Correction- We're Not Together
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Correction- We're Not Together
by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 2:39 pm
Maturity: Only kissing and fighting, but a LOT of kissing. Seriously, a lot. xD
Fantasy: Vampires and shapeshifters.
(This is an unfinished story, and all original twilight characters are created by Stephenie Meyer. webkinzluver321 from WI made the banner. THANKS!)
Character POV's
Amanda
Amanda's Diary
Jasper
Alice
Edward
Emmett
Carlisle
Rosalie
Esme
Bella
Jacob
Renesmee
Jasper's face appeared at the door. "Alice." I loved the way he said my name. "Jasper." His name slid off my tounge.
His arms were around me, squeezing with what must have been extreme force to a human, but mere nothingness to me.
We were on the bed now, lips touching. "Knock knock." Emmett's voice came from the door. "Oh!" I should have seen it, but I was busy. "Alice, Jasper, you know, it's time to leave. We happen to have school today." He smirked, and walked off. "Come on." Jasper kissed my forehead, and went to get changed.
As he was leaving, something hit me. "Alice!" Jasper must have felt the surprise. "Alice, what is it?" His cold hands were on mine.
Jasper and I in this very room. Jasper was as breathtaking as ever, but I was different. I was taller, with longer, lighter hair. Blond? Since when would I go blond?
"Alice, what is it?" I realized Jasper was there. "Just a vision." I muttered. "Alice, you zoned out. It wasn't normal." Jasper argued, but he let it go.
As I got dressed, I thought. How could I grow taller? I was a vampire! And my hair....it couldn't get longer! That was part of never aging! It must have been someone else...but why? Why would someone else be up here, holding hands with Jasper? And a human? Jasper didn't have the control for that!
I sat down, rubbing my temples. Who was this blond girl, and why was she holding hands with Jasper? Could they be...I forced myself to think the word...dating? But why would Jasper date a human? Where was I in this?
But what if I wasn't in this? What if this blond girl- whoever she was- was meant to be with Jasper? What if I wasn't supposed to be here? Could Jasper love her too? What would he do if I was wrong? If this was just someone who looked like him? No, it was definetly him. I sighed; would I have to leave for him to be happy?
I knew what I had to do. I wanted Jasper to be happy. If that meant me being unhappy, then I would deal with it. As long as he was happy. If I could cry, my face would have been tear-streaked and my eyes red. I could tell that this would be difficult for both of us. I slid the window open without any difficulty, and slipped through. I gazed once more on the beauty and serenity of the house before me and left, trying not to leave a trail.
"Alice?" I had dressed as quickly as possible, hoping she was alright. She had always had visions, which was one of the great things about her, but I had always been told what they were about. And besides that, she had never completly zoned out like that, like she had lost all of her sanity. Usually she still looked normal, her eyes were just glassy and staring. This time, her whole body had gone rigid. It was scaring me. What if she wasn't alright?
"Alice?" I walked into her room. She wasn't standing there, a smile on her face, like she usually did. Was she hiding? No, her emotions weren't even in the room. "Alice?" I called again, my tone worried. "Alice, where are you?"
No one answered. "Jasper, are you ready?" Edward walked into the doorway. "Yeah, but I can't find Alice." I sighed. "She'll turn up. You know she can't stay away." His voice had turned sympathetic. "Yeah, I know. I'll be in the car soon."
I hopped into the back of the Volvo with Emmett and Rosalie. Usually, Alice and I sat in the back, but she wasn't here. I sighed again as I got out of the car.
School was torture. I couldn't concentrate in any of my classes, even if I needed to. Thankfully no one- not even the teachers- talked to the elusive Cullens. In every class, I was sidetracked. Where had Alice gone? Where was she now? Why hadn't she told us? And, most importantly, when would she be back? Would she come back?
School was torture. Lunch was worse.
This was much, much more than torture. Sitting with Bella and Edward, Emmett and Rosalie. Watching Bella lie causally on Edward as if she was tired, seeing Emmett wrap his arm around Rosalie. True love and joy erupted everywhere around me. I needed Alice to return, to return and be mine again.
It was too much.
I'll see you later. I thought, hoping Edward was listening. He nodded slightly at me, and I got up, dumping my tray as an excuse. I walked out of the building and into the forest. Slumping down against a tree, I sobbed. I couldn't take this anymore. I needed Alice.
Tears would have drenched the ground if they could. I needed her. It was more than torture to sit there with perfectly matched lovers without mine. She was gone somewhere, and I didn't know if or when she would be back. Misery and pain swirled around me, threatening to swallow me up.
"Guys, I'll be back." I kissed Bella's forehead and walked out the door. "Jasper?" He was at the mouth of the forest, head in hands. "Jasper, are you alright?" This wasn't like him. He was cautious, yes, but not like this. "Jasper?" He finally looked up. "Edward." He whispered. "Alice." And broke into sobs. I didn't know what to do.
I couldn't take it anymore. The agony was eating me alive. Sobs erupted from my chest. I didn't care who or what was watching. I just wanted Alice back. "Jasper?" Edward's voice called again, quieter this time. "Jasper, calm down." His hands tried to get me up from the crumpled heap of my body, but I wasn't going to move. I couldn't go back in there.
"Jasper, you have a part to play. Would you like me to tell them that you went home sick?" I managed to nod, grateful to Edward. "T-thanks Edward." I forced through my sobs. "Don't worry about it." He patted my shoulder and jogged off at a human pace.
I hoped he was okay. Alice was his life; I didn't know if he could survive. "Mrs. Cope?" I walked into her office. "Yes, Edward?" She smiled. "Jasper got sick at lunch today and needs to go home. Can you tell Mr. Banner where I am? And Mrs. Goff where Jasper is? And, of course, all of his other teachers." I had to make sure she didn't suspect to much. "Sure Edward. Tell Jasper I hope he feels better, alright?" She shuffled a few stray papers on her desk. "Alright, Mrs. Cope. Thank you." I walked out the door, going to comfort Jasper again.
"Jasper?" I called once again. I couldn't tell if he wanted sympathy or not; his thoughts were only Alice, Alice, Alice. I didn't blame him. If Bella had gone...I shuddered at the thought.
My pale face looked at Edward's. "Am I excused?" I asked, my throat thick. "Yes. Mrs. Cope says to feel better; she thinks you're sick." His worried eyes looked at me with concern. "Thanks, Edward. Really. For everything." I broke into sobs again. "Just let it out Jazz, just let it out."
For once, I didn't know where to go. I had to leave my old life, so I couldn't go to Denali. Perhaps Philidelphia.....back to the diner. But there was suddenly no time for decisions. Something was happening.
I closed my eyes and searched the future. My future held nothing of intrest. Jasper's did.
He was in the forest with Edward, sobbing. Because of me. "Edward, I need her." They could only be talking about me. He needed me. I needed him. But not for long. Soon, only I would need him.
"Edward, just help me find her. I can't go on like this." He was still sobbing. "Jasper, if she's gone, it's for a reason. And you know Alice better than any of us. If she's gone, she won't come back." That brought on another round of sobs. He did need me, and I needed him. I couldn't stand to see him like this. It was to much. I knew once he was happy, I would be too. But how much more pain and suffering would both of us have to go through until then?
I couldn't take it anymore. I could deal with my own pain, but watching his was unendurable. I'd have to tell him somehow that this would be for the better, but how? If he saw me, he would never let me out of his sight again. I could always ask Tanya or Kate to give him a note; but what if they knew that I had left? They would try and stop me from leaving. The werewolves were an option...but they had had me leave before and not stopped me. They would have learned from expierience not to let me go. There was only one option left. Endure the pain.
But...what if I got Carlisle alone? He would understand and tell Jasper calmly. He would let me leave if it was for the best, and it was. I'd have to tell him everything, and make sure he wouldn't tell Jasper. For once, I was grateful of Jasper's lack of self-control; he couldn't be at the hospital.
"Edward, how am I going to survive? Alice is gone." I sobbed. "Maybe she'll come back...." I could tell he didn't truly believe that though. "Jasper, please. Calm down. The others are coming." He motioned towards Emmett, Rosalie and Bella, who were walking this way. Probably to give me sympathy, which was the last thing I wanted right now. "Go home without me." I whispered, knowing they could hear but whispering anyway. "Do you want me to come back later?" Edward's voice was just as quiet. "Maybe. Tell Carlisle where I am." He patted my shoulder. "I'll come and get you." He appeared by his car, walking over to the rest of our family.
I walked slowly into the hospital, trying to stay calm. "Carlisle?" His office door was open. "Alice?" Carlisle's confused voice came from the chair. I began to explain.
"It's for the best. He can't know I came back though. I know how much it would hurt him if he knew I came back and didn't see him." I concluded. "Very well. If it's for the best...I'll tell the others. While Jasper's away."
I drove quickly through the road, hoping Jasper would be alright. "I have to see Carlisle." I explained as my family climbed out of the Volvo. "Hurry back." Bella whispered, smiling. "Hopefully." I shut the door and went off to the hospital.
Walking into his office, I saw the girl who was causing Jasper this torturous pain. Alice.
"Alice." I whispered her name. "Do you have any idea how much pain Jasper is going through? Without you? Have you seen him? He's in the forest, like's he's been since lunch, sobbing. Over you. Where have you been?" I sood up for my newest brother, hoping I could convince her. "Edward." Her placed her hand on mine. "It was for the best. You saw what I saw. I can't be here." Her golden eyes said what her mouth couldn't. "Bella would do the same for you. Rose for Emmett, Carlisle for Esme. I have to Edward. He will be happy, in the end."
