Untitled poem

So this is the sorta depressing poem I wrote. And now that I think about it, I don't really think it's that good. But I'm still gonna post it. And for anyone wondering, it is based on something.

Maturity: It's kinda just somewhat sad
Fantasy: None

Silently, tears stream down her face
She feels so lost and out of place
No one knows of her silent tears
No one knows her secret fears
Time's slipping past her, hour by hour
She's feeling so helpless, weak without power
She's losing herself, she's fading away
As she cries in her room every day
Her quiet tears continue tofall
Then suddenly, she hears her parents call
She replies in a steady voice
She must leave now, she has no choice
She looks in the mirror and wipes her eyes
Fakes a smile, holds her head up high
No one knows tears have been shed
No one can see inside her head
As she leaves the room, she begins to hide
The happy looking girl is still crying inside

OMG, that's really beautiful, even if it is sad! It's really good!

That's what happens to celebs in their dressing rooms!

Thanks Shadow.

Uh, that's not really what it was based on.

Oh I know. Just saying though.

Oh okay.

That's really beautiful, Saddle
I can feel my eyes water.
It really made me feel like I was there and watching that girl.

Thanks

Yeah, see this girl is not happy, and no one would care, she doesn't know how to do stuff like others, but she knows it would be rude to ask, and if she implies she needs help, or asks her older sibling, they wouldn't reply, or understand, and she just wants to be like the others, but she's misunderstood, and not many people like her.

Or, maybe her pet just died.

If you don't appreciate these posts, and this is some special really emotional thing you wrote about yourself, just go ahead and report, I understand. Just, you know, go on. I can take it (Or am I like the girl? Or is the above like my situation? *Laughs* That's crazy. . . right? you'll (And I don't mean you as in her.) never know! HAAHAHAHA!)

That's....interesting, Gri.

That is a really good and sad poem. I love it!

Thanks

Your welcome!

Awhh... that's a beautiful poem, Saddle. I love it. it's something I can relate to in a way. You did an amazing job on it!

Thank you

That's amazing! Good job - I know from experience that it's really hard to write a rhyming poem without sounding cheesy at some parts, but that was amazing!

Thanks