If all I had was time.....
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shadowsowner888
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If all I had was time.....
If all I had was time,
I'd go back and make you mine.
Spring, Spring, it comes too late,
I turn around and face my fate.
Winter, Winter go away,
I see no light for another day.
Cold, Cold, come no more,
I no longer face the darkening door.
Time, Time, stop your hands,
I know not those aweful plans.
Death, Death, stop your bite,
I feel the fear and taste the fright.
If all I had was time,
I'd go back and make you mine.
Reach, Reach, arms to the table,
Write this note, if you are able.
Dear, Dear, I fear to go away,
This world bids me not to stay.
Time, Time, the lonely word,
No more to hear a singing bird.
Cry, Cry, cry not for me,
Angels coming I do see.
Father, Father, take me home,
These tired feet can no longer roam.
Dove, Dove, take my note,
Hear these words that I have wrote,
Time, Time, I have no more,
But if I did, this I swore.
Take it now you heaven Dove,
Take this last note, to my love.
If all I had was time,
Promise I'd go back and you would be mine.
Last edited by Novastare on 3/11/2010, 9:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: If all I had was time.....
Awesome job, Nova! You're a great poet!
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Re: If all I had was time.....
Thanks, you too Brin!!
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Re: If all I had was time.....
Oooh, I love this one. :3 The repetition of words adds a lovely touch.
Re: If all I had was time.....
I love the repetition; it makes everything just a bit more impactful. Lovely!
Re: If all I had was time.....
Lovely lovely lovely poem, Nova! I love the colors and everything, it adds a nice touch.
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Re: If all I had was time.....
Thanks so much!
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Re: If all I had was time.....
This is so pretty! I love it.
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