"But what about now?" He hissed. I gulped. This was the worst part. "He has to endure. But there will be greater pain than this, this is only the beginning." I backed away instictivly. "Alice! He's in about as much pain for ten vampires and you're saying there's more! What have you done?"
"Have you seen him Alice? He's in about as much pain as he can handle, and you say there's more! He's not going to survive this Alice." Now I was sobbing. Jasper wouldn't survive. He couldn't.
"Edward." I could guess what he was thinking. "Go back to Jasper. Meet me in your meadow at 1:00 tonight. I'll explain." I patted his shoulder. "Go back. He needs you."
I got control. "Thanks Alice. I'll be there." I smiled slightly. "Carlisle, I'm going back with Jasper. The others are at home." He nodded, and I strode out of his office.
With Edward gone, I could truly unleash my feelings. Overwhelming sadness, deep hurt, and...fury? Was I truly mad at Alice, my Alice? Yes I was.
She had left me, but that wasn't the reason. She had left without an explaination. She had left and I hadn't followed.
Most of my life I had gone with her, been with her. Now I didn't know what to do.
"Jasper." Edward stepped into the forest. "What did you see?" I hissed, instantly protective of my thoughts. "I heard the 'With Edward gone, I could truly unleash my feelings' part, and stopped, because I knew you wouldn't want me too. I caught a bit though." His voice was apoligetic. "Which parts?" I nearly snarled. I tried to calm myself down. " 'Explaination'.....'Her'.....'Alice'...was all I heard." I could tell he wasn't lying. "Thanks." I collapsed on the ground again.
He stayed there for nearly the whole night. "Jasper, you have to go home sometime. You can miss tomorrow, because you have an excuse, but you need to calm down." The look on his face was as plain as day; he couldn't. It was 12:30; he had to go before Alice came. "Jasper, we can't stay here forever. Come on." Slowly, he got up and walked in the direction of the house. He started running a little aways, and I turned and walked into the forest.
I sat in the meadow, waiting for Edward. I knew he would come, sooner or later. "Boo." He emerged from the trees, hair slighly damp. "Boo yourself."
I ignored Rosalie's comments on my hair; I was to depressed to care. "Jazz?" Emmett's hand clamped onto my shoulder. "Leave me alone." I shrugged it off and trudged upstairs, to Alice's room. Technically it was ours, but her personality was all over it, and, besdies that, I had my study. Was it now mine, or was she coming back? No, I knew Alice to well- she wasn't going to reclaim this room. She had left...forever.
Something was obviously up with Jasper. Alice had been gone all day, and that was bothering him, obviously, but there was something else, a sort of regret...?
"What's going on? Jasper's devestated without you." Her dark eyes betrayed nothing. "It's a long story."
"Edward, firstly, you have to promise to never tell anyone." I looked into his eyes, trust and worry in my face. "I promise Alice. You'll know if I'm planning to." I nodded slowly and sighed.
Fantasy: Vampires and shapeshifters.
(This is an unfinished story, and all original twilight characters are created by Stephenie Meyer. webkinzluver321 from WI made the banner. THANKS!)
Character POV's
Amanda
Amanda's Diary
Jasper
Alice
Edward
Emmett
Carlisle
Rosalie
Esme
Bella
Jacob
Renesmee
Jasper's face appeared at the door. "Alice." I loved the way he said my name. "Jasper." His name slid off my tounge.
His arms were around me, squeezing with what must have been extreme force to a human, but mere nothingness to me.
We were on the bed now, lips touching. "Knock knock." Emmett's voice came from the door. "Oh!" I should have seen it, but I was busy. "Alice, Jasper, you know, it's time to leave. We happen to have school today." He smirked, and walked off. "Come on." Jasper kissed my forehead, and went to get changed.
As he was leaving, something hit me. "Alice!" Jasper must have felt the surprise. "Alice, what is it?" His cold hands were on mine.
Jasper and I in this very room. Jasper was as breathtaking as ever, but I was different. I was taller, with longer, lighter hair. Blond? Since when would I go blond?
"Alice, what is it?" I realized Jasper was there. "Just a vision." I muttered. "Alice, you zoned out. It wasn't normal." Jasper argued, but he let it go.
As I got dressed, I thought. How could I grow taller? I was a vampire! And my hair....it couldn't get longer! That was part of never aging! It must have been someone else...but why? Why would someone else be up here, holding hands with Jasper? And a human? Jasper didn't have the control for that!
I sat down, rubbing my temples. Who was this blond girl, and why was she holding hands with Jasper? Could they be...I forced myself to think the word...dating? But why would Jasper date a human? Where was I in this?
But what if I wasn't in this? What if this blond girl- whoever she was- was meant to be with Jasper? What if I wasn't supposed to be here? Could Jasper love her too? What would he do if I was wrong? If this was just someone who looked like him? No, it was definetly him. I sighed; would I have to leave for him to be happy?
I knew what I had to do. I wanted Jasper to be happy. If that meant me being unhappy, then I would deal with it. As long as he was happy. If I could cry, my face would have been tear-streaked and my eyes red. I could tell that this would be difficult for both of us. I slid the window open without any difficulty, and slipped through. I gazed once more on the beauty and serenity of the house before me and left, trying not to leave a trail.
"Alice?" I had dressed as quickly as possible, hoping she was alright. She had always had visions, which was one of the great things about her, but I had always been told what they were about. And besides that, she had never completly zoned out like that, like she had lost all of her sanity. Usually she still looked normal, her eyes were just glassy and staring. This time, her whole body had gone rigid. It was scaring me. What if she wasn't alright?
"Alice?" I walked into her room. She wasn't standing there, a smile on her face, like she usually did. Was she hiding? No, her emotions weren't even in the room. "Alice?" I called again, my tone worried. "Alice, where are you?"
No one answered. "Jasper, are you ready?" Edward walked into the doorway. "Yeah, but I can't find Alice." I sighed. "She'll turn up. You know she can't stay away." His voice had turned sympathetic. "Yeah, I know. I'll be in the car soon."
I hopped into the back of the Volvo with Emmett and Rosalie. Usually, Alice and I sat in the back, but she wasn't here. I sighed again as I got out of the car.
School was torture. I couldn't concentrate in any of my classes, even if I needed to. Thankfully no one- not even the teachers- talked to the elusive Cullens. In every class, I was sidetracked. Where had Alice gone? Where was she now? Why hadn't she told us? And, most importantly, when would she be back? Would she come back?
School was torture. Lunch was worse.
This was much, much more than torture. Sitting with Bella and Edward, Emmett and Rosalie. Watching Bella lie causally on Edward as if she was tired, seeing Emmett wrap his arm around Rosalie. True love and joy erupted everywhere around me. I needed Alice to return, to return and be mine again.
It was too much.
I'll see you later. I thought, hoping Edward was listening. He nodded slightly at me, and I got up, dumping my tray as an excuse. I walked out of the building and into the forest. Slumping down against a tree, I sobbed. I couldn't take this anymore. I needed Alice.
Tears would have drenched the ground if they could. I needed her. It was more than torture to sit there with perfectly matched lovers without mine. She was gone somewhere, and I didn't know if or when she would be back. Misery and pain swirled around me, threatening to swallow me up.
"Guys, I'll be back." I kissed Bella's forehead and walked out the door. "Jasper?" He was at the mouth of the forest, head in hands. "Jasper, are you alright?" This wasn't like him. He was cautious, yes, but not like this. "Jasper?" He finally looked up. "Edward." He whispered. "Alice." And broke into sobs. I didn't know what to do.
I couldn't take it anymore. The agony was eating me alive. Sobs erupted from my chest. I didn't care who or what was watching. I just wanted Alice back. "Jasper?" Edward's voice called again, quieter this time. "Jasper, calm down." His hands tried to get me up from the crumpled heap of my body, but I wasn't going to move. I couldn't go back in there.
"Jasper, you have a part to play. Would you like me to tell them that you went home sick?" I managed to nod, grateful to Edward. "T-thanks Edward." I forced through my sobs. "Don't worry about it." He patted my shoulder and jogged off at a human pace.
I hoped he was okay. Alice was his life; I didn't know if he could survive. "Mrs. Cope?" I walked into her office. "Yes, Edward?" She smiled. "Jasper got sick at lunch today and needs to go home. Can you tell Mr. Banner where I am? And Mrs. Goff where Jasper is? And, of course, all of his other teachers." I had to make sure she didn't suspect to much. "Sure Edward. Tell Jasper I hope he feels better, alright?" She shuffled a few stray papers on her desk. "Alright, Mrs. Cope. Thank you." I walked out the door, going to comfort Jasper again.
"Jasper?" I called once again. I couldn't tell if he wanted sympathy or not; his thoughts were only Alice, Alice, Alice. I didn't blame him. If Bella had gone...I shuddered at the thought.
My pale face looked at Edward's. "Am I excused?" I asked, my throat thick. "Yes. Mrs. Cope says to feel better; she thinks you're sick." His worried eyes looked at me with concern. "Thanks, Edward. Really. For everything." I broke into sobs again. "Just let it out Jazz, just let it out."
For once, I didn't know where to go. I had to leave my old life, so I couldn't go to Denali. Perhaps Philidelphia.....back to the diner. But there was suddenly no time for decisions. Something was happening.
I closed my eyes and searched the future. My future held nothing of intrest. Jasper's did.
He was in the forest with Edward, sobbing. Because of me. "Edward, I need her." They could only be talking about me. He needed me. I needed him. But not for long. Soon, only I would need him.
