Tidbits of unfinished songs...
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Tidbits of unfinished songs...
I never seem to finish my songs. Oh well. Here are some unfinished tidbits of songs...
Unnamed
(This song is about no one in general. It could be me, it could be one of my friends. It's mainly about people who let their dreams slowly slip away.)
Your dreams, they're slippin' away
Your dreams, they're fadin' fast,
Your dreams are loosin' color,
You've put it all in the past.
Do you even remember?
All the ambition you had?
Because you used to shine so bright,
now every word is a fight.
Remember that dream we used to have,
of me and you?
Strange Phenomenon
(This song is about how every year at school, people change. And not always for the better.)
It seems that every year,
as life goes on,
the hemlines get higher,
and the necklines get lower.
And it's a strange phenomenon,
oh, yeah, it's a strange phenomenon.
It seems that every year,
as life goes on,
the laughs they get louder,
and the grades they slip deeper.
And it's a strange phenomenon,
oh, yeah, it's a strange phenomenon.
Oh and it seems that every year,
you try a little harder,
just to fit in,
and it seems that every year you loose yourself,
just a little bit more
Unnamed
(This song is about no one in general. It could be me, it could be one of my friends. It's mainly about people who let their dreams slowly slip away.)
Your dreams, they're slippin' away
Your dreams, they're fadin' fast,
Your dreams are loosin' color,
You've put it all in the past.
Do you even remember?
All the ambition you had?
Because you used to shine so bright,
now every word is a fight.
Remember that dream we used to have,
of me and you?
Strange Phenomenon
(This song is about how every year at school, people change. And not always for the better.)
It seems that every year,
as life goes on,
the hemlines get higher,
and the necklines get lower.
And it's a strange phenomenon,
oh, yeah, it's a strange phenomenon.
It seems that every year,
as life goes on,
the laughs they get louder,
and the grades they slip deeper.
And it's a strange phenomenon,
oh, yeah, it's a strange phenomenon.
Oh and it seems that every year,
you try a little harder,
just to fit in,
and it seems that every year you loose yourself,
just a little bit more
Mouse- Short Short Maker
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Re: Tidbits of unfinished songs...
Oh man, good job, Mousie! I really like Strange Phenomenon especially . . . it's just so true, isn't it?
Re: Tidbits of unfinished songs...
Thank you. ^_^ But, seriously, the other day on the last day of school, I couldn't even keep track of how many girls had short shorts on. e__e
Mouse- Short Short Maker
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Re: Tidbits of unfinished songs...
Absolutely wonderful job, Mouse! *-* Both of these are so very true... Perfect to relate to, and very well written!
Komoda- Best-Selling Author
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Re: Tidbits of unfinished songs...
Thank you very much, Komoda. :3
Mouse- Short Short Maker
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Re: Tidbits of unfinished songs...
Yeah. You should see the girls in my neighborhood. D:
Mouse- Short Short Maker
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Re: Tidbits of unfinished songs...
Wow, these are wonderful!
I especially love the first one, but they're hard to compare. The second one is incredibly true, though. x.x
I especially love the first one, but they're hard to compare. The second one is incredibly true, though. x.x
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