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maturity:
I don't really know where the stories going (well I have an idea...) so I'm not sure how mature or fantasy like it'll get
fantasy:
I don't really know where the stories going (well I have an idea...) so I'm not sure how mature or fantasy like it'll get
fantasy:
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Prologue
Chapter 3
Prologue
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- Jade V’olose looked out of the oak paneled windows she did every typical Morning, Every typical day, of every typical year; but this day was not like that.
Jade Woke from slumber one cold morning and stumbled down past the recreation room into the dining room. She looked out of the window and was alarmed; everything was black and white, houses, sidewalks, and even the sun. Jade walked outside, franticly to touch something to make sure that she was not dreaming. However, if she were dreaming, then it would soon become all too real.
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- "I can't believe I've been out creeped by another creeper!'
'I'm the stalker not the stalkee'
Jade’s Actors said passionately, being filmed in their début performance, and to add to the filming there was also a live audience, which only added to the stress and tension of it all.
“That was wonderful!” Jade exclaimed whole hardily, after the curtain closed on the last line from James Williams, who plays the stalker who is obsessed with chocolate and was a dangerous villain. “And remember, practice for the next performance; “Upon a Midnight Pillow”, try to practice it, expressly you whom play Christina and Hailey. It was a great Show today, but we can get it ten times better for next week if we try hard enough!” She called to the actors “Practice on Monday, Be here!” Jade called, from her importance chair, both metaphorically and literally.
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“Come on Ell, we’re going to miss the bus!” Jade called to her little sister Elouise. “Mom will KILL me if you’re late to school again!” Jade said, loosing her patience.
“Why would she hurt you, if I’m the one late?” All called in her ignorance
“Because I’m supposed to be taking you there!”
“Oh, well we’re on now so relax.”
“You do remember that I have a job of my own besides watching you.”
“Yeah so”
“Well I won’t be able to watch you all the time you’ll have to go by yourself one day”
“Ok, but in the Future, Now Jaddy, tell me a story”
“What do you want it to be about” Jade had always been a good, and quick thinking storyteller as long as Elouise had remembered and loved any story that she told. However, always answered with the same response;
“Your dreams”
“Ok, here goes” Jade said, her mind whirling.
Once upon a time, a little girl named Melone Was waking up one morning, but when she walked down into her kitchen everything outside was black and white, no colors; only black and white. She was not sure what this meant, so she told no one. Not a soul. However, Melone was Very very scared, and was not sure if she was just imagining it. She has been worrying about it ever since.
“Sorry it’s so short, I’ll tell you more of it later when it happen-, um I mean when I think of it.
“Well your at school off you go” Jade said hurriedly, unsure why she told El what she had seen. Ah no worries, she is too little to even remotely comprehend that the story and I might be connected in some way.
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- Raindrops poured down heavily as Jade walked into the Devanzo Elcompre museum. Jade walked in hurriedly, handing her ticket to the ticket official quickly, desperate to get out of the rain. Gripping Elouise’s Hand as if she was trying to run away, they went in the Ancient artifacts first.
“”Look Jaddy a mammy!” Elouise announced, looking pleased that she knew what it was.
“It’s a MUMmy, Ell” I told her, a bit irritated by the soaking wetness of her hair.
Elouise’s face darkened a bit but then took Jades hand and guided her over the old Roman things.
“Look paper Jaddy” Ell said, “Read it to me”
“OK” Jade said, not reading the actual paper, but the little 21st century paper that translated it into English so that anyone could read it.
“Here goes”
“The year is 2 B.C”
Lord Vannvill the second was leading his army into war, when one morning he awoke and claimed he saw a Gorvith. A Gorvith is a legendary creature that supposedly guards an ancient Dragon egg that is supposedly still living today. The “dragon” can breathe fire and is supposed to be made in gold. Its hide is supposed to be the purest and most valuable thing that Vannvill ever saw. He claims that when he saw the dragon and the guard, the dragon was the only thing that had color, and that everything else was then black and white. The color of ink he told his people. It’s supposed to be rare to see the little dragon, but more common to just see no color at all. Though he was scared he led his people into battle, and they fought ten times better than they should have been able to. Vannvill claimed afterward that the legendary, valuable creature helped him and told him how to win. However, most people thought he was hallucinating, but others knew better. They believe him and many have hunted for this dragon egg because they knew what the Dragon would be worth if they did catch him. Some people whom hunt for the creature want it just to make sure that the people hunting it for its hide do not get it. However, others want the dragon for science. Others want it for the money for its hide. People are still searching for it to this day, and they continually try to harm the other people looking for the dragon. Many times, they collaborate with each other. Its been mainly divided into two groups now; people trying to save it so that no one harms it, and the people wanting to kill it for its worth. Many scientists and people have different opinions on whether the creature exists. Some people claim that it is all made up. Some claim that they have experienced the black and white, and have seen the guard of the dragon. Others say that they have even seen the Dragon itself.
“Ooh, that’s creepy Jaddy” Elouise said, a chill running up her spine. That same chill went up Jades back to, except for different reasons.
Chapter 3
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- Almost done with Chapter 3
Last edited by Amber on 12/12/2009, 12:25 pm; edited 3 times in total
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It looks interesting. Just a heads up, remember only to capitalize names, proper nouns, and the beginnings of sentences. Other than that, it's really good.
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I agree with Ari and Shadow, too.
However, your plot looks very interesting, and I'm excited to see what'll happen.
However, your plot looks very interesting, and I'm excited to see what'll happen.
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It sounds, cool so far! Don't forget the fantasy and maturity ratings though
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Oh, yeah, that's right! xD The maturity and fantasy, you need those.
Anyway, that was cool! I think I'm starting to get a feel of where you're taking the story . . .
Anyway, that was cool! I think I'm starting to get a feel of where you're taking the story . . .
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Haha, I win I noticed tha before shad! x3
catbuster- Novella Composer
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Oh, yeah, that's right! xD The maturity and fantasy, you need those.
Anyway, that was cool! I think I'm starting to get a feel of where you're taking the story . . .
what should I put if I have no clue what its going to come to Maturity and fantasy wise?
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