Forever Gone
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Forever Gone
On our last day
My head held high
Awaiting the sky to fall
As the clouds breathe
And the World will burn with my love
My tears will dry with the Drying wheat
As the flowers Wither my heart will fail
While the Earth weeps my veins bleed
Poison burning through acid rain
Shifting perspectives frozen ice
The never claiming ocean grays
And as our Mother looks down
I watch as you walk before me
Then the world will burn with our tears
And our love will fade like these words
Forever disappearing behind the fog
My head held high
Awaiting the sky to fall
As the clouds breathe
And the World will burn with my love
My tears will dry with the Drying wheat
As the flowers Wither my heart will fail
While the Earth weeps my veins bleed
Poison burning through acid rain
Shifting perspectives frozen ice
The never claiming ocean grays
And as our Mother looks down
I watch as you walk before me
Then the world will burn with our tears
And our love will fade like these words
Forever disappearing behind the fog
PriestessYuki- Inspired Novice
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Re: Forever Gone
This is absolutely beautiful! Great wording, and I love the entire feel of it too. Awesome job!
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
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Join date : 2009-07-13
Re: Forever Gone
Thanks for the reply. ^_^ Glad you liked it.
PriestessYuki- Inspired Novice
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Join date : 2010-01-21
Re: Forever Gone
That poem was beautiful. ^^ I got this sad aura from reading it . . . you did a good job. :3
Re: Forever Gone
Aww... it feels so sweetly sad, like this was meant to be, but it's horrible anyway. I like your wording, this was lovely. ^^
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