"Edward, just help me find her. I can't go on like this." He was still sobbing. "Jasper, if she's gone, it's for a reason. And you know Alice better than any of us. If she's gone, she won't come back." That brought on another round of sobs. He did need me, and I needed him. I couldn't stand to see him like this. It was to much. I knew once he was happy, I would be too. But how much more pain and suffering would both of us have to go through until then?
I couldn't take it anymore. I could deal with my own pain, but watching his was unendurable. I'd have to tell him somehow that this would be for the better, but how? If he saw me, he would never let me out of his sight again. I could always ask Tanya or Kate to give him a note; but what if they knew that I had left? They would try and stop me from leaving. The werewolves were an option...but they had had me leave before and not stopped me. They would have learned from expierience not to let me go. There was only one option left. Endure the pain.
But...what if I got Carlisle alone? He would understand and tell Jasper calmly. He would let me leave if it was for the best, and it was. I'd have to tell him everything, and make sure he wouldn't tell Jasper. For once, I was grateful of Jasper's lack of self-control; he couldn't be at the hospital.
"Edward, how am I going to survive? Alice is gone." I sobbed. "Maybe she'll come back...." I could tell he didn't truly believe that though. "Jasper, please. Calm down. The others are coming." He motioned towards Emmett, Rosalie and Bella, who were walking this way. Probably to give me sympathy, which was the last thing I wanted right now. "Go home without me." I whispered, knowing they could hear but whispering anyway. "Do you want me to come back later?" Edward's voice was just as quiet. "Maybe. Tell Carlisle where I am." He patted my shoulder. "I'll come and get you." He appeared by his car, walking over to the rest of our family.
I walked slowly into the hospital, trying to stay calm. "Carlisle?" His office door was open. "Alice?" Carlisle's confused voice came from the chair. I began to explain.
"It's for the best. He can't know I came back though. I know how much it would hurt him if he knew I came back and didn't see him." I concluded. "Very well. If it's for the best...I'll tell the others. While Jasper's away."
I drove quickly through the road, hoping Jasper would be alright. "I have to see Carlisle." I explained as my family climbed out of the Volvo. "Hurry back." Bella whispered, smiling. "Hopefully." I shut the door and went off to the hospital.
Walking into his office, I saw the girl who was causing Jasper this torturous pain. Alice.
"Alice." I whispered her name. "Do you have any idea how much pain Jasper is going through? Without you? Have you seen him? He's in the forest, like's he's been since lunch, sobbing. Over you. Where have you been?" I sood up for my newest brother, hoping I could convince her. "Edward." Her placed her hand on mine. "It was for the best. You saw what I saw. I can't be here." Her golden eyes said what her mouth couldn't. "Bella would do the same for you. Rose for Emmett, Carlisle for Esme. I have to Edward. He will be happy, in the end."
"But what about now?" He hissed. I gulped. This was the worst part. "He has to endure. But there will be greater pain than this, this is only the beginning." I backed away instictivly. "Alice! He's in about as much pain for ten vampires and you're saying there's more! What have you done?"
"Have you seen him Alice? He's in about as much pain as he can handle, and you say there's more! He's not going to survive this Alice." Now I was sobbing. Jasper wouldn't survive. He couldn't.
"Edward." I could guess what he was thinking. "Go back to Jasper. Meet me in your meadow at 1:00 tonight. I'll explain." I patted his shoulder. "Go back. He needs you."
I got control. "Thanks Alice. I'll be there." I smiled slightly. "Carlisle, I'm going back with Jasper. The others are at home." He nodded, and I strode out of his office.
With Edward gone, I could truly unleash my feelings. Overwhelming sadness, deep hurt, and...fury? Was I truly mad at Alice, my Alice? Yes I was.
She had left me, but that wasn't the reason. She had left without an explaination. She had left and I hadn't followed.
Most of my life I had gone with her, been with her. Now I didn't know what to do.
"Jasper." Edward stepped into the forest. "What did you see?" I hissed, instantly protective of my thoughts. "I heard the 'With Edward gone, I could truly unleash my feelings' part, and stopped, because I knew you wouldn't want me too. I caught a bit though." His voice was apoligetic. "Which parts?" I nearly snarled. I tried to calm myself down. " 'Explaination'.....'Her'.....'Alice'...was all I heard." I could tell he wasn't lying. "Thanks." I collapsed on the ground again.
He stayed there for nearly the whole night. "Jasper, you have to go home sometime. You can miss tomorrow, because you have an excuse, but you need to calm down." The look on his face was as plain as day; he couldn't. It was 12:30; he had to go before Alice came. "Jasper, we can't stay here forever. Come on." Slowly, he got up and walked in the direction of the house. He started running a little aways, and I turned and walked into the forest.
I sat in the meadow, waiting for Edward. I knew he would come, sooner or later. "Boo." He emerged from the trees, hair slighly damp. "Boo yourself."
I ignored Rosalie's comments on my hair; I was to depressed to care. "Jazz?" Emmett's hand clamped onto my shoulder. "Leave me alone." I shrugged it off and trudged upstairs, to Alice's room. Technically it was ours, but her personality was all over it, and, besdies that, I had my study. Was it now mine, or was she coming back? No, I knew Alice to well- she wasn't going to reclaim this room. She had left...forever.
Something was obviously up with Jasper. Alice had been gone all day, and that was bothering him, obviously, but there was something else, a sort of regret...?
"What's going on? Jasper's devestated without you." Her dark eyes betrayed nothing. "It's a long story."
"Edward, firstly, you have to promise to never tell anyone." I looked into his eyes, trust and worry in my face. "I promise Alice. You'll know if I'm planning to." I nodded slowly and sighed.
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Re: Correction- We're Not Together
by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 2:43 pm
"Jasper?" I walked into Alice and Jasper's -no, Jasper's, I mentally corrected myself- room. "What?" His voice was thick, and I could hear him attempting to be polite, but not quite managing it. "I know you're not all right. Do you want to talk about it?" I sat on the bed next to him, waiting patiently.
I thought through my thoughts. Did I want to spill all my secrets to Carlisle, my father for all these years? Yes I did.
I watched his face. At first, it was vague, unknowing. Then I turned into sadness. “Jasper, what happened?” I asked.
I launched into the tale. “We were about to get dressed before school. I felt Alice’s surprise at a vision. I rushed over like I always do, but it wasn’t a normal vision. She went completely out of it…” It hurt to talk about my last minutes with Alice. I took a deep breath and continued. “She told me it was just a vision, but I didn’t believe her. I trusted her, though, and left. I dressed quickly, wanting to get back in there with her and when I walked in, she was gone.”
“I saw Jasper with a human.” I heard his gasp of surprise. “What was he-“I cut him off. “They were in our-his- room, holding hands. I could tell it wasn’t me. She was tall, with long, blond hair. Jasper looked…happy, happier than I’ve ever seen him. And I don’t want to be responsible for not letting him be that happy. If whoever the blond girl was can make him happier than I can, she should. I don’t want to get in the way.”
“But what about now? Jasper’s devastated. He’s barely staying alive without you.” Edward remarked. “And there’s going to be more. I can tell you that. This girl…she smells to him better than Bella smelled to you.” I whispered. “La tua cantante…for him? Alice, he doesn’t have that type of restraint! I could barely do it, Emmett couldn’t, I know he can’t! That girl is going to get killed, Alice!” He nearly screamed. “Edward, calm down. That’s why I’m counting on you to tell the rest of the family without Jasper. I don’t know how you’ll work that…but you have to. They’re going to meet soon.”
“Did anything else happen?” Carlisle asked. “I don’t think so.” I replied, racking my brains. “Perhaps her vision was about something that would have happened if she went to school. She could come back.” Carlisle tried to soothe me. “No, she would have taken me. Carlisle, I just know it; she’s gone for good.”
“How do I tell them?” Edward asked, worry in his eyes. “Wait until he’s hunting…since he’s not going to school, tell them in the car and get Carlisle to tell Esme…tell Jasper he needs to leave…” I listed possibilities. “When are they meeting? How soon?” I could hear the stress in his voice. “Within the month.” I replied. “Quickly tell them; they need to know.”
“Jasper, I’m sorry.” Carlisle put his hand on my shoulder as I sobbed. “Perhaps there will be someone else?” He was calm, but I felt the grief and sadness he was feeling. For me. “I don’t think so. No one can make me feel like that.” My almost-filled-with-tears eyes looked into his. “Carlisle, thanks for letting us stay here.” I turned away from his suddenly stern gaze. “Jasper, are you leaving as well?” I could feel his golden eyes on me, even turned. “I can’t stay here…not while she’s not.” I hoped he understood. I couldn’t stay here; the memories would haunt me forever.
“Jasper, I understand. We will do most anything for you to stay. Would it help if we moved somewhere else, somewhere we haven’t been before?” There was an idea I had not thought of. What if we started over? Rosalie would probably get a bit mad, but even she would do anything to make me stay. “We could try. I’m not positive it will work; I could leave at a moment's notice.” Carlisle nodded. “We could try. Would you like me to tell the others? Or would you?”
“I will. They might as well get mad at me, not you.” I took a deep breath and walked out of my room. And then, I did something I had never done of my own free will. I walked into Alice’s bathroom and checked the mirror.
My face looked “inhumanly beautiful” as a human would put it, but to me it looked horrible. Only to a vampire would I look horrible anyway. The signs were subtle. I couldn’t have red eyes nor a tear-streaked face. I couldn’t have a wet face or anything that showed. However, it seemed that I could have my hair in knots from stress and worry. My clothes were covered it dirt and filth and my body was still shaking. “Jasper?” Bella walked into the bathroom.
