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Post by Hahaha818 3/15/2010, 5:20 pm

Everywhere I look
There's blue all around
I like this world
But I feel I might drown

I go to the top
I can finally breathe
There's no more blue
I can clearly see

I liked it better
When all was blue
I go back to that place
There's so much I can do

Again I surface
Just for a second
I need to catch my breath
But the blue seems to beckon

Back to the blue
Back to my little world
Where everything that's there
Just seems to swirl

I wish I could stay
For a little while longer
But I can't be in the blue
Unless my lungs become stronger

I get out reluctantly
Trying not to argue
'Cause someday I'll go back
To my world of blue

Can you guess what this poem is about? tongue


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Post by shadowsowner888 3/15/2010, 5:30 pm

That's wonderful. :3 I think it's so pretty, especially because it's about the color blue, which I love. cheesy
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Post by Hahaha818 3/15/2010, 5:32 pm

Thanks!!
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Post by FOREIGN?! 3/15/2010, 5:59 pm

Epicccc! Very Happy A poem about blue-ish-ness? Revolutionary! xD
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Post by CookieMonster 3/16/2010, 1:57 pm

Great Job righton Go blue!!
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Post by Hahaha818 3/16/2010, 3:00 pm

Thanks! grin
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Post by Novastare 3/16/2010, 3:33 pm

Ooo, I felt like I was on vacation when I read it, don't know why, it's just beautiful! Go blue!!!
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Post by Hahaha818 3/16/2010, 4:12 pm

Thanks, Nova!!!
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Post by Novastare 3/16/2010, 4:15 pm

No problem, Smile Great poem!
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