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Post by DiscardedHarmony 4/11/2010, 1:00 am

Paint my forehead and cheekbones with swathes of black, so I blend with the onyx and ebony.
I want to look like I'm drowning.

You will dye my hands in shades that are named as vermilion and scarlet.
I want to look like I'm bleeding.

My stomach must rival a blue jay's wing, with my feet bordering on indigo.
I want to look like I'm freezing.

Tinge my shoulder blades and earlobes with colors of grapefruit and safety vests.
I want to look like I'm burning.

Splash the rest of me white.
I want alabaster, chalk, the whites of a healthy persons eyeballs, the freshly opened pages of a book, an angels wing.
I want to look like I'm disappearing.
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Post by Avé 4/11/2010, 1:17 am

Oh, how I've missed your poems. This is wonderful. Smile
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 4/11/2010, 1:20 am

Tehe, than I shall post the rest that I've written since I had my computer last. ^^

That last sentence didn't make sense, did it?
And thank you <3
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Post by shadowsowner888 4/11/2010, 9:10 am

I think the last line made sense! Very Happy

Awesomeness here. nod
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Post by SaddleClub 4/11/2010, 12:41 pm

Oooh, I like this!! Good job!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 4/14/2010, 5:57 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:I think the last line made sense! Very Happy

Awesomeness here. nod
Good xD
And thanks to you n Saddle <3
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Post by PugsRock 4/14/2010, 8:51 pm

Oh, wow, this is great. (: And the last line does make sense, at least to me.
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Post by Novastare 4/14/2010, 10:42 pm

Nice, the last stanza is my fav!
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