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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/3/2010, 9:49 pm

Maturity: High [In other words... Maturity: Mia]
Fantasy: Low [Aw. XD]

Don't be afraid,
Of what lies beyond the land you've been born in.
Dont be afraid,
Of the truth that rests within.

Take a step,
To a world never seen.
Take a step,
To where you've never been.

Unleash,
What seeks power.
Unleash,
What can run to the tower.

Don't be afraid,
Of the after life.
Don't be afraid,
To use the knife.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/4/2010, 9:31 pm

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Post by rattyjol 1/4/2010, 9:38 pm

Awesome. Smile
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/4/2010, 9:57 pm

Thanks.
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Post by Komoda 1/4/2010, 10:26 pm

Wow, at first, I was thinking, "Aw, Mia's finally writing a happy poem... :')"
Then there was the ending. XD
But I love, love, love it! The last sentence adds an unexpected, grim twist to it.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/4/2010, 10:44 pm

My mind's too sick and twisted and screwed up to write happy poems, Mo. XD

And, thank you!

Or shall I say,

Merci beaucoup, mademoiselle Mo. :3
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Post by Komoda 1/4/2010, 10:48 pm

Aw, well I love your sick and twisted and screwed up poems anyway. XD

De rien, comtess Afi. Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/4/2010, 10:52 pm

XD The only time I'd write a happy poem is.. hmm.. um.. for school. XD Even then.. XD If you see my '3 of my poems' thread, I have two from school. Pretty twisted for a school poem. XD

Merci beaucoup, mille et une fois, ma chere Mo. [Je me demande si Crystal Aura va voir ce message, et te parler en francais, elle aussi? On y vas a la meme ecole. Une ecole francaise. Meme proffesseur. Meme annee. D'accord. Je vais la fermer. XD]
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Post by Avé 1/4/2010, 11:11 pm

Ah, c'est un beau poème, Mia. Scary, oui, mais belle en même temps.

Je ne savais pas que tu parlais francais! J'ai du apprendre certains quand nous sommes allés à Paris, mais je n'ai jamais eté parfait, et c'est pourquoi je encore utiliser Google Translator depuis assez peu de mots.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/4/2010, 11:16 pm

Merci beaucoup, Ave. Je l'apprecies infiniment. Oui, certainement que je parle francais. Mon ecole est un ecole francaise! [Seul probleme, sur mon ordinateur portable [Laptop] je ne peux pas inserer les accents sur les lettres.

Anyways. Thanks! XD


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Post by DiscardedHarmony 1/5/2010, 12:46 am

Uh... k, didn't understand half of that thread Smile Anyways, I loved the poem. Like Mo, I was duped in the beginning into thinking it was a happy, bordering on inspirational, poem. But, alas, 'twas not meant to be. Coming from you, I expect nothing less, though xD Another lovely job!
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Post by Komoda 1/5/2010, 2:00 am

Miafire wrote:XD The only time I'd write a happy poem is.. hmm.. um.. for school. XD Even then.. XD If you see my '3 of my poems' thread, I have two from school. Pretty twisted for a school poem. XD

Merci beaucoup, mille et une fois, ma chere Mo. [Je me demande si Crystal Aura va voir ce message, et te parler en francais, elle aussi? On y vas a la meme ecole. Une ecole francaise. Meme proffesseur. Meme annee. D'accord. Je vais la fermer. XD]
Ca c'est d'accord. J'adore tes poemes, meme s'ils sont triste. Ils sont sublime! grin

Oh, ca c'est tres chouette! Je pense que ta francais est mieux que la mienne. XP Je parles francais jamais a l'ecole, meme si je suis en l'immersion francais.

Je n'ai pas des accents sur mon ordinateur, non plus. Pas sur cette programme, en tout cas.

Ave parles la francais aussi! Chouette. Very Happy
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/5/2010, 7:29 am

Thank you, Harmony! :3 Yeah. I just started talking french, then half of the thread became french. XD

Merci, encore un fois!

Probablement pas. Meme si mon ecole est toute francaise, [Avec du anglais, ici et la,] je parle en anglais a la recre [je l'admets,]. [Plutot seulement la majorite du temps juste avec mes amies.]

C'est si injuste. [Non, pas vraiment. XD]

Ouais! cheesy
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Post by wolflover96 1/5/2010, 7:30 pm

really cool!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/5/2010, 10:00 pm

Thank you!
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/5/2010, 11:17 pm

Lol, Mia, le beau travail. :3 dans mon humeur braindead actuelle, j'ai trouvé cette dernière ligne… xD drôle que je suis si étrange.

And . . . yes, I used a translator. x3

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 1/6/2010, 12:09 am

Don't be afraid, To use the knife.

Heh. That kinda does sound funny. XD

J'veux dire.. ben oui. Celui-ci en ait drole, non? Euh.. un peux. Ouais, je l'admets. Et moi j'en suis pas oblige d'utiliser un 'translater' [Ca fait du bien dire 'translater'. XD] mais.. ouais. D'accord. J'vais me taire.
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