iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
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iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by Jesus4Eternity 12/5/2009, 10:33 pm
Maturity: Something mature? From me? Really? xD. Kissing and maybe a little violence from Sam.
Fantasy: Uh... this never really happened. (Or did it? O.o)
Character POV's
Fredward "Freddie" Benson
Amanda Noelle (Me!)
Samantha "Sam" Puckett
Spencer Shay
Carly Shay
Marissa Benson
Lewbert
iLove Freddie Benson
I stepped out of the car. New apartment, new city, new school, new people, new... everything. "Amanda, get your luggage!" My mom called from the driver's side. I walked around and popped open the trunk. It wasn't that full; my dad was coming with everything else. The trunk held only six bags- my overnight bag, my clothes for the next seven days, and the same for my mother and younger sister. I pulled my suitcase containing the clothes down onto the pavement and set the small, carriable bag on top. Pulling the rolling handle, I began to walk inside. "Mom, I'm going to get settled, okay?" I called. "Sure!" She called. I rolled my stuff into the lobby. New everything.
"Get off my floors!" Was the first thing I heard as the door shut behind me. "Excuse me? Uh... I need the keys for room 7C?" I was very confused. "Oh. You're the new ones, are you?" He groaned. "Here are the keys. Hey. You're not older than eighteen... oh, never mind."
"Hey! Carly? You down here?" A brunette boy emerged from the elevator. "Carly? Hey? You h- Oh." He spotted me hovering on the edge. "Hi. I'm Freddie Benson." He smiled, and I couldn't help but smile back. "Amanda Noelle. But I go by Amanda." The door opened behind me, and my mom walked in. "Mom... there are three keys. One for you, one for Dad, and one for me... right?" I looked at her pleadingly. "Oh, fine." She agreed. "Sweet!" I handed her two keys and put the other in my pocket. "Oh... who's this?" She asked, noticing Freddie. "I'm Freddie Benson. I live in 7B." He smiled. "Really? We're in 7C." I grinned. "Cool. You live next to Carly... and Spencer. That'll be interesting." Freddie laughed. "Why?" I asked curiously. "Oh, um... Spencer's an... interesing artist. He has strange methods." He looked at me, and I knew to stop asking questions. "Need help with that?" Without waiting for my answer, he grabbed the handle of my suitcase. "If it's okay, can I show Amanda around?" Freddie asked. "If you want." My mom replied. I smiled. "Uh... yeah!" Freddie grinned. "Sweet. I'll help you get set up." He rolled my suitcase into the elevator, and I followed him in. The doors closed slowly, and I was whisked away to my new life.
"You'll be going to Ridgeway?" Freddie asked slowly. "Yep. Uh... where is it?" He laughed. "I'll show you. We can walk together, if you want." I smiled. "That'd be nice."
The elevator opened and he led me to 7C. "I live right there..." He pointed towards another door, "And Carly and Spencer live there. I'll let you put your stuff away, and we can meet them."
"I only have to drop this off." I smiled. "I'll be back in a few minutes."
I lied my bags on the floor gently, not wanting to hurt the wood. I grabbed a brush after my purse and combed quickly through my hair, and walked back out. "Okay. I'm ready."
Freddie's eyes sparkled as I shut the door silently. We walked towards their room, anticipation building in my chest. Freddie knocked quietly. "Coming!" I heard a very familiar voice. Carly.
I took a deep breath. "Calm down. She's fine." Freddie laughed. And the door opened.
"Hey Freddie! Who's this?" She looked at me curiously, and I rolled my shoulders uncomfortably. "This is Amanda." Carly backed up slowly. "Mandi? Freddie, why the heck did you bring her here?" She glared at me with utter dislike. "Carly! This isn't Mandi. This is Amanda Noelle. She just moved here, and she's going to Ridgeway. She's seen the show." Carly looked surprised. "The show hasn't been up for long... maybe this will be the first normal fan we meet." I laughed. "I doubt that. I'm anything but normal." Carly rolled her eyes. "None of us really are. Come on in." She shut the door as Freddie sat on the couch. I stood, unsure what to do. "You cna sit down." Carly whispered, walking into the kitchen. I sat down, still smiling.