Immediately, I turned against the wall, ashamed. “Jasper, you don’t have to be ashamed. Turn around.” For once, Bella’s voice was powerful, in charge. I turned. “Jasper, I understand what’s going on. I went through the same thing.” Bella’s hand rubbed my arm. “And I heard you and Carlisle. Everyone else was hunting.” She looked into me eyes. “Do you want me to help? I’ve gone through this and I know you have to tell them.” I nodded slowly.
“Alright. First, while no one else is here, is there anything else you need to get out of your body?” She waited as I thought. “Nothing that I can think of.” My voice sounded slightly raspy, not the smooth, compelling voice it usually was. “Good. Now, you’re going to want to change. And probably shower.” She smiled. “I’ll leave for that.”
I followed her instructions, slipping into cleaner clothes. I heard a knock on the bathroom door. “Jasper?” It was Bella again. “Come in Bella.” My voice was still raspy…strange. “Jasper, now just calm down. You’re stressed and worried and raveled up. Sit down and relax.” I sank to the floor and she sat next to me. “Just clear your mind.”
Clearing my mind took time. But, after an immeasurable amount of time, I had relaxed. “See? Now we just have to snarl through your hair.” Bella laughed lightly and handed me a brush. “Thanks.” I muttered. “Don’t worry about it.”
As I pulled the brush through my mass of blond, knotted curls, Bella watched me with concern. "Jasper, where did Al- she go?" She stopped herself from saying Alice for my sake.
Could she really not know? Not have figured it out? Bella was smart; I couldn't believe she didn't know already.
"Jasper?" She put her hand on my shoulder. "She's not coming back, is she?" I nodded. She had figured it out. "I'm sorry." She looked into my eyes, hers filled with sorrow. She hugged me gently as a few more sobs escaped from my throat.
I walked swiftly through the forest, snifling occasionally. It was getting to be spring, which meant allergies. Lots of them.
I climbed up my favorite tree, sneezing as I did. Pulling up my e-mail, I saw that my Social Studies teacher had e-mailed the test out. I began typing the answers back to her.
"Bella?" She smiled. "Yes?"
"I'm going to go tell them. If you could go downstairs and look like you don't know what happened..." My voice trailed off. "Sure." She smiled sadly at me, then turned and walked away.
"No...No!" Not that. Anything but that. It couldn't happen. It'd ruin everything. No, no, no...."No! He can't! Edward!" Edward realized what he had to do. "I can't! Alice, don't you realize! He's in to much pain for that!"
"You have to Edward. It's the only way."
I took a deep breath and opened the bathroom door. Carefully, I walked out.
As I walked downstairs, I noticed that the entire family was already in the meeting room; excellent. That would make things much faster and easier. I walked in slowly, trying to avoid their gazes. I sank into my chair, attempting to ignore their looks, but they wouldn't look away.
"Jasper, you have something to say?" Carlisle's eyes, as well, were now on me.
I pulled my hair back into a messy ponytail as I clicked the Send button. Now all I had to do was wait.
"Yes." I gulped, though it did no good. "As you all know, someone wasn't here today." I emphasized, hoping they understood who it was. "You saw me." I nodded towards Bella. "I can't stay here. Without her."
Rosalie bit her lip, nervous, worried, and scared. Carlisle was thoughtful, trying to figure out the best way to put things. Emmett had a hint of regret to his usual happy manor. Esme was devastated by even the idea of me leaving. Bella was understanding, knowing what I was going through.
"I was thinking perhaps we could leave and try somewhere they've never been." Carlisle's calm voice took over, but eyes were still on me. Rosalie relaxed slightly, but tensed again as she heard his words. "Leave?" She hissed. "Yes." Carlisle stated. "We've stated in Forks too long; it's time we leave anyway."
No. No. No. We were not going to leave again. NO.
I paced, trying to get the attention- and eyes- on me and off of Jasper, who was clearly not enjoying it. "I was thinking about New York, if Rosalie was okay with that?" I looked her way.
Rosalie was tense again. I was not going to change her emotions to my avail; I wanted her to have her own say. "Is there anywhere else?" She nearly forced out of her mouth, her face firm.
"There's nowhere else I've been without her."
What did I care about more? My brother or myself? Jasper was devastated...and he was my brother. My true brother. Sighing, I turned towards Emmett. "For you." I wispered to Jasper. "We can go." Jasper's face looked lighter, as if he hadn't been expecting that response. I walked over and sat next to him, hugging him gently. He was so obviously devastated, I couldn't help myself. "It's going to be okay Jasper. You can't leave us."
I cleared my throat and eveyone looked up. "How many of us are willing to move?" Jasper nodded in my direction. I nodded back. "Jasper. Anyone else?" Bella raised her hand slowly. "If...if it's what Jasper needs." She winked at Jasper. "As long as none of us leave without warning." Rosalie shot a glare at Jasper, who flinched away. That truly showed how bad this was for him. Rosalie was always like that, glaring and what not, but Jasper was always fine with it. Now he was flinching away. "Sorry." She whispered. "Whatever you need, sweetheart." Esme smiled at Jasper, kissing the top of his head. "Whatever's fine with me." Emmett grinned, happy, even now. "It's what Jasper needs, so I agree." My face must have shown the sympathy I flet for him now, because everyone began to nod.
"Thanks everyone." I muttered in a low voice, and went to go back up to Alic- my room.
"No!" Edward ran through the door. "We are NOT moving, no matter what!" Bella leaped to his side. "Edward, don't do this. Jasper has to go." She whispered quickly. "I...I don't care. We're staying." He...didn't care. I gave up. I stole up to my room. I was leaving, even if no one else was.
"Oh, there you are Edward." I smiled as my son came in through the door. "We're discussing moving to New York."
"No, we're not. We're staying right here." He muttered. "I'm sorry, Edward, but we decided. We're all leaving." Carlisle came to stand beside me. "We can't move! Just trust me!" He screamed. "Edward, this is about Jasper and Alice. Please." Carlisle's voice lowered to a whisper. "I...I don't care."
What the heck was Edward doing? Jasper needed to go. "I'll be right back Rose." I slipped out if the argument.
"Jasper?" I opened the door silently. His sobs answered me. "Jazz?" He was lying on the bed, face down, mumbling something. As I got closer, I heard what he was saying, "Alice...Alice...Alice." I put my hand on his shoulder and he sat up. "Hey." His voice was thick, cracked...and depressed. "Hey. Listen...don't listen to Edward. He's just upset." Jasper tried to glare at me, but it didn't work out as he planned. "I'm upset too, but I'm not screaming." He muttered. I could have sworn I might have saw a tear go down his cheek, except for the fact that vampires can't cry. But, just to be sure..."Jasper, are you...crying?" I asked. "Whatever crying is to a vampire." He muttered. "It doesn't even matter anymore. I'm leaving."
What was Edward doing? Did he not see what was going on with Jasper, his brother? He could only survive, only stay if we left. "Edward." Esme's voice took on a fierce tone I had never heard before. "We are leaving. It is your choice whether to go with us or not, but we are leaving. You must accept that fact. For your brother's sake." He glared. "We. Are. Not. Moving. I don't care what Jasper wants. I know what he's going to need later, and you don't." He muttered. "Edward, I'm sorry. We are. Jasper's utterly devastated." I shot back at him. "Edward, this isn't like you at all. We've moved for you because of Bella. Now, please, go help Jasper through this. You and Bella truly understand what he's going through. Alice is gone forever." Esme's voice was soft again. "He's going to be more devastated if we move. Trust me." He growled. "Why?" Esme asked curiously. "What could upset him more than this?"
"I can't say with him here." Edward's voice had quieted to a whisper. I heard Jasper's cry of despair and anger and he bolted down the stairs, hatred coloring his face. "No! Jasper!" Emmett followed him, but he wasn't fast enough. Jasper leaped at Edward, pinning him to the ground, about to snap. "NEVER say that again!" He roared. "You think just because you left Bella you know what it's like! You don't! You knew you were going back to her! I know she's NOT coming back!" At the mention of him leaving Bella, Edward snapped. He rolled over Jasper, teeth at his neck. And his teeth snapped together.
I felt Edward's teeth on my neck and the second he bit, I knew I had lost. It didn't matter anyway. Who cared? Edward bit the other side of my neck, and then proceeded to my arms, growling and snapping. Eventually, Emmett and Rosalie hauled him off me, but I didn't care. He had bitten me about forty times.
"Come here Jasper." Rosalie helped me stagger upstairs, and I collapsed on the bed. My entire body burned, burned like fire, when Carlisle walked in. "Oh, no." He seemed to go paler, of that was even possible. He walked over faster, inspecting my neck. "Rosalie, go get me some cold water. Now." She jogged to the bathroom, bringing a glass with her. Carlisle dipped two fingers into the glass and rubbed it over my neck. It burned at first, but, slowly, soothed the burning sensation. "Rose, if you could help Jasper with this?" She nodded. "I have to go get Edward calmed down."
Rosalie helped me up as I winced. I rubbed my left forearm, the venom seeming to burn there more than anywhere else. "Does that hurt?" She asked.
"Yes." His voice was raspy and broken. "Come here." I put two fingers in the water and brushed it over the wound as Carlisle as done, but it didn't seem to help in. In fact, it seemed to make the pain worse. "Sit down." I commanded. He did. He must be really upset; he never obeyed me. "Let me see that." I very gently examined his arm. It seemed slightly swollen. "Carlisle!" I called. He hurried up. "Yes?" I pointed to Jasper's arm. "Oh, no. Rosalie, move out of the way." He leaned over his arm. "I... well... I think Edward broke his arm."
