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A Different Point of View

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Post by SaddleClub 5/10/2010, 12:33 am

Rocks are just rocks, you say
Just black, gray, brown, and red
But they can be candy treats
With plentiful flavors instead

The sun, to most, is just a star
Warming every place
But some see it as a lemon
With a sweet and sour taste

You know your favorite melody
You'd know it anywhere
But have you ever imagined it
The color of a bear?

Grass can simply be just grass
To fill up empty land
But imagine it as green sprinkles
Like wonderful flavored sand

Colors are just average colors
A rainbow in the sky
But some are very soft and smooth
Some are rough and dry

The ocean is an ocean
Nothing new to see
But a really big cup of juice
Is what it can also be

For once, take a moment and forget what you know
And you just might find
Not everything is as it seems
Just open up your mind

Add some flavor to the sky
Color in a song
Feel the texture of the rainbow
Just what can go wrong?

Take away the blandness
And just try something new
Try a minute to see the world
From a different point of view
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Post by Hahaha818 5/10/2010, 2:51 pm

Great job, Saddle! It's really good. I thought at first that it was really weird, but then I read the end and got why it was so weird. Lol
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Post by Novastare 5/10/2010, 3:07 pm

Beautiful, and very true!! Great job Saddle!
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Post by DiscardedHarmony 5/10/2010, 3:32 pm

Awh, I love it ^^ I like the rainbow part the best :3
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Post by Avé 5/10/2010, 4:56 pm

This is so pretty, Saddle!
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Post by rattyjol 5/10/2010, 7:53 pm

I love it! Very Happy
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Post by SaddleClub 5/10/2010, 10:27 pm

Thanks everyone Smile
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