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There is no crime,

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Post by Novastare 7/7/2010, 6:18 pm


(( M&F High, blood, torture, laughing Very Happy, death. None, ))







Your innocent laugh, it reaches out,
Angels and Demons, they fly about.
From my lovely bones, to my twisted face,
You laugh and think, oh what a disgrace.
You dance and play, it rains pure blood,
I lift my hand, but you kick it in the mud.
You raise your knife, such a beautiful thing,
I cry and beg, but your demon's sing.


You smile and bend down, who is the fairest?
"You, I cry," I'm so embarrassed.
You hold it close, ever so close to my side,
I break, I break, to think I should have died.
My bloody hands, they reach below,
What could you think, what could you possibly know?
You laugh, so simple, you could take a life,
I close my eyes, I draw my knife.
Drip, drip, the rain pours down,
Your silent screams, a lovely sound.

I have no license, yet I drive,
I drive my knife, into your side.
I laugh, it's funny, to take your life,
I laugh, it's slippery, blood on my knife.
The demons see, and they don't laugh,
They were so delighted, with my other half.

Now it rains, but it's not my blood,
"Aww did the little birdie hurt her love?"
I take my knife, right through your skin,
Everywhere you killed, everywhere you've been.
Gone away, but my troubles have simply ceased,
For I know, there's no crime in killing a beast.

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/7/2010, 8:04 pm

Oi. This is epic. o,O
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Post by Novastare 7/7/2010, 8:05 pm

Thanks, but not dark enough, I know. Sad I fail at total darkness, I think I'll stick to mind games. Very Happy Thanks Mia!
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 7/7/2010, 8:10 pm

It's actually pretty dark! Trust me on this! :3
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Post by Dragon Lover 7/7/2010, 8:10 pm

What Mia said! This is epic! O: I think it's pretty dark, but then again, I struggle to ascertain the ability to write very darkly at all, sooo....!
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Post by Novastare 7/7/2010, 8:19 pm

Thanks Mia! Coming from you,I would believe that. Very Happy


Thanks Mooney!! Razz I'm sure you can, maybe different, but thats good. I mean I'm still trying to catch up, so my word isn't that great. I think it's cool how everyone does dark poetry a bit different. grin
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Post by Johnny Gal 7/8/2010, 12:09 pm

that is sooo epiccaalllll i love it! its amazing!
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Post by Rai 7/8/2010, 12:12 pm

Holy crap.
This is seriously amazing. *-*
Like, brilliantly done. Seriously.
I'm really amazed: this poem is one of the best I've ever read. :3
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Post by Novastare 7/8/2010, 1:35 pm

Thanks Madder, it means a lot to me! Razz


Wow, thanks Rai, was not expecting a comment like that at all. Thanks so much! Very Happy
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Post by Avé 7/8/2010, 1:40 pm

... how.

How do you write such amazing poems? My gosh, Nova, this one is brilliant.
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Post by Novastare 7/8/2010, 1:48 pm

Thanks so much Ave, coming from you is amazing. You're an awesome poet! You write poetry I couldn't even dream of attempting, thanks so much!
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Post by conich 7/8/2010, 2:01 pm

This one, as the others have already said, is EPIC! Totally amazing!
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Post by Novastare 7/8/2010, 2:03 pm

Aww, thanks Mandy!
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Post by Puckspaw 7/8/2010, 3:46 pm

Amazing job, Nova. nod
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Post by Novastare 7/8/2010, 3:55 pm

Thanks Bryn!
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