I gasped. "But...he's a vampire! He can't bre-" Carlisle interrupted. "By human forces." He reminded me. "Edward isn't human. It's broken." He muttered. "But it will heal. Rosalie, bring me my cast kit, will you?" I nodded and went to grab it.
"Jasper?" I took the advantage while Rosalie was gone to say something to him. "Edward wants to talk to you after this."
I winced as my arm began to sting. "I'm sorry Jasper." Carlisle looked into my eyes. He looked so much like my real father. Blond hair, golden eyes... I wouldn't be surprised if Carlisle and Esme really were my parents, and Rosalie really was my sister. With my honey blond hair, I probably looked like their real son anyway. "Here you go Carlisle." Rosalie handed him a black box and stayed in the room. She smiled and wrapped her arm around my shoulders. It was strangely comforting, probably because it felt like she was the only one who really cared.
As Carlisle began to fix my arm, Rosalie looked me straight in the eyes. "Are you leaving?" I very slowly nodded. "I can't live like this."
"There." Carlisle finished wrapping my arm. It felt very strange, not having my arm work anymore. I moved it slightly and winced again. It was still tender, and it burned. "I'm sorry Jasper." Carlisle's fingers lingered on my shoulder for a split-second, and he walked out. The second he did, Rosalie followed. "I'm getting Edward." She looked at me sadly, and walked out. I did the only thing I could think of.
I slid the window open and jumped out.
It was the worst plan of my life. I didn't have the balance I used to from my arm, so I landed wrong. That would have been fine, because concrete didn't hurt, except that I landed on my arm. And it burned worse than ever. I heard some type of shriek, but I didn't know what it was. I wanted it all to go away. I couldn't sleep, but I could get very close. I closed my eyes and blocked out everything. Not sleep, but close enough.
As I pulled Breaking Dawn out of my bookbag, I heard a scream. Whoever was screaming sounded wounded, and I immediatly put my book back into my bag. Swiftly, my feet landed on the forest ground, and I took my first-aid kit out of the bag. I had a feeling I would need it.
I ran swiftly through the forest, ducking and jumping, trying to find whoever had made the strangled screech. I emerged in a clearing, a white house in front of me. Perhaps it was someone there. I jogged around and found someone lying there on the pavement.
Wait... it wasn't just a boy. It was...
Jasper Whitlock Hale.
The vampire of my dreams.
I ran towards him, trying to see what was wrong. I saw the cast around his arm, and touched it gently. He flinched, and his eyes opened. Pitch black hunger filled his face, and suddenly his hand was around my neck, and his head was slowly approaching.
I heard something hit the concrete, and then a crunch. A scream. I ran to look out the window. Jasper was lying there, eyes closed, nearly dead.
A girl entered the picture. She had dark blond hair to her waist, and piercing blue eyes that shone, even in the moonlight. She sat next to Jasper, her fingers rubbing over her neck. Who was she? Not a vampire, surely; her eyes were an astonishing blue. One finger brushed Jasper's ever-delicate cast, and she was held in Jasper's vice-like grip, about to die.
He snarled, his lips right next to my ear. "No!" I heard someone land, almost catlike, next to him. "Emmett!" The newcomer yelled, and another figure was there. Jasper's hands were pryed off my throat, and the first newcomer grabbed my wrist. "Who are you?" She immediatly asked, pulling me along. "Amanda Noelle." I choked out, my throat still hurting. I didn't need to ask who she was. Rosalie Lillian Hale, beauty queen. Vampire.
"Come on!" Rosalie tugged harder, and I realized I was standing still. I went with her, leaving Jasper behind.
"Jasper!" I yelled as Rosalie ran out of sight. I kept his arms behind his back as he struggled, wanting the girl's blood. "Emmett, let go! You're rebreaking my arm!" He cried out in pain, but I couldn't let go. "I'm sorry, Jazz, but I'm not letting you near her or Rose." I let his broken arm have a little more freedom, though.
"Carlisle." Rosalie said as we walked into the house I had seen earlier. She looked me over. "Do you want to lie down or something?" She asked. "Uh... sure?" I sat on the couch awkwardly, feeling out of place. And then the model walked in.
He was tall, blond, handsome, and I couldn't help but stare. He laughed. "And who do we have here, Rosalie? A human friend? Jasper's not going to like this." He joked lightly. "I can tell you Jasper doens't like it." She muttered under her breath, and a spasm of pain shot through me. I didn't want to hurt him; all I wanted to do was help.
"This is Amanda Noelle." Rosalie said, her face expressionless. "Hello Amanda Noelle." Carlisle smiled. "Just Amanda. Noelle is my middle name." I blushed lightly. "Okay." He chuckled. "I guess she already knows?" He asked in a low voice. "She saw him attack. She's going to start suspecting soon." Rosalie whispered in the same volume. They were talking about me.
"Um... do you mean... that your vampires?" I asked, very, very quiet. Carlisle turned slowly, keeping his face calm. "Where would you get that idea?" He asked. He sounded normal, but I could detect a hint of worry, and his eyes showed that he was lying.
"Carlisle, I know you're vampires." I coughed harshly. "I know your eyes turn from gold to black. I know that Jasper can't restrain himself from blood. I know that Edward can read minds. I kno-" Carlisle chuckled. "Maybe we don't need to try and keep up the facade. Yes, Amanda, we're vampires." My face split into a huge smile.
Rosalie stared. "What are you so happy about?" She asked, very confused. "I've read about you... and Jasper... and... oh, my gosh, you're all actually real!" Rosalie looked at Carlisle worriedly. "Amanda, where exactly did you hear about us?" He asked. "The Twilight Saga."
As soon as the girl was inside, I relaxed, and Emmett let go. "Who was that?" I asked breathlessly. "Amanda Noelle." He answered. "Come on, Jazz- we need to go hunting."
Carlisle's face looked troubled. "Well, everyone seems to know that vampires aren't real, so, unless you tell..." He looked at me. "I won't." I said quietly. "I would never tell anybody anything." Carlisle smiled. "We'll see."
Carlisle turned to go into his office, but I stayed put, not exactly sure what to do anymore. "Amanda? If you want, I could show you some history of vampires." I bit my lip. I kinda already knew the entire history of everyone from reading Twilight over and over. "Carlisle, she already knows it all from some book." Edward called down. Carlisle chuckled. "Very well, then. Now, Amanda... given recent events, meaning Jasper's... behavior, I'd feel a bit more comfortable if you stayed with us for a while. Where do you and your parents live?" I swallowed on the words "parents". "We...we don't live anywhere...sir. I live in the forest alone." I looked down at the floor, biting my bottom lip. Carlisle smiled, his golden eyes warm and inviting. "You don't have to call me 'sir', Amanda. Just Carlisle will do. And that's perfectly all right. You can stay here... if you wish." He was giving me a choice. Just like a real dad would do. I smiled. "I'm staying here."
"I'm not surprised." He laughed. "I'll let Bella take you around. She's the newest here, so she can relate to you best."
Emmett and I were hunting, but all I could think about was her. Her intriging scent, her startling blue eyes... just her. We were deep into the forest by now, but I could just barely hear Bella saying, "Here's the forest where we all hunt." The wind blew in my direction, and I could smell her scent, and hear her small giggle as, most likely, her long hair was blown my way. A very bad thing on her part.
I snarled, rubbing out of the forest and blinding speed and reaching the end in seconds. I could see her frightened face, the startling blue eyes now trying to take in what she was seeing, but I didn't register it in my mind. All I registered was that she had a neck with the most amazing blood in it. And it was approaching.
I grabbed her wrist tightly, and I heard her cry out. My lips approached her neck once more, brushing over the smooth skin that was the only thing holding the blood from my lips. It was so easy, so painstakingly simple. All I had to do was bite.
"Jasper!" Carlisle stormed out of the house. "Do you want to be a monster? Do you want to go back to what you used to be? If so, gladly continue. But you are not a monster. You are a person, and people don't eat other people." The girl was shaking in my arms, and I slowly let her go. Her blue eyes were full of fear as she backed away, behind Carlisle. I really needed to stop calling her "the girl" and get her name or something. Yeah, like she'd give a murderous monster her name.
"Amanda, go inside." She nodded, looking frightened as she went inside the house. Oh, so her name was Amanda. At least I wasn't calling her "the girl" anymore. "Jasper, I want you to go to Denali. You shouldn't be here right now if you're going to keep attacking her. You need a break, son, and she needs to get aquainted. Get Emmett or Edward to go with you." I nodded slowly as Emmett emerged from the trees. "I'll go, Jazz." I nodded again, and we got in the car.
I had no idea what to do. Jasper was being Jasper. I had loved him because of Twilight, but he was scaring me right now. "C-Carlisle? What's wrong with Jasper? Nobody else is attacking me like crazy." Carlisle laughed as he shut the door. "I thought you would already know this? No? Well, I'll explain. Jasper's past... well, he wasn't like us here. It was the normal vampire life he was used to. He fed on humans whenever he wanted and needed. Then, he found Alice- or, rather, she found him. They came here, and he was very uncontrollable. He's gotten better, but the old longing is always there. He's always going to be the one to snap first, becuase he's the newest to this type of lifestyle and doesn't know any better. It's instinctual." I sighed. "But what about Bella? She was human, and every time she came over, he didn't try and eat her. Except the birthday party, but that's was because there was blood." Carlisle sighed. "Well, you know how Edward was attracted to Bella's blood more than he was to anyone else's?" I nodded- that was one of the main points from Twilight. "Well, Jasper's attracted to your blood more than anyone else's. La tua cantante. It's very difficult for him anyway, but with you, it makes the lust uncontrollable. He can't help but try and get to your blood." I looked at him sadly. "So, it's my fault he's suffering?" I didn't need him to answer. I already knew it was my fault.
