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Ninja Academy - Part 10

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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 1:37 pm

"Breathe...." she whispered quietly.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 1:38 pm

I was starting to gain control over my breathing. I asked her, "Why did you want to kill yourself?"
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 1:40 pm

"I don't know.."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 1:42 pm

I gained control over my breathing now. "See! You don't even know why you did it. I'm not any good. I might as well just die." I got up and smashed my head against the wall again.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 1:43 pm

"No..No... NO! You CAN'T die!! No.. No... No... NO!!!"
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 1:46 pm

I stopped bashing my head against the wall. "Why shouldn't I? You would kill yourself just to get away from me. So why shouldn't I!" I bashed my head against the wall again. "You don't even love me anymore." I bashed my head again and I lost consciousness.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 1:48 pm

She looked away. "But I do love you.." she said quietly, tears streaming down her face again.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 1:53 pm

I lay there in the darkness...lost. There were figures on both sides of me. On one side was Ashke and me underneath our tree. On the other side was Ashke stabbing herslef with the knives. "Why did she even do that? She knows that I can't live with myself if something happens to her. I don't even know if I want to live anymore. Even if I get to be with her." Just as I said this, my parents appeared again. They were standing in front of the bright light. They said, "Come to us. We love you. We won't let anything happen to you." I got up and contemplated what to do. I took step towards my parents. They told me, "That's it! Come to us! We miss you." I took more steps. I was almost there...I was going to finally be with my parents. Then Ashke appeared behind me.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 1:55 pm

"M--Maikeru...?" she asked.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 1:59 pm

My heart melted when she called my name. I turned and looked at her. "I can't be with you anymore. I'm leaving. You need to find someone else who makes you happy. My heart is broken and it can't be repaired. I have to leave." I turned and took another step toward my parents.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:01 pm

She began crying again.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:03 pm

I had made up my mind. I continued to walk. My parents disappeared into the light. I walked until the light engulfed me. All I could see was a bright light all around me. Then I heard it. The dull growl of an animal. I turned to see a tiger that was made out of ice.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:04 pm

((Can you guess what in this spoiler? smug

Spoiler:
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:14 pm

(LOL I was wondering that was the case! You'll see where I'm going with this.)

The ice tiger roared at me. I just stared frozen to the spot. Then it talked. "I'm releaseing you from the curse. The curse is always lifeted once you embrace death. Unfortunately...you're dead and you can't go back."

"I know," I told him. "I'm not going to go back." He lunged at me. I jumped out of the way. "What was that for!" I shouted.

"You still don't get it! You still don't get it do you. You are still alive..just a different person. You're a new being. You can now transform into...well this," He shook his body. "Anytime you want. The curse is broken, and nobody will get hurt around you, because of the curse." I just stared at him. "GO!" He tilted his head toward a hole in the floor. "I'll kill you if you don't go." I walked over to the hole. "One more thing," he said. "Tell Ashke everything. She deserves to know."

"How do you know..." he lunged forward, and headbutted me into the hole.

I jumped off the ground from where I laid. I looked around, and seen Ashke laying on the hospital bed.


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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:21 pm

She lay there, eyes closed.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:23 pm

I walked over to her. "I'm sorry," I said. I leaned down and kissed her.
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:30 pm

((WB))
((What's her reaction supposed to be? XD))
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:30 pm

(Have her slap him! It'll give the scene a more dramatic feel!)
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:33 pm

((O.o))
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:33 pm

(What?)
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((o.O))
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:36 pm

(Listen! Why are you staring at me! Ashke is being kissed by some unknown person. Make her slap him! No apologizing though. She needs to be mad at him!)
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:39 pm

((O.o))
((Twisted Evil Wish Ashke had a knife right now. XD))

"Who the heck, what the heck!?" she exclaimed.

((No slapping yet. no))
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/24/2009, 2:40 pm

I leaned back. "It's me."
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Post by Malicious Nightmares 8/24/2009, 2:42 pm

"Hey, are you sure you've got the right room, and right person? Because I don't understand 'me' when I don't know you."
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