There is no crime,
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Johnny Gal
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There is no crime,
(( M&F High, blood, torture, laughing , death. None, ))
Your innocent laugh, it reaches out,
Angels and Demons, they fly about.
From my lovely bones, to my twisted face,
You laugh and think, oh what a disgrace.
You dance and play, it rains pure blood,
I lift my hand, but you kick it in the mud.
You raise your knife, such a beautiful thing,
I cry and beg, but your demon's sing.
You smile and bend down, who is the fairest?
"You, I cry," I'm so embarrassed.
You hold it close, ever so close to my side,
I break, I break, to think I should have died.
My bloody hands, they reach below,
What could you think, what could you possibly know?
You laugh, so simple, you could take a life,
I close my eyes, I draw my knife.
Drip, drip, the rain pours down,
Your silent screams, a lovely sound.
I have no license, yet I drive,
I drive my knife, into your side.
I laugh, it's funny, to take your life,
I laugh, it's slippery, blood on my knife.
The demons see, and they don't laugh,
They were so delighted, with my other half.
Now it rains, but it's not my blood,
"Aww did the little birdie hurt her love?"
I take my knife, right through your skin,
Everywhere you killed, everywhere you've been.
Gone away, but my troubles have simply ceased,
For I know, there's no crime in killing a beast.
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Re: There is no crime,
Thanks, but not dark enough, I know. I fail at total darkness, I think I'll stick to mind games. Thanks Mia!
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What Mia said! This is epic! O: I think it's pretty dark, but then again, I struggle to ascertain the ability to write very darkly at all, sooo....!
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Re: There is no crime,
Thanks Mia! Coming from you,I would believe that.
Thanks Mooney!! I'm sure you can, maybe different, but thats good. I mean I'm still trying to catch up, so my word isn't that great. I think it's cool how everyone does dark poetry a bit different.
Thanks Mooney!! I'm sure you can, maybe different, but thats good. I mean I'm still trying to catch up, so my word isn't that great. I think it's cool how everyone does dark poetry a bit different.
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that is sooo epiccaalllll i love it! its amazing!
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Re: There is no crime,
Holy crap.
This is seriously amazing. *-*
Like, brilliantly done. Seriously.
I'm really amazed: this poem is one of the best I've ever read. :3
This is seriously amazing. *-*
Like, brilliantly done. Seriously.
I'm really amazed: this poem is one of the best I've ever read. :3
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Re: There is no crime,
Thanks Madder, it means a lot to me!
Wow, thanks Rai, was not expecting a comment like that at all. Thanks so much!
Wow, thanks Rai, was not expecting a comment like that at all. Thanks so much!
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... how.
How do you write such amazing poems? My gosh, Nova, this one is brilliant.
How do you write such amazing poems? My gosh, Nova, this one is brilliant.
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Re: There is no crime,
Thanks so much Ave, coming from you is amazing. You're an awesome poet! You write poetry I couldn't even dream of attempting, thanks so much!
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Re: There is no crime,
This one, as the others have already said, is EPIC! Totally amazing!
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Re: There is no crime,
Aww, thanks Mandy!
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Amazing job, Nova.
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