolepsy

'Cause through the abyss of my dreams
Reality is but a distant gleam

Chorus

It makes me wonder
Oh darling, do you daydream of me?
When you lie in your slumber
Is it my face that you want to see?

And do you ever ask yourself
If I daydream of you?
Well I can answer that myself
Yes. Every day, it's true

Bridge

It kills me every time I look at you
(Look at you)
In the real word, you're always so blue
(Always so blue)
But there's nothing
Oh there's nothing
There's nothing I can do-o-o

But lie in the dark daydreaming of you

Chorus

It makes me wonder
Oh darling, do you daydream of me?
When you lie in your slumber
Is it my face that you want to see?

And do you ever ask yourself
If I daydream of you?
Well I can answer that myself
Yes. Every day, it's true

True-ooh-ooh-ooh

Na-na na-na na naa, yeah

It's true.
~~~~


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Post by shadowsowner888 11/8/2009, 3:21 pm

I like it so far!! Very Happy It's so sweet . . . and I swear I was about to cry, but then I started paying too much attention to the Irish song my brother was playing on the piano . . . >.>
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Post by Komoda 11/8/2009, 3:24 pm

Aw, thanks! ^^ I'm glad you like it. XP

Yay for Irish songs! Very Happy
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/8/2009, 3:40 pm

Swelcome. :3

Lol, not this one. xDD
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Post by Komoda 11/8/2009, 3:49 pm

Hahaha, nice. XP
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Post by Komoda 11/15/2009, 12:45 am

'Kay, think I'm pretty much done now. nod
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Post by shadowsowner888 11/15/2009, 3:25 pm

Awww. x3 That's so cute . . .
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Post by Komoda 11/16/2009, 7:43 pm

Why thank ya. :3
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Post by Cyn431 11/16/2009, 8:33 pm

Aw.... That's a sweet song. smiley
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Post by Komoda 11/16/2009, 11:09 pm

Aw, thank you. Smile
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 11/19/2009, 1:58 am

That's so sweet! It all seemed really delicate and innocent. Everyday, it's True 931695
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Post by Komoda 11/21/2009, 1:05 am

Thankies! That's what I was going for. :3
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Post by rattyjol 11/21/2009, 1:43 am

That's awesome. Smile
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Post by Komoda 11/22/2009, 2:55 pm

Thankies. :3
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