The Verge of Breaking

:3 Amazing job, Keri. This is definitely a song. I could even hear a tune in my head as I read it. x3 It actually sounds really good, too.

Lol, well, the words themselves anyway, instead of my imaginary tune, are epic. They're so sweet and awesome.

Thanks.

You really did a great job with the song. It's very well written and it has a lovely rythym.

Thanks.
It took all of twenty minutes, to be honest. Once I know what I want to write about, I can just do it. The hard part is rhyming. -_-

Wow, it's so cool that you're able to do that! I can sometimes, but rhyming is also difficult for me. Usually, they come out bad, though.

I look up words that rhyme with a word, and then when they give me stupid ones, I can usually get an idea. Lol.

XD That's awesome.

Lol, thanks.

This. Is. Completely. Amazing!

It's amazing, I love how you made it have verses like a song. The title is great too!

Thank you?

Why the question mark?

Mistake.

I asked my Mom a question at the same time, so I put that. My bad.

Thank you.

I had the extremely strong urge to give you a reputation point dunno way xD

Anyway, I love the poem!!

Thank you x2!

This is epic, Akeria! It's amazing how you can have speaking in the song but still make it have a good rhythm. Great job!

Thank you.

Amazing. You should totally record this as a song.

This was sooooo good.
It explains a part of my life..... )':
Great job!

Thanks, Anita! I actually wrote the melody for it. I'm working on the piano part. But once I get it down, I'll record it and put it up.

Oh, I'm sorry Amazon. Thank you, though.

Keri, this is amazing. You're so talented, did you know that?

Thank you, Ave.

Whoah, that was really awesome. =)

Thanks, Imagine.