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Re: Correction- We're Not Together
LOL, is my part good?
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I'm thinking it was good...LOL
Last edited by Jesus4Eternity on 8/27/2009, 7:45 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Haha, a censor!! x3 What did vista stand for again?
*checks censored words*
Oh, okay. xD I guess it was a typo . . . or . . . something? Idk. What'd you mean to say? (Spell it out just in case.)
*checks censored words*
Oh, okay. xD I guess it was a typo . . . or . . . something? Idk. What'd you mean to say? (Spell it out just in case.)
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a s s u m i n g
(BTW, I edited my above post so it's not VISTA!-ed anymore. LOL)
(BTW, I edited my above post so it's not VISTA!-ed anymore. LOL)
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Oh my gosh, no one's posted here since August. xD
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IKR? It's like, "Um...people? Still there?" xD
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Your story is really cool!!
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I am going to write more now. Be happyful. xD
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Added more!
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I love the story! Please add more soon!!
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I added some, like, 2 hours ago! xD, I have a new idea for something...BRB.
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Awesomeness. Can't wait!
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Nice job. Haha, you really should post more soon; I've forgotten how awesome it is to read the new parts.
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I posted longer this time; are you still spazzing? xD
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Mmmm . . . well, it's the next day, so it's kinda worn off. xP I really really really wanna read more though!
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Yeah, so do I!
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When Sophia reads this, more shall be added. xD
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is everything on the 1st 2 posts still, or are there more hidden in all the pages? I've only read up until this part:
Rosalie was tense again. I was not going to change her emotions to my avail; I wanted her to have her own say. "Is there anywhere else?" She nearly forced out of her mouth, her face firm.
"There's nowhere else I've been without her."
Rosalie was tense again. I was not going to change her emotions to my avail; I wanted her to have her own say. "Is there anywhere else?" She nearly forced out of her mouth, her face firm.
"There's nowhere else I've been without her."
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First two.
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kk, just checking before I started to edit it!
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Yay! I know there's at least one mistake; see if you can find it. xD
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Peeps, this might not have many edits for a month; I'm noveling.
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