Trials of a Hero
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Trials of a Hero
by Hyro201 5/27/2010, 3:15 pm
Face down
On the ground
Losing the fight
For what is right
The times you've bleed
Has made you envy the dead
This surrender
Has become a war ender
Because of your retreat
Your unofficial defeat
Evil now roams free
Before whom, all flee
drops of blood
form into floods
you close your eyes
to the worlds demise
You finally stop crying
When you hear all the dying
Time to stop the hate
By challenging fate
Your broken heart
Just needed a kickstart
Your fuse has been lit
Anger risin' just a bit
Your blood pumpin,
Heart thumpin'
In a state of fear
Because death is so near
Take the final shot
This will hurt them a lot
You used to be a zero
Now your a hero
On the ground
Losing the fight
For what is right
The times you've bleed
Has made you envy the dead
This surrender
Has become a war ender
Because of your retreat
Your unofficial defeat
Evil now roams free
Before whom, all flee
drops of blood
form into floods
you close your eyes
to the worlds demise
You finally stop crying
When you hear all the dying
Time to stop the hate
By challenging fate
Your broken heart
Just needed a kickstart
Your fuse has been lit
Anger risin' just a bit
Your blood pumpin,
Heart thumpin'
In a state of fear
Because death is so near
Take the final shot
This will hurt them a lot
You used to be a zero
Now your a hero
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Re: Trials of a Hero
by Puckspaw 5/27/2010, 3:38 pm
Good job, Hyro!
I love that line
Time to stop the hate
By challenging fate
I love that line
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Re: Trials of a Hero
by Novastare 5/27/2010, 3:40 pm
Wow, I love it! It has a nice ring, and a very good message. Great poem!
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Re: Trials of a Hero
by Malicious Nightmares 5/27/2010, 7:37 pm
*claps like a retard* Aren't you glad that I encouraged you to actually POST some poems? Look at you! You're amazing! =D
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Re: Trials of a Hero
by Hahaha818 5/28/2010, 3:05 pm
Amazing, Hyro!! 
I have finally found a poem worthy of this smiley: 
I have finally found a poem worthy of this smiley: 
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Re: Trials of a Hero
by Malicious Nightmares 5/28/2010, 3:32 pm
Yes, Hyro! It's seriously amazing! <3
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Re: Trials of a Hero
by shadowsowner888 5/28/2010, 4:25 pm
That's awesome, Hyro! x3 I'm glad indeed that Mia convinced you to post it.
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