I could hear them talking for miles, which wasn't what I needed right now. Emmett was driving, obviously- why would I drive when I was acting like a deranged maniac? But I focused on their words anyway. "So, it's my fault he's suffering?" Amanda asked quietly, a note of sadness in her voice. Carlisle didn't answer that. How could she blame herself? I was the one driving away, and this was not in any way her fault. I just couldn't control myself. She didn't do anything wrong. It wasn't her fault at all. On impulse, I took my cell phone out of my pocket and dialed Carlisle's number.
"Yes, Jasper?" He asked. "Let me speak to Amanda." I could feel his alarm on the other end, and I didn't even need my power to do it. "She's talking to Rosalie right now, Jasper. They seem to be bonding very well." He sounded pleased. I could hear their soft talking over the phone, hear Bella walking into the room to join the conversation. "I need to talk to her now, Carlisle." He sighed. "This better be good, Jasper." I heard him walking up the stairs and knocking on the door. "Amanda? Jasper wants to talk to you." I heard, very faintly, Rosalie and Bella giggling, and then Amanda saying, "What does he want, Carlisle?" Carlisle started talking to her. "I'm not sure. He just said he needed to talk to you." She sighed and took the phone. "Yes?"
Her voice was soft and almost vurnerable, and I could almost feel the fear rolling off her, even this far away. "Amanda?" I asked. "Who else would it be?" She muttered. I bit back a laugh. "I wanted to tell you I'm sorry. I should have been able to control myself better. I'd tell you in person, but then I'd just have to apologize again. Please don't blame yourself for this, though. This was my fault entirely." She sighed quietly. "I forgive you, Jasper. Thanks." I could almost see her smiling on the other side, except for the fact that I had never seen her smile, just scared. "Your welcome. Bye." I turned the phone off, feeling as if a weight had been lifted off my chest.
I thought through my thoughts. Did I want to spill all my secrets to Carlisle, my father for all these years? Yes I did.
I watched his face. At first, it was vague, unknowing. Then I turned into sadness. “Jasper, what happened?” I asked.
I launched into the tale. “We were about to get dressed before school. I felt Alice’s surprise at a vision. I rushed over like I always do, but it wasn’t a normal vision. She went completely out of it…” It hurt to talk about my last minutes with Alice. I took a deep breath and continued. “She told me it was just a vision, but I didn’t believe her. I trusted her, though, and left. I dressed quickly, wanting to get back in there with her and when I walked in, she was gone.”
“I saw Jasper with a human.” I heard his gasp of surprise. “What was he-“I cut him off. “They were in our-his- room, holding hands. I could tell it wasn’t me. She was tall, with long, blond hair. Jasper looked…happy, happier than I’ve ever seen him. And I don’t want to be responsible for not letting him be that happy. If whoever the blond girl was can make him happier than I can, she should. I don’t want to get in the way.”
“But what about now? Jasper’s devastated. He’s barely staying alive without you.” Edward remarked. “And there’s going to be more. I can tell you that. This girl…she smells to him better than Bella smelled to you.” I whispered. “La tua cantante…for him? Alice, he doesn’t have that type of restraint! I could barely do it, Emmett couldn’t, I know he can’t! That girl is going to get killed, Alice!” He nearly screamed. “Edward, calm down. That’s why I’m counting on you to tell the rest of the family without Jasper. I don’t know how you’ll work that…but you have to. They’re going to meet soon.”
“Did anything else happen?” Carlisle asked. “I don’t think so.” I replied, racking my brains. “Perhaps her vision was about something that would have happened if she went to school. She could come back.” Carlisle tried to soothe me. “No, she would have taken me. Carlisle, I just know it; she’s gone for good.”
“How do I tell them?” Edward asked, worry in his eyes. “Wait until he’s hunting…since he’s not going to school, tell them in the car and get Carlisle to tell Esme…tell Jasper he needs to leave…” I listed possibilities. “When are they meeting? How soon?” I could hear the stress in his voice. “Within the month.” I replied. “Quickly tell them; they need to know.”
“Jasper, I’m sorry.” Carlisle put his hand on my shoulder as I sobbed. “Perhaps there will be someone else?” He was calm, but I felt the grief and sadness he was feeling. For me. “I don’t think so. No one can make me feel like that.” My almost-filled-with-tears eyes looked into his. “Carlisle, thanks for letting us stay here.” I turned away from his suddenly stern gaze. “Jasper, are you leaving as well?” I could feel his golden eyes on me, even turned. “I can’t stay here…not while she’s not.” I hoped he understood. I couldn’t stay here; the memories would haunt me forever.
“Jasper, I understand. We will do most anything for you to stay. Would it help if we moved somewhere else, somewhere we haven’t been before?” There was an idea I had not thought of. What if we started over? Rosalie would probably get a bit mad, but even she would do anything to make me stay. “We could try. I’m not positive it will work; I could leave at a moment's notice.” Carlisle nodded. “We could try. Would you like me to tell the others? Or would you?”
“I will. They might as well get mad at me, not you.” I took a deep breath and walked out of my room. And then, I did something I had never done of my own free will. I walked into Alice’s bathroom and checked the mirror.
My face looked “inhumanly beautiful” as a human would put it, but to me it looked horrible. Only to a vampire would I look horrible anyway. The signs were subtle. I couldn’t have red eyes nor a tear-streaked face. I couldn’t have a wet face or anything that showed. However, it seemed that I could have my hair in knots from stress and worry. My clothes were covered it dirt and filth and my body was still shaking. “Jasper?” Bella walked into the bathroom.
Immediately, I turned against the wall, ashamed. “Jasper, you don’t have to be ashamed. Turn around.” For once, Bella’s voice was powerful, in charge. I turned. “Jasper, I understand what’s going on. I went through the same thing.” Bella’s hand rubbed my arm. “And I heard you and Carlisle. Everyone else was hunting.” She looked into me eyes. “Do you want me to help? I’ve gone through this and I know you have to tell them.” I nodded slowly.
“Alright. First, while no one else is here, is there anything else you need to get out of your body?” She waited as I thought. “Nothing that I can think of.” My voice sounded slightly raspy, not the smooth, compelling voice it usually was. “Good. Now, you’re going to want to change. And probably shower.” She smiled. “I’ll leave for that.”
I followed her instructions, slipping into cleaner clothes. I heard a knock on the bathroom door. “Jasper?” It was Bella again. “Come in Bella.” My voice was still raspy…strange. “Jasper, now just calm down. You’re stressed and worried and raveled up. Sit down and relax.” I sank to the floor and she sat next to me. “Just clear your mind.”
Clearing my mind took time. But, after an immeasurable amount of time, I had relaxed. “See? Now we just have to snarl through your hair.” Bella laughed lightly and handed me a brush. “Thanks.” I muttered. “Don’t worry about it.”
As I pulled the brush through my mass of blond, knotted curls, Bella watched me with concern. "Jasper, where did Al- she go?" She stopped herself from saying Alice for my sake.
Could she really not know? Not have figured it out? Bella was smart; I couldn't believe she didn't know already.
"Jasper?" She put her hand on my shoulder. "She's not coming back, is she?" I nodded. She had figured it out. "I'm sorry." She looked into my eyes, hers filled with sorrow. She hugged me gently as a few more sobs escaped from my throat.
I walked swiftly through the forest, snifling occasionally. It was getting to be spring, which meant allergies. Lots of them.
I climbed up my favorite tree, sneezing as I did. Pulling up my e-mail, I saw that my Social Studies teacher had e-mailed the test out. I began typing the answers back to her.
"Bella?" She smiled. "Yes?"
"I'm going to go tell them. If you could go downstairs and look like you don't know what happened..." My voice trailed off. "Sure." She smiled sadly at me, then turned and walked away.
"No...No!" Not that. Anything but that. It couldn't happen. It'd ruin everything. No, no, no...."No! He can't! Edward!" Edward realized what he had to do. "I can't! Alice, don't you realize! He's in to much pain for that!"
"You have to Edward. It's the only way."
I took a deep breath and opened the bathroom door. Carefully, I walked out.
As I walked downstairs, I noticed that the entire family was already in the meeting room; excellent. That would make things much faster and easier. I walked in slowly, trying to avoid their gazes. I sank into my chair, attempting to ignore their looks, but they wouldn't look away.
"Jasper, you have something to say?" Carlisle's eyes, as well, were now on me.
I pulled my hair back into a messy ponytail as I clicked the Send button. Now all I had to do was wait.
"Yes." I gulped, though it did no good. "As you all know, someone wasn't here today." I emphasized, hoping they understood who it was. "You saw me." I nodded towards Bella. "I can't stay here. Without her."
Rosalie bit her lip, nervous, worried, and scared. Carlisle was thoughtful, trying to figure out the best way to put things. Emmett had a hint of regret to his usual happy manor. Esme was devastated by even the idea of me leaving. Bella was understanding, knowing what I was going through.
"I was thinking perhaps we could leave and try somewhere they've never been." Carlisle's calm voice took over, but eyes were still on me. Rosalie relaxed slightly, but tensed again as she heard his words. "Leave?" She hissed. "Yes." Carlisle stated. "We've stated in Forks too long; it's time we leave anyway."