Fantasy: Uh... this never really happened. (Or did it? O.o)
Character POV's
Fredward "Freddie" Benson
Amanda Noelle (Me!)
Samantha "Sam" Puckett
Spencer Shay
Carly Shay
Marissa Benson
Lewbert
iLove Freddie Benson
I stepped out of the car. New apartment, new city, new school, new people, new... everything. "Amanda, get your luggage!" My mom called from the driver's side. I walked around and popped open the trunk. It wasn't that full; my dad was coming with everything else. The trunk held only six bags- my overnight bag, my clothes for the next seven days, and the same for my mother and younger sister. I pulled my suitcase containing the clothes down onto the pavement and set the small, carriable bag on top. Pulling the rolling handle, I began to walk inside. "Mom, I'm going to get settled, okay?" I called. "Sure!" She called. I rolled my stuff into the lobby. New everything.
"Get off my floors!" Was the first thing I heard as the door shut behind me. "Excuse me? Uh... I need the keys for room 7C?" I was very confused. "Oh. You're the new ones, are you?" He groaned. "Here are the keys. Hey. You're not older than eighteen... oh, never mind."
"Hey! Carly? You down here?" A brunette boy emerged from the elevator. "Carly? Hey? You h- Oh." He spotted me hovering on the edge. "Hi. I'm Freddie Benson." He smiled, and I couldn't help but smile back. "Amanda Noelle. But I go by Amanda." The door opened behind me, and my mom walked in. "Mom... there are three keys. One for you, one for Dad, and one for me... right?" I looked at her pleadingly. "Oh, fine." She agreed. "Sweet!" I handed her two keys and put the other in my pocket. "Oh... who's this?" She asked, noticing Freddie. "I'm Freddie Benson. I live in 7B." He smiled. "Really? We're in 7C." I grinned. "Cool. You live next to Carly... and Spencer. That'll be interesting." Freddie laughed. "Why?" I asked curiously. "Oh, um... Spencer's an... interesing artist. He has strange methods." He looked at me, and I knew to stop asking questions. "Need help with that?" Without waiting for my answer, he grabbed the handle of my suitcase. "If it's okay, can I show Amanda around?" Freddie asked. "If you want." My mom replied. I smiled. "Uh... yeah!" Freddie grinned. "Sweet. I'll help you get set up." He rolled my suitcase into the elevator, and I followed him in. The doors closed slowly, and I was whisked away to my new life.
"You'll be going to Ridgeway?" Freddie asked slowly. "Yep. Uh... where is it?" He laughed. "I'll show you. We can walk together, if you want." I smiled. "That'd be nice."
The elevator opened and he led me to 7C. "I live right there..." He pointed towards another door, "And Carly and Spencer live there. I'll let you put your stuff away, and we can meet them."
"I only have to drop this off." I smiled. "I'll be back in a few minutes."
I lied my bags on the floor gently, not wanting to hurt the wood. I grabbed a brush after my purse and combed quickly through my hair, and walked back out. "Okay. I'm ready."
Freddie's eyes sparkled as I shut the door silently. We walked towards their room, anticipation building in my chest. Freddie knocked quietly. "Coming!" I heard a very familiar voice. Carly.
I took a deep breath. "Calm down. She's fine." Freddie laughed. And the door opened.
"Hey Freddie! Who's this?" She looked at me curiously, and I rolled my shoulders uncomfortably. "This is Amanda." Carly backed up slowly. "Mandi? Freddie, why the heck did you bring her here?" She glared at me with utter dislike. "Carly! This isn't Mandi. This is Amanda Noelle. She just moved here, and she's going to Ridgeway. She's seen the show." Carly looked surprised. "The show hasn't been up for long... maybe this will be the first normal fan we meet." I laughed. "I doubt that. I'm anything but normal." Carly rolled her eyes. "None of us really are. Come on in." She shut the door as Freddie sat on the couch. I stood, unsure what to do. "You cna sit down." Carly whispered, walking into the kitchen. I sat down, still smiling.
