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If all I had was time.....

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Post by Novastare 3/10/2010, 2:30 pm


If all I had was time,
I'd go back and make you mine.
Spring, Spring, it comes too late,
I turn around and face my fate.
Winter, Winter go away,
I see no light for another day.
Cold, Cold, come no more,
I no longer face the darkening door.



Time, Time, stop your hands,
I know not those aweful plans.
Death, Death, stop your bite,
I feel the fear and taste the fright.




If all I had was time,
I'd go back and make you mine.
Reach, Reach, arms to the table,
Write this note, if you are able.
Dear, Dear, I fear to go away,
This world bids me not to stay.
Time, Time, the lonely word,
No more to hear a singing bird.
Cry, Cry, cry not for me,
Angels coming I do see.
Father, Father, take me home,
These tired feet can no longer roam.



Dove, Dove, take my note,
Hear these words that I have wrote,
Time, Time, I have no more,
But if I did, this I swore.
Take it now you heaven Dove,
Take this last note, to my love.
If all I had was time,
Promise I'd go back and you would be mine.



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Post by Puckspaw 3/10/2010, 3:03 pm

Awesome job, Nova! You're a great poet! Very Happy
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Post by Novastare 3/10/2010, 7:02 pm

Thanks, you too Brin!!
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Post by shadowsowner888 3/10/2010, 7:25 pm

Oooh, I love this one. :3 The repetition of words adds a lovely touch.
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Post by Novastare 3/10/2010, 9:02 pm

Thanks, Very Happy
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 3/11/2010, 6:42 pm

I love the repetition; it makes everything just a bit more impactful. Lovely! Smile
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/11/2010, 7:08 pm

Lovely lovely lovely poem, Nova! Very Happy I love the colors and everything, it adds a nice touch. nod
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Post by Novastare 3/11/2010, 9:57 pm

Thanks so much!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 3/18/2010, 2:46 pm

Epic! It really flows, if you know what I mean! Very Happy
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Post by Avé 3/18/2010, 3:33 pm

This is so pretty! I love it. Very Happy
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Post by Novastare 3/18/2010, 7:26 pm

Thanks! Very Happy
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