No. No. No. We were not going to leave again. NO.
I paced, trying to get the attention- and eyes- on me and off of Jasper, who was clearly not enjoying it. "I was thinking about New York, if Rosalie was okay with that?" I looked her way.
Rosalie was tense again. I was not going to change her emotions to my avail; I wanted her to have her own say. "Is there anywhere else?" She nearly forced out of her mouth, her face firm.
"There's nowhere else I've been without her."
What did I care about more? My brother or myself? Jasper was devastated...and he was my brother. My true brother. Sighing, I turned towards Emmett. "For you." I wispered to Jasper. "We can go." Jasper's face looked lighter, as if he hadn't been expecting that response. I walked over and sat next to him, hugging him gently. He was so obviously devastated, I couldn't help myself. "It's going to be okay Jasper. You can't leave us."
I cleared my throat and eveyone looked up. "How many of us are willing to move?" Jasper nodded in my direction. I nodded back. "Jasper. Anyone else?" Bella raised her hand slowly. "If...if it's what Jasper needs." She winked at Jasper. "As long as none of us leave without warning." Rosalie shot a glare at Jasper, who flinched away. That truly showed how bad this was for him. Rosalie was always like that, glaring and what not, but Jasper was always fine with it. Now he was flinching away. "Sorry." She whispered. "Whatever you need, sweetheart." Esme smiled at Jasper, kissing the top of his head. "Whatever's fine with me." Emmett grinned, happy, even now. "It's what Jasper needs, so I agree." My face must have shown the sympathy I flet for him now, because everyone began to nod.
"Thanks everyone." I muttered in a low voice, and went to go back up to Alic- my room.
"No!" Edward ran through the door. "We are NOT moving, no matter what!" Bella leaped to his side. "Edward, don't do this. Jasper has to go." She whispered quickly. "I...I don't care. We're staying." He...didn't care. I gave up. I stole up to my room. I was leaving, even if no one else was.
"Oh, there you are Edward." I smiled as my son came in through the door. "We're discussing moving to New York."
"No, we're not. We're staying right here." He muttered. "I'm sorry, Edward, but we decided. We're all leaving." Carlisle came to stand beside me. "We can't move! Just trust me!" He screamed. "Edward, this is about Jasper and Alice. Please." Carlisle's voice lowered to a whisper. "I...I don't care."
What the heck was Edward doing? Jasper needed to go. "I'll be right back Rose." I slipped out if the argument.
"Jasper?" I opened the door silently. His sobs answered me. "Jazz?" He was lying on the bed, face down, mumbling something. As I got closer, I heard what he was saying, "Alice...Alice...Alice." I put my hand on his shoulder and he sat up. "Hey." His voice was thick, cracked...and depressed. "Hey. Listen...don't listen to Edward. He's just upset." Jasper tried to glare at me, but it didn't work out as he planned. "I'm upset too, but I'm not screaming." He muttered. I could have sworn I might have saw a tear go down his cheek, except for the fact that vampires can't cry. But, just to be sure..."Jasper, are you...crying?" I asked. "Whatever crying is to a vampire." He muttered. "It doesn't even matter anymore. I'm leaving."
What was Edward doing? Did he not see what was going on with Jasper, his brother? He could only survive, only stay if we left. "Edward." Esme's voice took on a fierce tone I had never heard before. "We are leaving. It is your choice whether to go with us or not, but we are leaving. You must accept that fact. For your brother's sake." He glared. "We. Are. Not. Moving. I don't care what Jasper wants. I know what he's going to need later, and you don't." He muttered. "Edward, I'm sorry. We are. Jasper's utterly devastated." I shot back at him. "Edward, this isn't like you at all. We've moved for you because of Bella. Now, please, go help Jasper through this. You and Bella truly understand what he's going through. Alice is gone forever." Esme's voice was soft again. "He's going to be more devastated if we move. Trust me." He growled. "Why?" Esme asked curiously. "What could upset him more than this?"
"I can't say with him here." Edward's voice had quieted to a whisper. I heard Jasper's cry of despair and anger and he bolted down the stairs, hatred coloring his face. "No! Jasper!" Emmett followed him, but he wasn't fast enough. Jasper leaped at Edward, pinning him to the ground, about to snap. "NEVER say that again!" He roared. "You think just because you left Bella you know what it's like! You don't! You knew you were going back to her! I know she's NOT coming back!" At the mention of him leaving Bella, Edward snapped. He rolled over Jasper, teeth at his neck. And his teeth snapped together.
I felt Edward's teeth on my neck and the second he bit, I knew I had lost. It didn't matter anyway. Who cared? Edward bit the other side of my neck, and then proceeded to my arms, growling and snapping. Eventually, Emmett and Rosalie hauled him off me, but I didn't care. He had bitten me about forty times.
"Come here Jasper." Rosalie helped me stagger upstairs, and I collapsed on the bed. My entire body burned, burned like fire, when Carlisle walked in. "Oh, no." He seemed to go paler, of that was even possible. He walked over faster, inspecting my neck. "Rosalie, go get me some cold water. Now." She jogged to the bathroom, bringing a glass with her. Carlisle dipped two fingers into the glass and rubbed it over my neck. It burned at first, but, slowly, soothed the burning sensation. "Rose, if you could help Jasper with this?" She nodded. "I have to go get Edward calmed down."
Rosalie helped me up as I winced. I rubbed my left forearm, the venom seeming to burn there more than anywhere else. "Does that hurt?" She asked.
"Yes." His voice was raspy and broken. "Come here." I put two fingers in the water and brushed it over the wound as Carlisle as done, but it didn't seem to help in. In fact, it seemed to make the pain worse. "Sit down." I commanded. He did. He must be really upset; he never obeyed me. "Let me see that." I very gently examined his arm. It seemed slightly swollen. "Carlisle!" I called. He hurried up. "Yes?" I pointed to Jasper's arm. "Oh, no. Rosalie, move out of the way." He leaned over his arm. "I... well... I think Edward broke his arm."
I gasped. "But...he's a vampire! He can't bre-" Carlisle interrupted. "By human forces." He reminded me. "Edward isn't human. It's broken." He muttered. "But it will heal. Rosalie, bring me my cast kit, will you?" I nodded and went to grab it.
"Jasper?" I took the advantage while Rosalie was gone to say something to him. "Edward wants to talk to you after this."
I winced as my arm began to sting. "I'm sorry Jasper." Carlisle looked into my eyes. He looked so much like my real father. Blond hair, golden eyes... I wouldn't be surprised if Carlisle and Esme really were my parents, and Rosalie really was my sister. With my honey blond hair, I probably looked like their real son anyway. "Here you go Carlisle." Rosalie handed him a black box and stayed in the room. She smiled and wrapped her arm around my shoulders. It was strangely comforting, probably because it felt like she was the only one who really cared.
As Carlisle began to fix my arm, Rosalie looked me straight in the eyes. "Are you leaving?" I very slowly nodded. "I can't live like this."
"There." Carlisle finished wrapping my arm. It felt very strange, not having my arm work anymore. I moved it slightly and winced again. It was still tender, and it burned. "I'm sorry Jasper." Carlisle's fingers lingered on my shoulder for a split-second, and he walked out. The second he did, Rosalie followed. "I'm getting Edward." She looked at me sadly, and walked out. I did the only thing I could think of.
I slid the window open and jumped out.
It was the worst plan of my life. I didn't have the balance I used to from my arm, so I landed wrong. That would have been fine, because concrete didn't hurt, except that I landed on my arm. And it burned worse than ever. I heard some type of shriek, but I didn't know what it was. I wanted it all to go away. I couldn't sleep, but I could get very close. I closed my eyes and blocked out everything. Not sleep, but close enough.
As I pulled Breaking Dawn out of my bookbag, I heard a scream. Whoever was screaming sounded wounded, and I immediatly put my book back into my bag. Swiftly, my feet landed on the forest ground, and I took my first-aid kit out of the bag. I had a feeling I would need it.
I ran swiftly through the forest, ducking and jumping, trying to find whoever had made the strangled screech. I emerged in a clearing, a white house in front of me. Perhaps it was someone there. I jogged around and found someone lying there on the pavement.
Wait... it wasn't just a boy. It was...
Jasper Whitlock Hale.
The vampire of my dreams.
I ran towards him, trying to see what was wrong. I saw the cast around his arm, and touched it gently. He flinched, and his eyes opened. Pitch black hunger filled his face, and suddenly his hand was around my neck, and his head was slowly approaching.
I heard something hit the concrete, and then a crunch. A scream. I ran to look out the window. Jasper was lying there, eyes closed, nearly dead.
A girl entered the picture. She had dark blond hair to her waist, and piercing blue eyes that shone, even in the moonlight. She sat next to Jasper, her fingers rubbing over her neck. Who was she? Not a vampire, surely; her eyes were an astonishing blue. One finger brushed Jasper's ever-delicate cast, and she was held in Jasper's vice-like grip, about to die.
He snarled, his lips right next to my ear. "No!" I heard someone land, almost catlike, next to him. "Emmett!" The newcomer yelled, and another figure was there. Jasper's hands were pryed off my throat, and the first newcomer grabbed my wrist. "Who are you?" She immediatly asked, pulling me along. "Amanda Noelle." I choked out, my throat still hurting. I didn't need to ask who she was. Rosalie Lillian Hale, beauty queen. Vampire.
"Come on!" Rosalie tugged harder, and I realized I was standing still. I went with her, leaving Jasper behind.