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by SaddleClub 12/6/2009, 12:15 am
If you kill Carly, this will be the greatest story of all time. xD
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by shadowsowner888 12/6/2009, 10:09 am
Oh no. xD Poor Jasper . . .
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by Jesus4Eternity 12/6/2009, 1:50 pm
Oh, gosh. Jasper better not read this... he knows it's just all about my life before him. xD
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by wolflover96 12/6/2009, 9:12 pm
*Waiting for story too* lol
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by shadowsowner888 12/7/2009, 11:04 pm
Oh, okay. xD
Yay! That was a cool part!
Lol, I can't wait to read more . . . it's so cool because, being based on a TV series, I can easily picture everything in my head. xD And I'm glad I'm familiar enough with it to know who everyone is, lol!
Yay! That was a cool part!
Lol, I can't wait to read more . . . it's so cool because, being based on a TV series, I can easily picture everything in my head. xD And I'm glad I'm familiar enough with it to know who everyone is, lol!
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by Jesus4Eternity 12/8/2009, 8:46 am
xD, yeah.
I can kinda see it... at least everyone knows what Freddie looks like. XD
I can kinda see it... at least everyone knows what Freddie looks like. XD
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by SaddleClub 12/10/2009, 6:04 pm
I like it so far!!
Oh, and I have a suggestion for the next part:
"Freddie introduced me to Carly and Spencer. Then Carly fell out a window and died."
Oh, and I have a suggestion for the next part:
"Freddie introduced me to Carly and Spencer. Then Carly fell out a window and died."
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by shadowsowner888 12/10/2009, 7:08 pm
xD Wow, Saddle . . .
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by shadowsowner888 12/14/2009, 7:24 pm
Come on, we need more than that! xD I wanna see the part where Carly falls out the window. (Translation - wonderful job! :3)
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by Jesus4Eternity 12/14/2009, 7:45 pm
Uh, I'm not doing that. xD, Freddie'd be depressed the entire time.
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by shadowsowner888 12/14/2009, 9:58 pm
xD Awww . . . but it woulda been funny!
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by SaddleClub 12/18/2009, 11:44 pm
Jesus4Eternity wrote:Uh, I'm not doing that. xD, Freddie'd be depressed the entire time.
Have him fall for someone else xD
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by Jesus4Eternity 12/18/2009, 11:48 pm
Psh, that someone is myself. XD
No Carly-out-window scene.
No Carly-out-window scene.
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by SaddleClub 12/18/2009, 11:50 pm
Awwww. 
Hit by a truck?
Attacked by a rabid dog?
Fell down stairs?
Trapped in elevator?
Kidnapped?
Murd--
Ok, I'll stop now. xD
Hit by a truck?
Attacked by a rabid dog?
Fell down stairs?
Trapped in elevator?
Kidnapped?
Murd--
Ok, I'll stop now. xD
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by Jesus4Eternity 12/18/2009, 11:51 pm
O.o
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*no comment*
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by SaddleClub 12/18/2009, 11:53 pm
What? I stopped. xD
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by shadowsowner888 12/19/2009, 10:38 am
Ooo! I have a better idea! She's walking along the street, when her hair spontaneously bursts into flame.
It's perfect! Funny and not murderous at all.
She's walking along the street, when her hair spontaneously bursts into flame.It's perfect! Funny and not murderous at all.
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by SaddleClub 12/19/2009, 1:34 pm
YES!!!! That's PERFECT!!!!
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Re: iLove Freddie Benson; An iCarly Fanfiction
by Tolly12bells 12/19/2009, 7:48 pm
Excellent story! ...and comments! xD
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