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Condemned With My Weapon.

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Post by Rai 6/26/2010, 6:46 pm

Maturity: Extremely High, a'cause there's blood and knives. *tries to look innocent*
Fantasy: Uhm, I wouldn't do this to anyone? XD



Condemned With My Weapon. Knife20attack
CoNdEmEd WiTh My WeApOn.




I sit here, in the crisp air
In the complete dark
With a shiny, silver object in my hand
Listening to the song of a lark

This will be the last thing you hear
This song of the lark
For I am here
Waiting in the dark

The last thing you will know
That you will see
Is a bloodthirsty, terrorizing
Image of me

You've caused me torture
You've caused me pain
So here and now
You will be slain

You cannot undo
what you've done
Your legs are tied
You cannot run

You can't run away
Not this time
I will give your heart the pain
That you gave mine

I hunger for your terror
I can only think of your scream
When you see me in the dark
But soon that won't even be a dream

Now here we are
You eyes wild with fear
I laugh and I smile
For your end is near

I tap the end of the blade
And you try to yell
But you can't be unbound
From your and my living *heck*

I lay it to your neck
And see tears run down your cheek
You aren't as strong as you seem
You're actually quite weak

I look at the end of my blade
Now covered in red
And I smile maniacally
I've condemned you to a permanent bed.



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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/26/2010, 8:28 pm

GYAH. LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOOOOVVVVVEEEEE this one, Kitkat! -eye twitch-
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Post by Rai 6/26/2010, 8:39 pm

Lol, Mia, I thought you'd like it! xD
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Post by rattyjol 6/26/2010, 8:42 pm

Ooh. Creepy. o_0 I love it! applause
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Post by Avé 6/26/2010, 8:42 pm

Woah. o.0 This one is amazing!
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Post by Rai 6/26/2010, 8:46 pm

Thank ya, Ratty! :3
xD I accidentally typed it Rayyu. xD

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/26/2010, 8:47 pm

It makes me feel like my dark poems just got pwned. -_-
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Post by rattyjol 6/26/2010, 8:48 pm

Ooh. I like that name. Very Happy
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Post by Rai 6/26/2010, 8:52 pm

Mia, this does not pwn your epic, darkful poems. I felt a little angry/dark at the moment, and decided to give a dark poem a go. Your dark poems pwn mine 1000%! nod

Lol, ratty!
I shall call you Rayyu! >Very Happy
Feel my evil wrath of Rayyu-ness!
xD
We be getting off topic. Surprised
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/26/2010, 8:54 pm

Not really. tongue I admit that sometimes I seek Ave's help, for rhymes. XD
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Post by Rai 6/26/2010, 8:55 pm

Yarly! alien
But that's okay: I ask Reeses for advice, sometimes, too. nod
I am really overusing the nod smiley right now. x3


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Post by Malicious Nightmares 6/26/2010, 8:56 pm

You think? A got a beautiful PM from you.. invaded with nod smileys. XD
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Post by Rai 6/26/2010, 8:59 pm

No, I lied.
Yes, I really think that! Very Happy
xDDD
nod

thought I might add that in there. Wink






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nod





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Post by Rai 7/9/2010, 8:00 pm

I made it look as pretty as a deathly poem can get. XD
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Post by conich 7/9/2010, 8:06 pm

Totally awesome Rai! Dark and creepy and awesome! nod
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