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& So I pray Empty & So I pray

Post by Avé 11/11/2009, 8:31 am

We all know that feeling
When everything seems
So perfect and flawless
Just like in your dreams

But then it all crashes
And something goes wrong
There's temptation rising
You just can't stay strong

So then you do something
You know is not right
It seems like you've lost
Something special that night

And then it feels like
You just want to run
Away from the world
And who you've become

You stay where you are
Since there's no where to go
You'll hide in a corner
Hoping no one will know

However, he finds you there
And asks "How could you?
I thought that you loved me
Please tell me what's true."

"Darling, don't leave me,"
You say as you cry
"I'm sure you are mad,
But don't say goodbye."

He just shakes his head
Turns and walks away
You close your eyes slowly
Then kneel down and pray

You pray that someday
He'll forgive what you've done
He'll be willing to finish
What you had begun


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Post by Avé 11/11/2009, 6:54 pm

Gonna edit it a little bit. I have to learn that writing a poem at 6 in the morning doesn't get too good results.


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Post by shadowsowner888 11/11/2009, 10:36 pm

Awwww . . . Sad You did a wonderful job, Ave. I'm almost crying here.

(Still working on actually crying for once. *sigh* xD My moments always end too soon.)
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Post by Avé 11/11/2009, 10:37 pm

Thanks Shadow. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 11/11/2009, 10:39 pm

Wonderful! C:
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Post by Avé 11/11/2009, 10:48 pm

Thanks Mia! Very Happy
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