I'll Never Know *unfinished*

by **shadowsowner888** 9/21/2009, 9:00 am

Maturity: PG
Fantasy: Did you know this is fiction?

I picture this as having kinda a soft, gentle tune, with a quiet acoustic guitar strumming chords in the background. nod

If there's one thing in this world . . .
That I can't see,
It's why your eyes light up so bright
When you look at me.

If there's one thing in my life . . .
That I don't understand,
It's why your smile's so full of life
When you take my hand.

CHORUS
I'll never know why you stay with me,
What could I have to hold you?
But you see something, some precious thing,
I know that much, you do.

I'll never know why you just don't leave me,
I've never been much more than other girls.
But to you I'm more, I'm so much more,
I just don't understand . . .

I'll never know why you love me so.

Does this remind any of you peeps of Twilight? o.0

by **Komoda** 9/23/2009, 5:47 pm

Haha, it does remind me of Twilight! It would make such a smooth, soothing song. Kinda like Owl City or Jason Mrazy... Even though I was listening to Kanye while I read it, I still can imagine it having the soft tune you described. I really like it. Very Happy

by **shadowsowner888** 9/24/2009, 10:59 am

x3 Yay! Thanks. I like the sound of Jason singing it . . .

by **Komoda** 9/24/2009, 6:44 pm

You're welcome! Yeah, and that would be awesome.

by **rattyjol** 9/28/2009, 2:27 am

Awesome! Yeah, I was thinking Twilight through the whole thing. XD

by **shadowsowner888** 9/28/2009, 10:38 am

Yay!!

I wrote a Twilighter poem! *runs around screaming*

by **rattyjol** 9/28/2009, 12:07 pm

Haha, nice. XD

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