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Post by SaddleClub 6/17/2009, 4:12 pm

Maturity: Um, I'm not sure yet. I haven't decided how this is gonna end up.
Fantasy: Does meeting celeberties count? XD


Okay, so this is yet another Jonas Brothers fanfiction, but I still wanna post it. I hope you like it.



I walked around the park for the 15th time. It was extremely boring. My friends didn’t wanna come just cuz it was cloudy and looked like it might rain. I was annoyed.

I gave up on walking and sat on a bench, taking out my iPod. I scrolled through the playlists till I found Lines, Vines and Trying Times - the Jonas Brothers newest album. I loved these songs.

I picked Before The Storm and began to relax. I didn’t feel mad anymore, and I was lost in my own little world.

I had it set on shuffle, so Paranoid came next. I smiled and started singing along softly to myself. I loved moments like this.

Suddenly, a dog bark snapped me out of my trance. I paused it and looked around. A golden puppy was sitting next to me. I smiled and put my iPod away.

“Hi, little guy,” I said to the dog. “Where’s your owner?” I glanced around, looking for people who might own this puppy. I didn’t see anyone nearby, so I watched the puppy and made sure he was okay. I couldn’t find a collar, so I had no clue who he could belong to.

After about five minutes, I heard someone yell, “Hey, that’s our dog!” The voice sounded familiar, but I had no clue where I could’ve heard it before. I looked up and saw 4 figures running toward me, one a lot shorter than the other 3. They all had sunglasses and hats on; it looked like they were trying to hide.

When they reached me, I said, “This is your dog?”

In response, one reached down and put a collar around the dog’s neck. Then he attached a leash and muttered, “Yeah.” The voice sounded really familiar.

“Sorry if he was annoying you,” another one said. “We wouldn’t have lost him if someone hadn’t loosened his collar.”

“I’m sorry!” the smallest one said. “It looked tight; I didn’t think he’d slip out!”

“What if the person who found him wasn’t so nice?” the one holding the leash said. He sounded genuinely concerned for the dog.

“Sorry, Nick,” the small one whispered again. One identified 3 to go.

“It’s okay, Frankie,” the one named Nick said. “Sorry for freaking out.”

“You have a right to freak out,” a different one said. “Elvis is your dog.”

Nick? Frankie? Elvis? Familiar voices? Something clicked in my mind.

“Um,” I said. “This might sound crazy, but....are you the Jonas Brothers?”

They all looked at each other. Nick, the one holding the leash, took off his sunglasses. “Yeah,” he said. “That’s us.”


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Post by shadowsowner888 6/17/2009, 5:48 pm

OMG! affraid This is awesome!! (I'm becoming a Jonas person again. XD) Lol, except, the part about their new album makes me JEALOUS. XD I have like two hundred dollars worth of checks to cash in at the bank, but I don't have any money to spend right on-hand. Razz It's annoying to wait.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/18/2009, 3:37 pm

Thanks Shadow!! Very Happy My friend can't get it yet either; she said she's mad at all of us that have it. XD
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/18/2009, 3:44 pm

Lol, I can imagine. XD
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Post by SaddleClub 6/18/2009, 3:47 pm

I love their new album; I'm so glad my mom went out and bought it for me. Smile (I think she just did that so I wouldn't complain, but I'm still happy about it. XD)
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/18/2009, 5:51 pm

Lucky. XD
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Post by SaddleClub 6/18/2009, 6:01 pm

So, anyway, back on topic....

I think I'll write more soon.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 6/18/2009, 6:25 pm

This is a good story Saddle! I love how many JB stories there are. Like here and WI. There's so many!!! xD
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Post by SaddleClub 6/18/2009, 8:00 pm

Thanks!! Smile I thought there might be too many, that's why I was about to not post it.
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/18/2009, 9:08 pm

Hey, I love JB stories, so post as many as you want! xD I particularly like that we can have romance here.
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Post by iGrievous 6/18/2009, 10:07 pm

Bleah, I'm bored of these fanfics, but good.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/19/2009, 3:51 pm

Uh, thanks.
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Post by SaddleClub 6/19/2009, 3:51 pm

shadowsowner888 wrote:Hey, I love JB stories, so post as many as you want! xD I particularly like that we can have romance here.

Haha, thanks. Smile And yeah, that's good. Smile
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Post by DreamCatcher81 6/19/2009, 4:14 pm

Yah lol. It kinda stunk on WI. You couldn't have any romance! xD
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Post by SaddleClub 6/19/2009, 4:25 pm

Yeah
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Post by iGrievous 6/19/2009, 4:32 pm

Swelcome.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 6/19/2009, 4:36 pm

Haha. Swelcome is so awesome!
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Post by SaddleClub 6/19/2009, 4:43 pm

My friend came up with it
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Post by iGrievous 6/20/2009, 9:19 am

Hey, Dream, new reeds do taste nice, don't they?
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Post by SaddleClub 6/22/2009, 7:19 pm

I'll write more soon
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/23/2009, 12:59 pm

Yay!! Very Happy
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Post by SaddleClub 6/23/2009, 3:56 pm

I am writing more right now. Smile
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Post by shadowsowner888 6/24/2009, 7:18 am

cheers
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Post by SaddleClub 6/25/2009, 8:30 pm

I'm posting the next part now. I don't know how good it is. I kinda stole a name from a book cuz I didn't wanna use my name in this story. XD
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Post by SaddleClub 6/25/2009, 8:32 pm

They all seemed to look at me expectantly as they took off their hats and sunglasses. I just sat there; I didn’t know what they wanted.

“Um....should we start running?” Kevin (who I could identify now that his sunglasses were off) said.

“Or call security?” Joe added.

“Uh, no,” I said. “Why?”

“We thought you’d be one of those people who go crazy just from talking about us,” Nick said. “We were expecting to be attacked.”

“No, I’m not going to attack you,” I said. “I’m not that crazy. But if you had met any of my friends,” I added with a smile, “you definitely would’ve had to call security.”

Nick smiled. I couldn’t focus on any of the others for some reason. “So are you a fan?” he asked.

“Yeah, of course!” I said. “Before Elvis came along, I was listening to Lines, Vines and Trying Times. I love all the songs.”

“Which one’s your favorite?” Joe asked.

I laughed. “Do you really expect me to answer that? I’ll end up naming every song on the CD!”

“Well,” Nick said, “if you had to pick one to listen to right now, which would it be?”

I thought about this for a minute. It was a simple question, but I couldn’t think of an answer. I loved all the songs; it was so hard to pick just one!

“Um....” I finally said. “Probably Black Keys, Fly With Me, or Before The Storm.”

“Why?” Kevin asked.

I shrugged. “I just really really like those.” Then I thought Of something I should’ve asked a long time ago. “What are you doing here anyway?”

“Well, as you probably know, we’re from New Jersey,” Joe started. “So we thought we’d come visit home for a while.”

“But,” Kevin said, “everyone knows what town we’re from so we thought we’d find a small town that no one would expect to find the Jonas Brothers in so we could walk Elvis without being trampled by fans.”

“Then Elvis got loose,” Nick said while looking at Frankie, “and we found you. Well, technically Elvis did.” He looked back at me and smiled. “Which I am very grateful for. Speaking of which, you obviously know who we are. Who are you?”

“I’m Bianca,” I said.

“Well, Bianca,” Nick said while smiling. “It’s very nice to meet you.”
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