"Jasper!" I yelled as Rosalie ran out of sight. I kept his arms behind his back as he struggled, wanting the girl's blood. "Emmett, let go! You're rebreaking my arm!" He cried out in pain, but I couldn't let go. "I'm sorry, Jazz, but I'm not letting you near her or Rose." I let his broken arm have a little more freedom, though.
"Carlisle." Rosalie said as we walked into the house I had seen earlier. She looked me over. "Do you want to lie down or something?" She asked. "Uh... sure?" I sat on the couch awkwardly, feeling out of place. And then the model walked in.
He was tall, blond, handsome, and I couldn't help but stare. He laughed. "And who do we have here, Rosalie? A human friend? Jasper's not going to like this." He joked lightly. "I can tell you Jasper doens't like it." She muttered under her breath, and a spasm of pain shot through me. I didn't want to hurt him; all I wanted to do was help.
"This is Amanda Noelle." Rosalie said, her face expressionless. "Hello Amanda Noelle." Carlisle smiled. "Just Amanda. Noelle is my middle name." I blushed lightly. "Okay." He chuckled. "I guess she already knows?" He asked in a low voice. "She saw him attack. She's going to start suspecting soon." Rosalie whispered in the same volume. They were talking about me.
"Um... do you mean... that your vampires?" I asked, very, very quiet. Carlisle turned slowly, keeping his face calm. "Where would you get that idea?" He asked. He sounded normal, but I could detect a hint of worry, and his eyes showed that he was lying.
"Carlisle, I know you're vampires." I coughed harshly. "I know your eyes turn from gold to black. I know that Jasper can't restrain himself from blood. I know that Edward can read minds. I kno-" Carlisle chuckled. "Maybe we don't need to try and keep up the facade. Yes, Amanda, we're vampires." My face split into a huge smile.
Rosalie stared. "What are you so happy about?" She asked, very confused. "I've read about you... and Jasper... and... oh, my gosh, you're all actually real!" Rosalie looked at Carlisle worriedly. "Amanda, where exactly did you hear about us?" He asked. "The Twilight Saga."
As soon as the girl was inside, I relaxed, and Emmett let go. "Who was that?" I asked breathlessly. "Amanda Noelle." He answered. "Come on, Jazz- we need to go hunting."
Carlisle's face looked troubled. "Well, everyone seems to know that vampires aren't real, so, unless you tell..." He looked at me. "I won't." I said quietly. "I would never tell anybody anything." Carlisle smiled. "We'll see."
Carlisle turned to go into his office, but I stayed put, not exactly sure what to do anymore. "Amanda? If you want, I could show you some history of vampires." I bit my lip. I kinda already knew the entire history of everyone from reading Twilight over and over. "Carlisle, she already knows it all from some book." Edward called down. Carlisle chuckled. "Very well, then. Now, Amanda... given recent events, meaning Jasper's... behavior, I'd feel a bit more comfortable if you stayed with us for a while. Where do you and your parents live?" I swallowed on the words "parents". "We...we don't live anywhere...sir. I live in the forest alone." I looked down at the floor, biting my bottom lip. Carlisle smiled, his golden eyes warm and inviting. "You don't have to call me 'sir', Amanda. Just Carlisle will do. And that's perfectly all right. You can stay here... if you wish." He was giving me a choice. Just like a real dad would do. I smiled. "I'm staying here."
"I'm not surprised." He laughed. "I'll let Bella take you around. She's the newest here, so she can relate to you best."
Emmett and I were hunting, but all I could think about was her. Her intriging scent, her startling blue eyes... just her. We were deep into the forest by now, but I could just barely hear Bella saying, "Here's the forest where we all hunt." The wind blew in my direction, and I could smell her scent, and hear her small giggle as, most likely, her long hair was blown my way. A very bad thing on her part.
I snarled, rubbing out of the forest and blinding speed and reaching the end in seconds. I could see her frightened face, the startling blue eyes now trying to take in what she was seeing, but I didn't register it in my mind. All I registered was that she had a neck with the most amazing blood in it. And it was approaching.
I grabbed her wrist tightly, and I heard her cry out. My lips approached her neck once more, brushing over the smooth skin that was the only thing holding the blood from my lips. It was so easy, so painstakingly simple. All I had to do was bite.
"Jasper!" Carlisle stormed out of the house. "Do you want to be a monster? Do you want to go back to what you used to be? If so, gladly continue. But you are not a monster. You are a person, and people don't eat other people." The girl was shaking in my arms, and I slowly let her go. Her blue eyes were full of fear as she backed away, behind Carlisle. I really needed to stop calling her "the girl" and get her name or something. Yeah, like she'd give a murderous monster her name.
"Amanda, go inside." She nodded, looking frightened as she went inside the house. Oh, so her name was Amanda. At least I wasn't calling her "the girl" anymore. "Jasper, I want you to go to Denali. You shouldn't be here right now if you're going to keep attacking her. You need a break, son, and she needs to get aquainted. Get Emmett or Edward to go with you." I nodded slowly as Emmett emerged from the trees. "I'll go, Jazz." I nodded again, and we got in the car.
I had no idea what to do. Jasper was being Jasper. I had loved him because of Twilight, but he was scaring me right now. "C-Carlisle? What's wrong with Jasper? Nobody else is attacking me like crazy." Carlisle laughed as he shut the door. "I thought you would already know this? No? Well, I'll explain. Jasper's past... well, he wasn't like us here. It was the normal vampire life he was used to. He fed on humans whenever he wanted and needed. Then, he found Alice- or, rather, she found him. They came here, and he was very uncontrollable. He's gotten better, but the old longing is always there. He's always going to be the one to snap first, becuase he's the newest to this type of lifestyle and doesn't know any better. It's instinctual." I sighed. "But what about Bella? She was human, and every time she came over, he didn't try and eat her. Except the birthday party, but that's was because there was blood." Carlisle sighed. "Well, you know how Edward was attracted to Bella's blood more than he was to anyone else's?" I nodded- that was one of the main points from Twilight. "Well, Jasper's attracted to your blood more than anyone else's. La tua cantante. It's very difficult for him anyway, but with you, it makes the lust uncontrollable. He can't help but try and get to your blood." I looked at him sadly. "So, it's my fault he's suffering?" I didn't need him to answer. I already knew it was my fault.
I could hear them talking for miles, which wasn't what I needed right now. Emmett was driving, obviously- why would I drive when I was acting like a deranged maniac? But I focused on their words anyway. "So, it's my fault he's suffering?" Amanda asked quietly, a note of sadness in her voice. Carlisle didn't answer that. How could she blame herself? I was the one driving away, and this was not in any way her fault. I just couldn't control myself. She didn't do anything wrong. It wasn't her fault at all. On impulse, I took my cell phone out of my pocket and dialed Carlisle's number.
"Yes, Jasper?" He asked. "Let me speak to Amanda." I could feel his alarm on the other end, and I didn't even need my power to do it. "She's talking to Rosalie right now, Jasper. They seem to be bonding very well." He sounded pleased. I could hear their soft talking over the phone, hear Bella walking into the room to join the conversation. "I need to talk to her now, Carlisle." He sighed. "This better be good, Jasper." I heard him walking up the stairs and knocking on the door. "Amanda? Jasper wants to talk to you." I heard, very faintly, Rosalie and Bella giggling, and then Amanda saying, "What does he want, Carlisle?" Carlisle started talking to her. "I'm not sure. He just said he needed to talk to you." She sighed and took the phone. "Yes?"
Her voice was soft and almost vurnerable, and I could almost feel the fear rolling off her, even this far away. "Amanda?" I asked. "Who else would it be?" She muttered. I bit back a laugh. "I wanted to tell you I'm sorry. I should have been able to control myself better. I'd tell you in person, but then I'd just have to apologize again. Please don't blame yourself for this, though. This was my fault entirely." She sighed quietly. "I forgive you, Jasper. Thanks." I could almost see her smiling on the other side, except for the fact that I had never seen her smile, just scared. "Your welcome. Bye." I turned the phone off, feeling as if a weight had been lifted off my chest.
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Re: Correction- We're Not Together
by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 2:44 pm
YAY! XD Haha, I hope you post more . . . like . . . soon!
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I need more replies than just you, Shad.
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Lol, true. =3 I g2g anyway, so I can wait.
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Lol, I think the main problem is that there's not very many people on right now! XD But I will.
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by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 3:00 pm
I'll get it to Twilighter3000. She'd probably like it. 
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Good idea! And SaddleClub too!
And SaddleClub too!
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Okay. XD I'll tell Saddle, and you tell Danielle.
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by iGrievous 6/8/2009, 3:20 pm
Is this story finished? and why is the beginning different than before?
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by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 3:23 pm
I changed it.
No, it's not finished.
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by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 4:04 pm
Actually, the one in real life is different. It started with a diary entry.
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Good job! I hope you post more soon.
I hope you post more soon.
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by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 8:02 pm
Whenever I get bored, I go and write. (and since there are only, like 17 users here, I might get bored a lot. 
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by Jesus4Eternity 6/8/2009, 8:15 pm
Yay! Smeone else in online! (Sorry, I get bored very easily.)
Have you seen my twilight RP?
Have you seen my twilight RP?
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by shadowsowner888 6/8/2009, 9:17 pm
Yay! 
Awesome new part. XD Lol, I feel bad for Alice, though! She seems so clueless.
Awesome new part. XD Lol, I feel bad for Alice, though! She seems so clueless.
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"Since when did I go blond?"
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She thinks it's her and Jasper.
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