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Post by Komoda 8/22/2009, 6:06 pm

Maturity: Motherly kissing and fatherly embracing.

Fantasy: Nup.

As One

A beam of silver,
She ripples through the air.
Her lullaby shimmers in the night,
Kissing me gently with her light.

A burst of gold,
He shines through the clouds.
His vibrancy engulfs the day,
Embracing me with His warm ray.

Together They twine,
Sun and Moon as one.
Sending Their love
To us from above.

They're the whisper of the tide,
The twinkle of the stars,
The softness of a bunny,
The sweet nectar of honey.

They're the scent of fresh rain,
And the blooms of fragrant flowers.
Gliding around us like a veil,
Their protection, no one can prevail.

With Him by my side
Each day I wake,
Gazing over me, so dear,
I know I have nothing to fear.

With Her around
Lulling me to sleep,
Her melody chases away
All of my worries, they go astray.

With both of Them near,
All my sadness vanishes.
No, I'm not cured by The Moon or The Sun,
But by both of Them, as one.
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/23/2009, 9:05 am

I like it! xD
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Post by Komoda 8/23/2009, 10:10 pm

Thank you! Very Happy
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Post by Komoda 8/24/2009, 10:13 pm

This was inspired by God and Goddess, by the way. Also by male and female equality. nod
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/25/2009, 9:26 am

Lawl, hmm . . . that sounds like the kinda stuff my mom might freak if I read. xD The male and female equality stuff. (Cus I mean they should be equal, but that's - gah. xD It's confusing to explain.) Who's "goddess" though? xD
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 11:30 am

Oh... Uh, I don't see anything wrong with equality, but okay. Just pretend I'm talking about the sun and moon, 'cause I am... Kinda.

Mother Earth, basically. Or Isis, the Egyptian Goddess. Mother of the earth... You know?
Is that bad too, according to your mom? Isn't their a Christian version of Mother Earth?
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/25/2009, 11:47 am

Lawl, I don't either. xP My mom's just weird. She's like, "Women are supposed to serve their husbands, blahblahblah."

Ohh, okay. xD Well, for Christians there's basically just God, but the closest thing otherwise would probably be Mary. Even though we don't worship her or anything, we respect her as much because she's the mother of Jesus.
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 11:53 am

Man. I'm glad I don't know your mom in real life.

Oh... I see. Mary is another face of Goddess, as I recall. It would make sense, too...
But I don't think Goddess would cheat on Joseph with God. But wait, I'm not making sense. She wouldn't cheat on God with Joseph.
Oh my, still not making sense. XP
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/25/2009, 12:01 pm

If you ever do, you can help me plot against her. Twisted Evil

o.0 Uhhh . . . okay then . . . yeah, now I'm a little confused! xD
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 12:08 pm

Yes! *gets out pool noodles*

See, *gets on educational voice* Many religions have different versions of our God and Goddess. Some worship Allah, others worship Buddha, some worship Isis, and the list goes on and on. But no religion is incorrect, for they're really all different faces of the God and Goddess! So since we all worship the same ultimate rulers (excluding Satan worshipers and scientologists) we should get along and stop burning each other. nod

(Whoa, I spelled Allah like Ala. O.o Good thing I looked it up, 'cause Ala is a demon... Yikes!!)
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/25/2009, 12:17 pm

Haha, well, I'm not going to say anything now. xD Because my mom is right next to me so if she knew what we were talking about she'd get weird.

Okay, I'm gonna say one thing. xD

I have total faith in Catholicism. Like, I don't doubt that it's the true religion and stuff. But if other people believe other things I won't bug them for it and stuff. xD So yeah. That's pretty much all I can say before I start being a bug about other religions.
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 12:20 pm

Oh, lol. Okay!

XP

Yeah, well that's good. As long as you aren't prejudiced about other religions... Which I doubt you are. It's too much to ask to believe in all religions (like me) so... Yeah. XP
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/25/2009, 12:30 pm

Lawl, I'd just confuse myself if I did. xD So yeah, my non-prejudice is the closest we'll get.
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 12:33 pm

That's good, then! nod It's not that I believe in all religions, though. I just think that they're all right in the end. I only really believe in one religion. nod
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Post by shadowsowner888 8/25/2009, 12:41 pm

Ah, okay. cheesy
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Post by Jade 8/25/2009, 1:00 pm

Nice poem Mo Smile
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 1:01 pm

Thanks, Jade! Very Happy
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Post by iGrievous 8/25/2009, 2:24 pm

Oh... I see. Mary is another face of Goddess, as I recall. It would make sense, too...
But I don't think Goddess would cheat on Joseph with God. But wait, I'm not making sense. She wouldn't cheat on God with Joseph.
Oh my, still not making sense. XP

No, see, Mary is just a human, and God put Jesus in Mary, Mary didn't cheat on Joseph, and blah, blah, the story goes on.

