A Different Point of View
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A Different Point of View
Rocks are just rocks, you say
Just black, gray, brown, and red
But they can be candy treats
With plentiful flavors instead
The sun, to most, is just a star
Warming every place
But some see it as a lemon
With a sweet and sour taste
You know your favorite melody
You'd know it anywhere
But have you ever imagined it
The color of a bear?
Grass can simply be just grass
To fill up empty land
But imagine it as green sprinkles
Like wonderful flavored sand
Colors are just average colors
A rainbow in the sky
But some are very soft and smooth
Some are rough and dry
The ocean is an ocean
Nothing new to see
But a really big cup of juice
Is what it can also be
For once, take a moment and forget what you know
And you just might find
Not everything is as it seems
Just open up your mind
Add some flavor to the sky
Color in a song
Feel the texture of the rainbow
Just what can go wrong?
Take away the blandness
And just try something new
Try a minute to see the world
From a different point of view
Just black, gray, brown, and red
But they can be candy treats
With plentiful flavors instead
The sun, to most, is just a star
Warming every place
But some see it as a lemon
With a sweet and sour taste
You know your favorite melody
You'd know it anywhere
But have you ever imagined it
The color of a bear?
Grass can simply be just grass
To fill up empty land
But imagine it as green sprinkles
Like wonderful flavored sand
Colors are just average colors
A rainbow in the sky
But some are very soft and smooth
Some are rough and dry
The ocean is an ocean
Nothing new to see
But a really big cup of juice
Is what it can also be
For once, take a moment and forget what you know
And you just might find
Not everything is as it seems
Just open up your mind
Add some flavor to the sky
Color in a song
Feel the texture of the rainbow
Just what can go wrong?
Take away the blandness
And just try something new
Try a minute to see the world
From a different point of view
SaddleClub- Best-Selling Author
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Re: A Different Point of View
Great job, Saddle! It's really good. I thought at first that it was really weird, but then I read the end and got why it was so weird. Lol
Hahaha818- Short Story Writer
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Re: A Different Point of View
Beautiful, and very true!! Great job Saddle!
Novastare- Novella Composer
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Re: A Different Point of View
This is so pretty, Saddle!
Avé- Best-Selling Author
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Re: A Different Point of View
I love it!
rattyjol- Best-Selling Author
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Re: A Different Point of View
Thanks everyone
SaddleClub- Best-Selling Author
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Age : 28
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