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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 10:20 am

Maturity: Average
Fantasy: Average

This rusty old place,
Keeps us safe.
Safe from the dead,
Safe from the living.
Untouched by the venomous beings,
Untouched by the killers about.
Far from our homes,
Far from our lives.
Unable to say goodbye,
Unable to speak to those we love.
Bound to die,
Bound to escape.
The edge of death,
The edge of a knife.
Blood to the floor,
Blood to the walls.
Whispers within,
Whispers around.
This rusty old place,
Is our new home.
This rusty old place,
Keeps us safe.
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/3/2010, 10:27 am

That poem was quite obviously brought to us by Mia. xD

Great job, as usual. :3
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 11:01 am

Yeah. I think its obvious. XD

Me and..

Maturity: Low

poems, are rare. XD

Thankers. smiley
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Post by Avé 1/3/2010, 11:03 am

Ah, another lovely poem of the great Miafire. I like it. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 11:11 am

That's Count Miafire the Great, to you. XD [Nickname officially received on the WI DCT. XD]

And.. thanks. :1
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Post by Arianna 1/3/2010, 11:13 am

It's very... Mia.
I think that should be the rating for your poems.
Maturity: Mia --- Fantasy: Mia
You know? xD
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 12:17 pm

XDDD

If I wrote that, no one would click it. It would scare them off. XD
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Post by Arianna 1/3/2010, 12:18 pm

Lol, but we already expect that on everything you post. smug xD
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 12:23 pm

O_o

Alright then. XD
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/3/2010, 12:37 pm

Great. The second poem from you I read so far. I like it. I'm impressed, I never tought you were the type even by now Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 12:41 pm

I have MUCH more poems, posted on this site. Y'know. XD
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/3/2010, 12:50 pm

Miafire wrote:I have MUCH more poems, posted on this site. Y'know. XD


Alright, master. Smile

*Sidesteps and holds both fists up*
Let's fight- meaning let's see who's better at writing poems, ha ha! Smile

But you truthfully are amazing Mia Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 12:53 pm

You're best with your vocabulary at poems. I'm best with violence, at poems. XD

And, thanks. :3
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/3/2010, 1:03 pm

Aah, can't blame, I memorize the dictionary day-by-day. And blow up my vocalbulary ultimately, thoroughly, and consummately. nod

You should be a movie director when you grow up. A master of gore. evil
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 1:04 pm

Maybe I'd ask WCL, and one day, we'd get Dreams Beyond Death made into a movie. Major gore scenes. XD
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/3/2010, 1:06 pm

Miafire wrote:Maybe I'd ask WCL, and one day, we'd get Dreams Beyond Death made into a movie. Major gore scenes. XD


Hmm. It will majorly have to be split into two films, I beleive. Seriously.. T.T
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Post by Crystal Aura 1/3/2010, 1:08 pm

Psh- But I'd still say you direct the sixth Chucky movie, but you're way too young to be a director right now. righton

Whatta pity... Sad
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 1/3/2010, 5:03 pm

Yes, very obviously another fabulous Mia creation nod I love how you repeated the beginning of the lines twice; it really set the whole poem apart for me. Awesomeness! Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 8:04 pm

Th~ anks! cheesy
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Post by rattyjol 1/3/2010, 9:49 pm

Wow. You enjoy spooky stuff, don't you?
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 9:51 pm

To tell the truth, Ratt-Sama, I ain't likin' horror movies. But I sure like posting spooky and scary things. XD

Weird, aren't I?

x_x
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/5/2010, 11:21 pm

This is random, yush. xD But I wouldn't say Aura's too young . . . after all, a nine-year-old directed a movie once.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/6/2010, 12:05 am

I know. XD

She was talking about me. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/6/2010, 12:24 am

Well, you're not too young either! smug
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/6/2010, 7:44 am

Ha. Lol. But yeah, I wouldn't be able to do a whole movie, UNLESS I had my friends. X3
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