The Making Of.
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The Making Of.
by Rai 7/9/2010, 7:22 pm
Maturity: Nothing inappropriate here. xP
Fantasy: None? I'm not really sure, 'cause this is kinda true, but I don't know... xP
&&the&making&of&&
20 scribbled words across a paper make a story
Billions of raindrops make an ocean
Trillions of sand grains make a desert
4 chemicals make a lotion
2 apples make 14 more
1 sun makes a day
5 entrances make 5 exits
1 check makes your pay
18 smiles make another
600 rocks make a mountain
1 piece of land makes 50 more
1 water source makes a bountiful fountain
4 pieces of food makes a feast
13 minerals make a rock
Millions of snowflakes make a wonderland
600 pins make a breaking lock
6 billion people make a world
2 words make a rhyme
1 seed makes a plant
10 cents makes a dime
60 brushstrokes make a painting
5 trillion stars make a night
30 cocoa beans make a chocolate bar
but 2 wrongs don't make a right
Fantasy: None? I'm not really sure, 'cause this is kinda true, but I don't know... xP
&&the&making&of&&
20 scribbled words across a paper make a story
Billions of raindrops make an ocean
Trillions of sand grains make a desert
4 chemicals make a lotion
2 apples make 14 more
1 sun makes a day
5 entrances make 5 exits
1 check makes your pay
18 smiles make another
600 rocks make a mountain
1 piece of land makes 50 more
1 water source makes a bountiful fountain
4 pieces of food makes a feast
13 minerals make a rock
Millions of snowflakes make a wonderland
600 pins make a breaking lock
6 billion people make a world
2 words make a rhyme
1 seed makes a plant
10 cents makes a dime
60 brushstrokes make a painting
5 trillion stars make a night
30 cocoa beans make a chocolate bar
but 2 wrongs don't make a right
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Re: The Making Of.
by Nightowl 7/9/2010, 10:47 pm
Wow! That's really awesome, Rai. (: I love the way it ends, the comparisons are lovely, and it's really unique. <3
Also, one thing; there's six billion people in the world, not trillions like you say in the fourth stanza. Just something I thought I'd point out. xP In case you wanted to know.
Also, one thing; there's six billion people in the world, not trillions like you say in the fourth stanza. Just something I thought I'd point out. xP In case you wanted to know.
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Re: The Making Of.
by Rai 7/9/2010, 10:50 pm
Thank you, Nightowl! That means a lot coming from you! 
Oops, I totally failed right thur. XD Thanks for pointing that out. ;3
Oops, I totally failed right thur. XD Thanks for pointing that out. ;3
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