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Post by PriestessYuki 1/21/2010, 9:18 pm

On our last day
My head held high
Awaiting the sky to fall
As the clouds breathe

And the World will burn with my love
My tears will dry with the Drying wheat
As the flowers Wither my heart will fail
While the Earth weeps my veins bleed

Poison burning through acid rain
Shifting perspectives frozen ice
The never claiming ocean grays
And as our Mother looks down

I watch as you walk before me
Then the world will burn with our tears
And our love will fade like these words
Forever disappearing behind the fog
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Post by Komoda 1/21/2010, 9:29 pm

This is absolutely beautiful! Great wording, and I love the entire feel of it too. Awesome job! Smile
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Post by PriestessYuki 1/22/2010, 5:31 pm

Thanks for the reply. ^_^ Glad you liked it.
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Post by shadowsowner888 1/23/2010, 9:57 am

That poem was beautiful. ^^ I got this sad aura from reading it . . . you did a good job. :3
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 1/23/2010, 9:52 pm

Aww... it feels so sweetly sad, like this was meant to be, but it's horrible anyway. I like your wording, this was lovely. ^^
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