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Post by Amber 12/5/2009, 12:41 am

maturity:
I don't really know where the stories going (well I have an idea...) so I'm not sure how mature or fantasy like it'll get
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Post by Arianna 12/5/2009, 4:17 am

It looks interesting. Just a heads up, remember only to capitalize names, proper nouns, and the beginnings of sentences. Smile Other than that, it's really good. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/5/2009, 9:28 am

I agree completely with Ari said. nod I'll check out the next chapter when it's up!
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Post by Akeria 12/5/2009, 10:40 am

I agree with Ari and Shadow, too.
However, your plot looks very interesting, and I'm excited to see what'll happen.
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Post by Amber 12/5/2009, 2:03 pm

thanks, and i'm going edit now.

Posted chapter 3
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Post by catbuster 12/5/2009, 11:06 pm

It sounds, cool so far! Don't forget the fantasy and maturity ratings though Wink
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/6/2009, 10:12 am

Oh, yeah, that's right! xD The maturity and fantasy, you need those.

Anyway, that was cool! Smile I think I'm starting to get a feel of where you're taking the story . . .
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Post by catbuster 12/6/2009, 9:58 pm

Haha, I win I noticed tha before shad! x3
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Post by Amber 12/9/2009, 10:14 pm

Oh, yeah, that's right! xD The maturity and fantasy, you need those.

Anyway, that was cool! I think I'm starting to get a feel of where you're taking the story . . .

what should I put if I have no clue what its going to come to Maturity and fantasy wise?
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Post by shadowsowner888 12/10/2009, 12:03 am

Just update as you go along, then. Smile For now, you could simply put "none yet" for each.
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