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Post by Novastare 3/1/2010, 6:31 pm

Bark, Bark, A lonely sound,
Meow, Meow, one more goes down.
Look see over there!
One more dead and nobodies aware......
You! You! See the crate,
Before it's too late!
Their taking him off don't you care?
Their taking him off aren't you aware?

Moo, Moo, A lonely sound,
Neigh, Niegh, one more goes down.
Their's my friend in this grave,
If only you had seen!
Theirs my friend in the gound,
Do you care about him Marine?

You say you care for people,
You fight a never ending war,
You say you save the world,
But you simply just ignore.
The fact is that he's gone,
And his soul is to evaporate,
The fact is that he's gone,
And I was just too late.

Squeek, Squeek, a lonely sound,
Baa, Baa, one more goes down.
Sad, Sad, you look away,
Too bad, Too bad, why don't you stay?
I guess you can go,
nobody really cares,
I guess you can go,
Cruelty spreds and shares.
I'm important,
And they say that you are too,
They speak up for us,
In everything we do.
But when my friend was turtored,
Did you stand up for him?
When they all are dieing,
Who stands up for them?


(Animal Awareness)


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Post by Avé 3/1/2010, 6:42 pm

This is epic. A great poem, and a great message. Nice job, Nova. Smile
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Post by Novastare 3/1/2010, 6:44 pm

Thanks! I think I might stop doing poems about animals for a week. Lol, I'm going to do some other topics I hope.
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/1/2010, 10:25 pm

Wow, great job! A very worthy topic, too. nod You're so good at poetry!
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Post by Novastare 3/2/2010, 8:45 pm

Thanks!! I'm not as good as a lot of people here though. I don't think I'm that great. I think I rhyme too much. :/ Lol, I guess I just like rhyming stuff.
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Post by Novastare 3/8/2010, 8:32 pm

I've decided not to do one every week. I might be rushed and not do one good and so I'll just make one every so often. Very Happy
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