See, *gets on educational voice* Many religions have different versions of our God and Goddess. Some worship Allah, others worship Buddha, some worship Isis, and the list goes on and on. But no religion is incorrect, for they're really all different faces of the God and Goddess! So since we all worship the same ultimate rulers (excluding Satan worshipers and scientologists) we should get along and stop burning each other.

We believe in one true God, no one else as a God, no goddess, or anyone, just God, three people in one, Jesus, the Holy Spirit, and God, like a three leaf clover, three leafs, but one uh. . . clover. We don't believe the same thing, because there are differences, you just don't get all these religions. And don't try to argue with me about Catholicism, you would definitely lose as you are not a Catholic, a Catholic shouldn't talk like that, I know.

(Mo is really starting to creep me out, I am going to have to convert her, I think.)
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 3:34 pm

iGrievous wrote:
Oh... I see. Mary is another face of Goddess, as I recall. It would make sense, too...
But I don't think Goddess would cheat on Joseph with God. But wait, I'm not making sense. She wouldn't cheat on God with Joseph.
Oh my, still not making sense. XP

No, see, Mary is just a human, and God put Jesus in Mary, Mary didn't cheat on Joseph, and blah, blah, the story goes on.

See, *gets on educational voice* Many religions have different versions of our God and Goddess. Some worship Allah, others worship Buddha, some worship Isis, and the list goes on and on. But no religion is incorrect, for they're really all different faces of the God and Goddess! So since we all worship the same ultimate rulers (excluding Satan worshipers and scientologists) we should get along and stop burning each other.

We believe in one true God, no one else as a God, no goddess, or anyone, just God, three people in one, Jesus, the Holy Spirit, and God, like a three leaf clover, three leafs, but one uh. . . clover. We don't believe the same thing, because there are differences, you just don't get all these religions. And don't try to argue with me about Catholicism, you would definitely lose as you are not a Catholic, a Catholic shouldn't talk like that, I know.

(Mo is really starting to creep me out, I am going to have to convert her, I think.)

I know that, Gri. Smile But Mary is the closest Christian version of Goddess, so that's why I say she's a face of Goddess. It's hard to explain... But yeah. I know she's human, but she's worshiped by certain religions almost as much as Goddess is worshiped in Egyptian religions, let's say. Sorry if that confused you.

...What? XP I didn't say we believe the same thing, I said that our Gods were the same. In my religion, that's the way it is... We aren't prejudiced towards any other religions, and we believe that every religion is true to a point. I'm not going to bother explaining further because you obviously think your religion is the only true and right way so I know I can't argue with you about that. But we worship the same God as you do, but we also worship a Goddess.

Not a chance, iGri.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/25/2009, 3:37 pm

Haha. That's kinda confusing that you believe in them all Komo! xD

It really depends on the branch of Christianity. No offense to anyone who believes it, but in my Church we talk about how some people worship- well not worship, but that's the only way I could describe it- Mary and how we shouldn't because yes, she was Godly, and she was chosen, but she isn't holy. The only holy things are The Trinity. . . So it kinda all depends on what you believe.
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 3:41 pm

Yeah, except it's not that I believe in them all, exactly... I just believe in the God and Goddess, and I believe that all the other religions are different versions of them. XP

Yeah, exactly. Some people don't worship any version of Goddess, just like some don't worship any version of God. But basically, Goddess is like Mother Earth. I think we've all heard of Her, right? I was just using Mary as an example because she's really the only female figure worshiped in Christianity that I could think of, whether she's Godly or not.
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Post by DreamCatcher81 8/25/2009, 3:49 pm

Oh now I get it. I didn't really understand how you believed in all of them at once 'cuz their mostly conflicting!!! xD
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 3:51 pm

Yeah, I don't exactly agree with the ways of the different religions, but I believe that our rulers could all be the same. XP
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Post by Taylor_Potter 8/25/2009, 4:22 pm

Wow, Komo, that's beautiful! My gosh, I love it! I'd love to have your gift for that kind of stuff.
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Post by Komoda 8/25/2009, 4:23 pm

Aw, really? Thanks so much, Taylor! Smile I really appreciate it.
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