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Ninja Academy - Part 10

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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:30 pm

"I like the name Keitaro. What about you?"
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:31 pm

I smiled. "That's a great name...Keitaro Uchiha."
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:32 pm

"Do you wanna hold him?"
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/26/2009, 4:32 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:"Okay," I told her looking slightly confused. "I'll see you later."


You walk out of the ice cream parlor and head home. Once you are home, you search for those old shoujo mangas you never read. You skim through them and widen your eyes. You've just realized something important.

You are Ligia Vinashi and you are in love.
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:34 pm

"Yes, but you can hold him. I'll hold him later."
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:35 pm

"Are you sure?"
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:36 pm

tigerlyly411 wrote:You walk out of the ice cream parlor and head home. Once you are home, you search for those old shoujo mangas you never read. You skim through them and widen your eyes. You've just realized something important.

You are Ligia Vinashi and you are in love.

I walked home...depressed. My mom and dad said "Hi," but I kept on walking. I went to my bed and sprawled myself out on it. I looked up at the ceiling. I started smiling. On the ceiling...was Ligia's face. My pulse raced and stomach felt like a balloon. Then it hit me...I was in love.


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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:37 pm

"Yes I'm sure. I don't want to take away your time with the baby." I wanted to hold him so bad, but she just went through all that pain. It wasn't fair for me to take him away from her.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:38 pm

"Sasuke, I've been holding him since he was born. I want you to have a turn."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:39 pm

"Are you sure?" I asked her. "You really don't mind?"
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:40 pm

"No, I don't mind. You can hold him if you want."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:42 pm

I went over and picked him up. "Wow. He's even more gorgeous when you hold him." I looked at Brittani. "He's looks so much like you. It's like we cloned you and made him."
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/26/2009, 4:42 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:
tigerlyly411 wrote:You walk out of the ice cream parlor and head home. Once you are home, you search for those old shoujo mangas you never read. You skim through them and widen your eyes. You've just realized something important.

You are Ligia Vinashi and you are in love.

I walked home...depressed. My mom and dad said "Hi," but I kept on walking. I went to my bed and sprawled myself out on it. I looked up at the ceiling. I started smiling. On the ceiling...was Ligia's face. My pulse raced and stomach felt like a balloon. Then it hit me. I was in love.

[I like second person POT, except it sounds forcing xD]

I slid to the floor, hands on my head in distress. So, this was what was happening. But, why all of a sudden? Being a novice at love, I didn't know how to react, what to do. Should...should I tell him? No, no, he'd probably reject me. Should I just wait until he tells me? No...he'd never...What should I do?!?
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:43 pm

"I think he looks like you."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:45 pm

"You think so?" I said returning my gaze back to Keitaro. I kissed his head again. "He's too precious for words. I love you already Keitaro." I kissed his head for the third time.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:46 pm

"I'm so happy he's finally here."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:50 pm

tigerlyly411 wrote:I slid to the floor, hands on my head in distress. So, this was what was happening. But, why all of a sudden? Being a novice at love, I didn't know how to react, what to do. Should...should I tell him? No, no, he'd probably reject me. Should I just wait until he tells me? No...he'd never...What should I do?!?

I just laid there. I sighed heavily. Oh man. When did this happen? I just shook my head. What do I do now? Do I tell her how I feel? Wait! I already did. I started to blush. I completely forgot about that. I groaned/sighed one more time. I wonder what she's doing right now?"

"Me too," I said turning my gaze to Brittani. "Me too."
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:52 pm

"I wish we could just go home today instead of the day after tomorrow."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:54 pm

"I know, but they have to make sure Keitaro is healthy."
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:54 pm

"I know. I hope everything will be ok when we go home."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 4:57 pm

I laughed. "Just calm down. Everything will be fine."
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Post by Epileptic Lies 8/26/2009, 4:57 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:
tigerlyly411 wrote:I slid to the floor, hands on my head in distress. So, this was what was happening. But, why all of a sudden? Being a novice at love, I didn't know how to react, what to do. Should...should I tell him? No, no, he'd probably reject me. Should I just wait until he tells me? No...he'd never...What should I do?!?

I just laid there. I sighed heavily. Oh man. When did this happen? I just shook my head. What do I do now? Do I tell her how I feel? Wait! I already did. I started to blush. I completely forgot about that. I groaned/sighed one more time. I wonder what she's doing right now?"

[Now, I wonder what he said exactly Razz]

I glanced at the phone, ready to pick it up and dial Shika's number. But, I stopped myself. I should probably...just leave him alone for a while. To get my thoughts and feelings straightened out a bit.
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 4:58 pm

itachiphan8823 wrote:I laughed. "Just calm down. Everything will be fine."

"Yeah... I'm tired..."
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Post by itachiphan8823 8/26/2009, 5:01 pm

"Just go to sleep. I'll be fine with him. If I need help, I'll call the nurses."
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Post by Mrs.SasukeUchiha 8/26/2009, 5:02 pm

"All right." I laid down and fell asleep.
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